I'm sorry guys but I didn't plan a part 2 if you want one can you give me some ideas?!?also I am not from TikTok someone stole my video and posted it on TikTok stop asking me if I'm from TikTok because im not it's annoying
Wth dont be mean maybe in the future you will be lesbain to oh and being a lgbtq is not a curse idiot , i am not mean , im just tryna protect what i am , soo ppls be proud of what you are ✊💙💚💛🧡💜🖤
Even know i'm christian i'm not tryna be mean or rude to lgbt just because they are like that dose not mean we should hate them idiot Btw i'm not boy I use my dad phone
I just can't understand how some ppl go out of their way to hurt others for the things they don't have but the other person has. I remember just a week ago I was jealous of everyone but I caused no harm to anyone and now the thing I wanted I'm about to get ,I feel so ashamed of myself for that but now to be honest I have taken inspiration from the ppl I was jealous of and I'm proud of myself for pulling myself out of being a toxic person
hey same here i got bullied so much irl and online it made me think i was ugly but now that i found how i want to dress and now i dont crare what ppl say
I LOVE YOUR STYLE DUDE you put so much detail into colors and clothes it shows and makes the story 10x more enjoyable I love how the outlines are not all just black and you use different outfits and eyes etc !!
@@n0t4m34 advice: try to upload frequently or have a decent upload schedule, the youtube algorithm will wreck your channel if you dont upload much or arent consistent in uploading-
you have given me so many ideas. -improve one of the relationships and focus on that one solely, maybe on how that romantic relationship affects their platonic ones -expand on the trauma from her childhood, and show a storyline of how she combats her mistrust of people (therapy is often underused in mini-movies despite being an important part of recovery irl, so I recommend that) -expand on the fact that she had a lot more trauma than shown, while many people have little confidence you need to be rather messed up from something to make you rather wear a paper bag over your head than show your face -introduce a new antagonist. while some stories can flourish without someone trying to stop the happy ending, it usually makes a story better. -maybe in part 2 make the antagonist a little more willing to sabotage themselves just to humiliate the main character (I don't actually remember her name I'm sorry) -maybe make one of the friends go through an illness that severely detriments their ability to function properly (loss of sight, partial body paralysis, struck by lightning and barely survives but has to undergo surgery and they have a few scares of losing their close friend) -maybe a few scenes at the end to show their adulthood If you actually reply, I wouldn't mind helping with some of the finer details, but I think this is good for now :)
@@-llonleykarll-556 aha... I'm the imaginative one... skilled? not so much. I had this series going called hybrids, one of the episodes might still be up. so, I had a whole plan to make it into a secret lab but eventually got bored of making something that I was unhappy with the quality. I started ep 3, but then got unmotivated from looking over the episode and seeing how fast-paced and hard-to-keep-with up it was
Note: This is all my opinion, don't take it seriously unless you want to. I really do love this GCMM. The bully isn't shallow or just used as a plot device and is given a personality, and the views and ideals of the bully are understandable. In my opinion, she was one of the best characters in the story. To me, the main character was a pretty well-written character, but she didn't have many flaws and didn't seem that realistic to me, and I think that almost all the characters having a crush on her was a bit excessive. The plotline wasn't amazing, but it was interesting enough to keep me watching until the end. Again, this is all my opinion, so feel free to ignore this.
Yes I respect your opinion ofc! but I have to disagree with one part- I don’t think it was excessive since they all kind of liked her since she was so pretty and kind. Ofc this is just my opinion haha
Yeah I think so too, the bully was pretty well written but It doesn’t make sense If she doesn’t wanna show her face, just by being bullied from one person, unless she has big anxiety or something like that
I agree with you opinion, this was a really good GCMM. With the whole crush thing tho, I don’t think they all had a big crush like the blonde girl, everyone probably just thought she was really cute and blushed. Just my opinion
Well, like I said in another comment, I don’t quite agree. Her flaws would definitely be things like being overly sensitive and having massive anxiety. Both are demonstrated many times throughout the story. I also think it was kinda cute everyone had a crush on her because it showed her just how beautiful the rest of the world saw her in comparison to her view of herself-inside and out.
Girls I just wanna say ...ur bootiful how you are don’t say ur ugly and things like that . ur pretty ❤️✨ People are just jealous of you just wanna say that 😌 and one more thing bye beautiful,s ✨❤️✨❤️✨
Heyo, not hate, but I just want to share my opinion on this mini movie so you can improve you're future ones. Btw I never made mini movies, but I just know how someone could improve their storyline and such. So, I really like the idea of this, but you could have made it better. You made the main character act like some perfectionist, she has no flaws except a weak mind. When I say that is because when she got told she was ugly, she grew up with it and never forgot it. Most people would most likely move on from it, especially younger children. And you're kind of taking it somewhere else with the paper bag. The mother letting her do that, not taking her anywhere for that mental problem, not talking her out of it and just accepting her covering her face just shows the mother won't do anything to help the child, she just goes along with it even though she disagrees with the action. Also making them all have a crush on her? Tbh, it was unnecessary. I mean, having only one attracted would be better. And I will say this from my perspective, the bully would be the best main character in this story, she has flaws, her insecurity on her looks as a child made her upset when she saw others look better than her, causing her to become a more terrible person as she grew up, and the fact she acts this way makes it seem like there is something going on with her gaurdians(parents, grandparents, etc). Make your characters have flaws such as anger issues, too carefree that they aren't taking care of what they are supposed to take care of, and so on. Your main character is a Mary Sue (Definition: a type of female character who is depicted as unrealistically lacking in flaws or weaknesses). I suggest writing scripts or a summary of the story you have in mind before doing the actual thing. If you did, I suggest dividing it into smaller areas for the problem of the story and other necessities for a good story such as the ending and the solutions, stuff you learned in Elementary about reading books. If you read it, congrats! You are actually willing to try improving your channel instead of ignoring it like most youtubers who think they are amazing and spectacular because of their subcounts. *You can only improve if you can take criticism as an opportunity rather than an insult.*
@@isuckatmakingvideos469 You don't have to apologize about this, you have great talent for ideas, if you keep this up and keep learning more along the way, I won't be surprised to see you getting to the top with other amazing content creators.
@@isuckatmakingvideos469 but i like it when lots of people like the main character so i dont know who she'll be with and i can develop ships no matter if they get smashed at the end or not, its fun!😁
The story is really good. I love the characters are so cute!! Also I love your tast in music. Melanie Martine has good songs. I listen to here a lot. Anywas keep up the great work!!
amazing, the cuteness, the colours, the characters, the ships, the details, i can see you put lots of effort. Rating this 1-10, it would be 100000, I mean it. And why did you have to make it so cuteeee, its like so cute- TwT
hey, the usage of the r-word at 4:43 isn't good, 1. it's a slur, 2. it was used as a way to insult someone, which is the worst way to use that word. unless you are disabled or neurodivergent, you shouldn't use that word, even if you are, it's still rather frowned upon.
Almost all the characters like her lol- anyway this was as amazing as always, I ship her with the "best friend girl "? I forgot her name lol- have a nice day to whoever is reading this
"I feel jealous,the way all my friends love you,the way he protected you....i know im just a brat,but..im jealous..i always wish i were you...im sorry..:)"
