Galactic Council Shocked: "So THIS Is A Human Warship!" 

So basically, when 2,3 K fleet meets 55K Dreadnought.

Nice story - but, what I don't like is, that the captain seems to be on a one-man boat pushing every bottom himself, instead of commanding a huge warship with hundrets of crew-members.

The indomitable looks like a super sized Iowa class battleship

I love how this SciFi channel makes Humans scary in the intergalactic future

Aliens find a ship, battered, at sea, with an extremely high kill count: "What is the name of such a powerful human warship, Xulthar"? "The last designation numbers and letters are unreadable. But the log says: USS Enterprise".

See, those aliens had to learn a hard lesson. That lesson is: don't fuck with our boats. You fuck with our boats, bad things are going to happen.

Silly aliens, if God wanted you to live he’d of made you in his image.

I love that the design of the ship and the thumbnail just looks like a sea ship altered for space.

Really liked this story. How much world building done in such a short time builds upon each action and dialogue that speaks volumes of the history and thought behind it. Looking forward to more. Thank you!

Being an alien is one thing the Emperor will not forgive.

This is basically Space Battleship Yamato armed with Star Trek's Multi-phasic photon torpedo's. Also, planets equipped with 'escape pods'? Wouldn't those just be space ships? Then a council ship magically shows up and tells him destroying a few ships is a disproportionate response when these aliens baited him to come here? And on top of that, tell him to stand down or THEY will attack as well? I'm all for HFY stories, but this whole set up seems pretty poorly thought out.

HUMANITY NUMBER 1 BABY!

MAN This Is A Not Just A Story It Is A HIGH GRADE MOVIE! We Need To Have Someone To Turn This Story Into A Real Movie

"Conan, what is best in life?...To crush your enemies, see them driven before you and to hear the lamentations of their women!" -- will this sentiment still rule us after a diaspora into space?

He should have pressed the button!

Really enjoy your stories.

I hope the crew standing on the deck have suits on!!!

Problem with the story i see is in the space combat between 2 ships with different technical level. The more the difference, the quicker the battle. Peacekeeper should snuff the human ship out, unless the captain finds some ingenious way to get them first, or at least disarm them.

alot like the Spacebattleship Yamoto.

I need this as a fucking book series please. That was a good ass story.

A hull of steel and all big guns to serve the fleet, Unrivalled firepower riding the waves to war, A devastating blow will send their foes down below, Fearless armada now bombarding the shore, Light up the night when cannons roar, In fear of nothing, they lead the Navy into war! Unopposed under crimson skies, Immortalised, over time the legend will rise. And their foes can't believe their eyes, believe their size as they fall, And the dreadnoughts dread NOTHING AT ALL!

Great story, it was made very visual and capturing in the way it was told. But I sadly cannot write this very number.

the Indomnitable really gets around...lol this makes the third story it was in and beat the odds....lucky ship

We humans have hit each other with naval warfare so much that it'll be disrespectful if our space navy doesn't dominate in the fights.

HSS better stand for Human Space Ship

He clearly isn't a true Stellaris fan, the obvious choice is to glass the planet. Also, whats the point of everything before that, the diplomatic catastrophe he caused, if he just backs down now?

"Suffer nut the alien to live." After the engagement, Captain Roy has been imprissoned and court martialed for treason against mankind, only barely escaping with his life. A penitent fleet has been sent to hunt down the remaining Hazary of which he was member of. Mankind knew, with the council ship the Peacekeeper destroyed soon the winds of war would blow against Terra and its children once more. But the Hazary would not be part of that storm.

I'm confused they make it sound like he's controlling everything on the ship like there's no crew

Nice work and you have a comfortable voice.

Would be nice if we could see animations, it would make it more cool and interesting to watch

This just sounds like a warhammer 40k ship I think a flag ship would have a run for it money with this one though

Uchuu senkaaaaan YAAAMAAAATOOOOOOO

I think this was a rouge action. He didnt mention other crew and his ship was alone. Pretty sure he took an ship and did this on his own. Redoing the ship with as much automated systems as he could.

Is this chapter in a series, is it based off of a book? I like it

AI makes a really gripping story in a short amount of time and sees humans complain and call for genocide lol not a good look guys

Great story 👍🇬🇧

It looks like a star destroyer mixed with a ww2 battleship

Good story, great voice

Twenty years from now the Hazari return and don't make the same mistake the humans did. They kill every single human to make the universe safe for Hazari.

Great story.. really enjoyed it.

The easiest part of editing this kind of channel is timing the narration to the captions, these are way off.

Ah, Hazari are an actual race in Star Trek...

I dislike when they treat space battles like naval battles or dogfights. Any self respecting spaceship captain should be engaging over billions of miles at least. Without friction or strong gravity there's no reason to engage in close combat at all. Also laser and beam weapons are going to be less attractive than physical ammunition because of diffusion.

Silly councils and their notions of proportion.

Who gave a single person this tech?

eighty eight. i like roy, he’s like me.

What books series is this?

While this human conflict had become typical as Wars are waged against "civilized established" societies like after WW1&2. HOWEVER, ways fought against countries with less "civilized defined" states like Afghanistan, Iraq presents a different type of win/failure so that after the warring factions disperse the conditions for war, uncivilized behavior resume. Afghanistan and Iraq are literally prompted up by the presence of NATO and the puppet government pour I place to accumulate order. Not so for Germany, Japan, South Korea that recognize order and begrudgingly accepted the order imposed by Western structure of that time until their release into independence. Afghanistan, Iraq will never accept Western structured governments and remain ripe for new conflicts, aggression against the West.

Wait till they see the yamato, the humongous water ship

The Hazari are a species from Star Trek Voyager

Why do all the ship look like ancient battleships from WWII?

Why should a spaceship have a hull like a ship on water? The image itself is illogical.

Is this an AI story? Surely sounds like one, since they all follow more or less the same narrative...

Is this from a book?

Which movie ist that?

This one didn't suck at least.

I’m ready

wow that gave me chills. cool story there

Great story 88

can i get the link to this story? i can read faster than this AI reads this out loud

i did subscribe and you tube took everything from you away.

Push the button.

garbage. its like high school levels of filled with uneccesary hyperbole. we have needlefanged mizars and sadistically grinning bloodthirsting captains XD

Voice and text don't match - awfully to follow this

''if roy failed here all colonies doomed yada yada'' no sorry , but having a heap of colonies and this is supposed to be one warship from a previous conflict when humanity destroyed many other systems just... sodding A.I writing! if is it be the sole combat ship left , then there be no colonies left since a ''if we butchered enough'' would have exterminated all colonies not to mention if if humanity struck at multiple other systems in the previous conflict.. it should not the sole ship in their arsenal so him failing when its hinted to be 'op' ..no , contradictory logic cease listening

Bro you use indomitable way too much.

That was a bad story...

overwritten.

Two characters, minimal plot. Big guns. A delight for middle schoolers, but not for me.

Nice told story! Probably it has some flaws and is terran-centered but, it is still entertaining! 88

This story isnt good enough to deserve that background image.

This AI script is flawed and contrary and terrible as fuck

Too many ads and AI voice sucks

Bad writing.

Loved the story. Will be looking into the others. 88

Eighty eight

Personally, I wouldn't have left the enemy flagship intact after the enemy supreme commander said what he said. I also would've towed the peacekeeper warship back to human space, if possible, to reverse engineer the technology

Eighty eight

“You played your hand 12 years ago. You didn’t care what happened to us, you let the Hazari attack and butcher innocent lives on countless colonies… this is what you have sowed Peace keeper. The Hazari wanted war, and We are giving them the war they wanted. If you want to stand in my way… then i pity the children of the countless mothers and fathers aboard your ship”

The only reason they banned that phase cannon is because the council had no answers to it. That's it. They're scared.of what you that ship just did.

Was Roy Adams the only crew of the Indomitable? That was the impression I got. No mention was made of any other crew or officers.

Now... Letting civilians live is understandable. But... You know... Thete is no way in such a situation that the human commander wouldve just left like that. The last thin done before leaving wouldve been to destroy the alien Flagship and take out that alien commander. Just on general principle.

I love the ship. it looks like an old ww2 battleship

10/5/24 ( Friday ) 12.42 am. To be merciful to thy mortal enemy is to be cruel to thyself. Also, to give up on a chance to reverse engineer a superior council ship....In the end, the captain is a failure.

To Ray Taylor, Ref hitting the armrest - It is however a very common and normal human response done in anger, how many times have Kirk and Pickard done the very same thing!🙄👍

Personally, i would have opened with the phase cannon.

Average day in Stellaris when your fleet of 1 million fleet power meets a fallen empire thinking their hot stuff. Or rather their fleet became "hot stuff," radioactive hot stuff.

Ivanova's speach on Death Incarnate comes to mind...

Check out The Lost Fleet by Jack Campbell its basically this but more details as its written by a ex naval officer.

They have us surrounded, those poor bastards.

It would have been more simple just to make their sun go nova.

Hmm…the humans have a wave motion gun…

Novaspark the sun and be done

It took a little over ten minutes to use the phrase “Like a hot knife through butter”. Let’s add a minute or so each story until it’s eliminated entirely.

This is all written by an AI…

Yaaaaaaaa, the human hero lived!!!!!Woo-Hoo!!!!

Better Stories than Hollywoke has turned out in years....

Sounds like a Wave Motion Cannon by a different name.

Where's the link to the original text story, please?

All these stories are the same from here. How many times do we have to listen to someone hitting the arm wrest or the poor console?