@@charlesswartchs2665 You spent money to have a hook, the catchiest hardest ear grabbing part of the songz to say, over a filter with 0 energy, chika chika what what, chika what...The lyrical content from the rest of the song has a good message but the delivery was weak. the cadence wqs choppy and hard to listen to. Keep practicing and practicing but please DO NOT buy any beats, lease wav mp3 or exclusive. Do nkt buy any beat do not spend your hard earned money just to release a track like this. Perform something like this in front of people you trust. People who will not lie to you and once they hear you have a good song worth spending money on that people will appreciate, buy the track. Until then. Just keep practicing and save your money. I believe in you
"I go hard like the bass on the drums call me the black panther cuz when I run past ya I leave disaster no natural explaination no fake vibranium it's just me and the mic your ears on the record We can go toe to toe you can have the first Accord But the first verse best be something unheard Play that trap and I'll cut the cord I deserve better I put the faith on you to carry her Hip-hop and rap I placed it on your shoulders"
Hear a joint I like Drop 16 like it’s nothing All these chump niggas got me Out here stuntin Thought they fucked it up Like “I really think this something” Can’t compare to my heat Cause I really keep it bumping Try to keep up I be out here hustlin Snake from the bush You can’t hear that rustling? Sneak ass nigga Take advantage when you slumpin Rob yo whole check Leave yo ass with nuthing
Unfuckable beat. I'm finding it hard to breathe. Fuck is this bruh?! This ain't diamond or platinum. This is out of this fucking world. I'm dead dawg. I'm dead. ☠️💥💣🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
