it wouldve looked more real if there was sparkles at the begining of the encounter and sparkles during the summary and if you didnt make the pokedex buzzswole shiny aswell
Good editing, ngl, but you forgot some details, that other people in the comments said, plus, on multiple sites, it doesn't say that it can be shiny, so even if it was flawless, it would still be clear it's fake. Anyhow, good job again for editing