Loads of great ideas and vocabulary. Just one point - Inhalation is not the word you meant - it is annihilation! Inhalation is breathing in as to inhale. Think of the Daleks - they wanted to annihilate.
Omg thank you so much!! I was really struggling to get such a high grade as English is not my first language... But I finally got A*s in my descriptive and narrative writing! My work was taken as a sample of my year group, and the examiner told the school that my work was really really good and he was very impressed! So thank you so much for your help! x
I cannot BELIEVE this talent! And, seriously, I have been searching on RU-vid for a peace like this for about one hour. I almost lost my hope but then I found you! Very very helpful! I'm definitely subscribing
This video has been a huge help to me and my coursework. I love the structure of all your videos. You are very intelligent and it shows through your complex vocab and unique advice. You have really helped me in the past to enhance my writing skills and to understand GCSE material. Thank you for taking the time to help young people and students like myself struggling to improve their writing or just needing some advice. Every video is really appriciated so Thank You x
Gee, you are very talented in your writing and tuition! I am a mature student on GSCE English. Do you have specific videos for the (new) 2016/17 course work please?
I have an exam tomorrow for English, which is worth 50% of my grade, and this has honestly helped me so much and your examples are just amazing!!! Wish me luck for tomorrow and thank you :)))
I like the way you decided to use a topic almost everyone would pick, but write a piece almost no one would. I'm sure the stereotypical story plot would be someone doing something wrong and learning a lesson through the experience, but then your story took a huge twist on the word and was nothing like the cliché plot. I'll remember to do same in my paper today ☺️💪🏾
The English Teacher it did! It wasn't like Beryl in paper 1 😂 I don't know if you've heard of Beryl, the most hated parrot by English IGCSE students worldwide
Just remember in your exam! Instead of using the other words the words Jugs give the character more effect and that's were you will pick up some more of those shining marks
Thanks sir this really helped me. In one of my coursework in english i got a D. Can u please tell me how I can improve. I liked your video and I subscribed you. Please do more videos like this.
Hi, I have done a young iconoclasts piece of writing and I'm not sure how to get a more wider range of punctuation into it. Would you mind taking a look at it ?
Hi English Teacher! Firstly, thank you for these incredible videos :) Secondly, I'm having my year 10 English Language exam tomorrow, and I was wondering, regarding a topic such as "Describe an important decision that you have made and explain what happened as a result" - would including creativity be advised or not? I understand that answering these questions should resemble a magazine article, or a newspaper piece but my writing is usually a bit different, would that affect my grade?
alltimelojain It is something you want to do. think about the list of A* skills- they are the same for both tasks. this means that you want to use imagery, great vocabulary and flair. So yes, try to write in an imaginative way that will engage your reader.
The English Teacher Thank you so much for answering so quickly. I was worried that I had posted my comment a bit too late. Again, thank you. I'll make sure to show off all the writing skills I possess once I take my exam. Keep doing what you do, it's tremendously appreciated!
Excellent video for creative writing !!!! I have these two questions: Does creative writing tell a story? The second ,what is the difference between creative and descriptive writings?
Hamayon Faisal Creative writing does indeed tell a story. Descriptive writing focusses more on exploring a scene, whereas creative writing can also just be a story
In a GCSE English Language paper would you still get marked for writing a story that was realistic and engaging but you didn’t use any of the topics given.
Thank you for this great video. I love it. I would just like your help on one thing- i am writing a narrative story on an orphan can you please give me some sentence ideas (like how to start or end).
Hi i am a student in year 10, i recently finished my year 10 controlled assessments and did very poorly in one of them. Is there a chance that i may be able to retake the assessments in year 11. Thank you
The correct teacher answer is that you should always look to pass the exam the first time around. However, if you are 16 you can retake the your English GCSE, but you will have to do that in sixth form or college
+General AbdifaTah Mahad It means you describe without making it obvious (the reader has to infer). For instances, rather than saying the weather is awful, describe it in a negative manner. I hope that clarifies everything for you.
somebody told me that u should not supernatural in your narrative essay. is it right ? I love writing horror stories and I was kind of disheartened after hearing it.
+TET - I have watched many English GCSE tutorials over the past 6 x months. Yours are definitely within the top five. And I am very critical. I would change nothing whatsoever in your methods and presentation. Great stuff!
yo. wish me luck too, I got english exam next week. ! language and ! literature. How do you get perfect marks for literature questions like a Christmas carol?
