Essay writing - writing an introduction 

going for my GED at 50 .!!! Wish me luck.

Your video was clear, concise and to the point.

Quick, to the point, and easy to understand - thanks!

This is very useful, straightforward and you used examples from a sentenced you made. This is very helpful.

OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH!! AND ONLY 3 MINUTES!!! AMAZING!!!

I have an essay due in three days. I have no clue where to start. I'm stuck in the introduction. I really don't know how to develop it. I mean, the title itself is already telling people what the essay is going to be about. The introduction just seems to be a longer, more convoluted explanation. The video itself says so: the introduction is the same information written in different words. I suck at dragging things out. This is going to be hard.

Thank you for this good information

Thank's for your works. I think this will useful for many students and other people who want to study English.

Thanks for this video. I like the way how he discusses the topic, it's very clear and it's easy to understand.

Glad you liked it :)

this helped me so much thank you

thank you great information, so much easier when you see it like this

It helps， thank you

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@FreeEnglishOnline Thank you so much for your help

It help me with my life like my work

@MeTriviSlipKlokDriva Sorry you didn't like the voice - we were focussing on making the material clear and easy to follow :) Signed, 'that dude'.

This helped me

Thank you

Some great info here. Thanks

This is helpful thank you.

Good video but very short and should have given an example of essay

Well done. Thank you.

thanks.

he-llo anyways thanks for the information i wish it comes in handy for my test tomorrow

Thanks!

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So close Anagha! Better luck next decade :)

mister swan can I introduce the intro about what im going to write about using commas if the three points significantly are based on the same thing?????

nice, thank you for your auxiliary

who is here during lock down.

:> wow mind has been blown

Hope it helps with your preparations for IELTS :)

Is this essay argumentative?

awesome

Is this an expository essay introduction?

why there's comma after family in the first sentence?

i need help! i have to write an essay on how this myth "ao and po" relates to 21st century and i have no idea how start. any ideas??

awesome thx

Ashley Branson

These are all good tips, except avoid "as will be discussed". As it is apparent the essay continues, the reader does not need to have this pointed out.

Not too bad

Yes! The ao and po is a very cultural myth. It would be great to start of with saying that they killed cows for bone knitting.

This is probably going to be the last comment on this video from this decade (RIP 2010's)

What if older people don’t have children

Thank you lol

Old People