Cool man I definitely couldn't do better but bad criticism helps and I don't think the vocal chops the greatest bit jarrin at times rest was CAF though (cool as fuck)
Definitely something that all new artists should aknowledge, you should always try new stuff, even if it seems weird at first, it can turn out fire and most importantly: its unique. Thats what you've shown today, great work man🔥
For some reason, I hear Knucks and M1llions really doing well on this type of beat. It's fast enough for M1llions to flow on and has that Jazzy-soul sound that suits Knucks so well. i'd seriously send this to both of their managers and to both of them and try and get them to do a song on this! This beat is hard.
Ufffff, you are definitely one uping yourself with each new vid man. I don't use this word often but... This was DIRTY fam. I don't know how managed to make the original snares barely audible. Keep up bro, def going places