GKS (KGSP) | SOP (Goal of Study & Study Plan) Feedback Day 3

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GKS (KGSP) | SOP (Goal of Study & Study Plan) Feedback Day 3
#kgsp #gks #globalkoreascholarship
In this video, I am going to tell you what you should write for your goal of study and study plan. This is not the place to show the reviewers how many terms you know. But this is the place where you tell them why you became interested in the field and what you will do to improve your knowledge both academically and professionally.
If you want to improve your goal of study and study plan, you should definitely watch today’s video and make sure to not skip it.
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1. Grammar Check*
- Spelling mistakes + typos
- Grammar + punctuation
*Our experienced native speakers of English and Korean will provide you with this service.
2. Feedback
- Sentence clarity
- Relevance of context
- Mr. College Concierge’s insight & advice
3. Proofreading (1. Grammar Check ➕ 2. Feedback)
4. Document Screening*
- Tailored feedback for GKS (KGSP) application
- Our goal is to make your GKS (KGSP) application documents organized neatly, ready for submission after the service, and ultimately desired by the GKS (KGSP) selection committee.
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**Please send us your personal statement or statement of purpose in Word format
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@shriibk 2 года назад

waiting for this video!! i would also like to let you know that i followed each step mentioned by you for contacting professors & i've got 8 replies from different professors till now. thank you mr daniel!

@MrCollegeConcierge 2 года назад

Wow, you are so popular! Keep up the great work and thanks for watching!

@user-fn1pm2qh3y 2 года назад

How did you talked to them?

@shriibk 2 года назад

@@MrCollegeConcierge thank you so much!! i'll always be grateful for your existence :)

@shriibk 2 года назад

@@user-fn1pm2qh3y i emailed them

@PS-uq8qe 2 года назад

Hi! Did you apply for undergraduate?

@roufaydasaidi6330 2 года назад

Thank you so much Daniel these videos have been extremely helpful! And please don't forget to take care and stay healthy and safe ^^

@vilomaxstudio1971 2 года назад

Thank you so much for the review I'll make sure to do all the changes you suggested.

@rere1911 2 года назад

Finallyyy! Actually I'm stuck at study of goals part. Thank you so much for making this video

@harrysyatria828 2 года назад

finally, we're always waiting for your videos sir, Thank you very much

@PS-uq8qe 2 года назад

This was so needed. Thankyou so much😊 it will definitely make the struggle a little easier for me 🙃

@jericolukebejoco5507 2 года назад

I can't wait to be part of GKS sir Daniel. I will give all my best based on your guide and help ! 💟

@Yurii911 2 года назад

Nice to see to you again Mr. Daniel 😀

@facticianfact2525 2 года назад

Great video sir

@shwetanamdeo6281 2 года назад

Thank you so much sir Daniel. 안내해주셔서 정말 감사합니다.

@MrCollegeConcierge 2 года назад

My pleasure!

@auliashafakamila5602 2 года назад

Yayy finally! Thank you for reviewing my study plan sir, your feedback is really helpful. I will definitely work more on my study plan to improve it. Thank you, sir!

@MrCollegeConcierge 2 года назад

Lucky you! Good luck!

@ShiniArt 2 года назад

Hi Kamila, Did you also mentioned in your PS how did you become interested in your major? or you only wrote it in you Study Plan?

@shinichi7357 2 года назад

A very informative video. A lot ambiguity was cleared regarding how to write and outstanding study of plan. I will be Applying as a GKS-U applicant for the year 2022. Thank you for your efforts for us!

@anshikat296 2 года назад

I am waiting for this video

@masoomehsasani801 Год назад

you are amazing. thank you.

@Gratia1819 2 года назад

thank you so much!!! I will try to apply for the master degree next year. wish me luck!

@satanlucifer13 2 года назад

Finallyyy!!! I knw you were going to post this video on 12th of August still I used to come here daily to check if there are any updates. You really are trying your best Sir♥️ Thank You So Much and yes plsss be safe♥️✨

@kritykalita3824 2 года назад

Listen na do you know how to register in sakshat portal for gks ? As in India we cant directly send documents to embassy....please tell me if you know

@yasiiic7890 2 года назад

Your videos are sooooo useful you r saving my life😍😍😍😍😍tnx a lottt pls make more💟

@bobbypark8415 2 года назад

구독자 1만 가즈아!

@MrCollegeConcierge 2 года назад

가즈아! 🤩

@anittaantony4266 2 года назад

My sir is back 🥳🥳🥳

@user-fn1pm2qh3y 2 года назад

We missed you Sir 🥺💖

@nurara6462 2 года назад

i am happy with this video, give me example about study plan and make a better one of my study plan

@stevetech7214 2 года назад

These feedback videos are indeed precious for prospective applicants, sir. You're saving us as always! Btw, I'm afraid I had something confusing for me to ask. In undergraduate application form, there are input fields for high school grades per each year from 1st year to 5th year. However, in my country, Myanmar, it takes only 10 years to complete high school, and the final year is when we take the matriculation exam to graduate. I was wondering whether or not it's okay to only fill my matriculation exam grades in there, because it's pretty difficult for me to collect official grades of prior years, which I also suppose is not as important as the matriculation grades. I've searched about it in the guidelines and online forums, but I'm still confused.

@Imacutebanygirl 2 года назад

Awesome 👍 pls make more

@MrCollegeConcierge 4 месяца назад

I sure will! 👍🏻

@VidadEllla 2 года назад

I love your videos they help me a lot tnks🛐

@harithaev3527 2 года назад

Thank you sir 💜💜

@sakshishete744 2 года назад

Thanks

@pjmly90613 2 года назад

Thanku so much sir 🙇🙇🙇🙇 for your guidance now I will try my best to make a good sop 🙇🙇🙇🙇🙂😊

@sainikaharsha 2 года назад

Resently I knew about the kgsp program for undergraduate study. and I thought this program will become an apportunity for me to become an kgsp asperant . kindly thanking you for sharing your thoughts and knowledge and hope as soon as possible I will able to meet you 🙏🙏😀

@sainikaharsha 2 года назад

And it's my honor , able to study in Republic of Korea 🇰🇷

@pjmly90613 2 года назад

I have to write it but am very confuse and stressed for how can I write it better but your video is coming I will follow your guide and will see and work on my mistakes Thankyou very much sir for your guidance.

@rr-sl8uc 2 года назад

Thank u so much for the video sir .Can you plz tell that do I have to write two study plans if I choose two different majors ?

@withnegar8754 2 года назад

thank you for the video sir. Can't we write about our experiences about the applying major in the background part of personal statement ? (undergraduate)

@kritykalita3824 2 года назад

Gamsahabnida sir for your videos...I always check if any video has came or not...nd yea....your Robotic voice...luv it....Robot Daniel....😊😊😊😊😁😁😄

@MrCollegeConcierge 2 года назад

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@kritykalita3824 2 года назад

@@MrCollegeConcierge luv you sir

@gorkhekoreanschool6445 2 года назад

plz make video about research plan

@sushi_3606 2 года назад

Sir, first of all, I appreciate you for making informative videos. Secondly, It will be valuable if you can tell in the study plan is it good to write point-wise or in paragraph format? 🙏🙏

@MrCollegeConcierge 2 года назад

I already explained it in my feedback videos!

@ghostkook7702 2 года назад

Hello sir! I really love your videos you are doing such a great job helping students applying for gks ! 💜💜 Sir, I have a question.. I have done many extracurricular activities including science projects,sports and music events but I don't have any certificate of it only medals and some trophies I don't have because it was a group activity so can I mention these in my personal statement???

@elisainkorea 2 года назад

Hello ! Thank you so much for your videos! They're helping me a lot and your feedbacks are always really interesting ! ps: internship is possible, i know someone who did one during her master's degree with GKS :)

@sarasadeghi6663 Год назад

What about bachelor is approperiate to mention internship???

@monicajogi8486 2 года назад

Thanks for your guidelines! I was finding someone who can guide me through gks I just missed my graduate application in feb so may be next year I will apply but I have a doubt can I do master in fashion designing?

@betrue7130 2 года назад

Waiting for this vedio 🤩 Sir i want to ask a qu'es to you If you don't mind 👉👈 Sir i know this scholarship is so popular and have soo many benefits but I want to ask is this is safe for young girls because they don't know what to do after arriving in korea as many of the young girls go abroad for the first time and alone I hope you don't mind and reply me Thank you in advance sir ❤️

@Red-ve7qr 2 года назад

SIR, MAKE A VIDEO ABOUT UNDERGRATUATE RESEARCH PROGRAMS

@yasiiic7890 2 года назад

Pls make more

@MrCollegeConcierge 4 месяца назад

I will! ☺️

@ssaroj1569 2 года назад

Good evening

@musicalhealers3550 2 года назад

Sir can you please tell which entrance exam scores are considered for a student applying for life science UG through GKS Or only 12th results are considered

@adityamoza2425 2 года назад

Thank you for the video! I had a question: The deadline for submitting the high school graduation certificate is in March but in India, students graduate high school in June. Will have I have to wait for September 2022 application or can I apply this year (September 2021) for GKS U?

@musicalhealers3550 2 года назад

Sir can you please tell which entrance exam scores are considered for a student applying for life science UG through GKS Or only 12th results are considered ?

@ranipatel2283 2 года назад

Sir do we have to include our university names in sop or study plan

@kydyraliyevaulpan3252 Год назад

Thank you so much for helping with the application process. I am applying for GKS-U this year and finished my Personal Statement & Study Plan. In the video, you mentioned that internships through GKS are not allowed. Could you elaborate, please, because I am a bit confused? For example, Pusan National University provides internships for students in companies such as Apple, UN (in a global studies major) and I have included that in my study plan. Do you mean GKS scholars are not eligible to participate in them? Should I delete that part?

@ShiniArt 2 года назад

Thank you so much sir! You're videos help a lot ❤️✨ Sir I have a question. If I'm studying in a University (in 3rd year), but for some reasons in my country I cannot continue studying there, that's why I want to Study the same Major with GKS. Should I talk about my process with the university or not? (I have gratuated from school 4 years ago, so I don't know if I have to explain this gap in my personal statement. I also studied English, and started working as a private teacher in english (but without certification). What should I do?

@craftideas4062 2 года назад

Sir Can I write my study plan like semester wise, listing all the courses I will be taking? Or should I write it in paragraph form? (I have written goal of study in paragraph form and study plan in point form (like Valarie).

@celdapalma8493 2 года назад

Hello! I just want to respectfully ask if the study plan should also be within TWO pages as well? Or we can exceed that? Your response will be highly appreciated. Thank you!

@chanchaljangid_28 2 года назад

Sir is we have to courier our documents or mail to the university ? Please Reply

@sia0631 2 года назад

Thank you so much for all your efforts sir! It's been a great help for preparing my documents. I have a question (I have read and understood the GKS-U 2021 guidelines really well, I just want to confirm it ) Due to cancellation of board exams in my country we had a really random result where I was expecting my grades to be above 90%, but I only got 79.2 (the least in my entire life till now, when I saw the results I really lost all hopes) But there is one more criteria of being in top 20 in my class if someone has low grades.(I fall under this criteria) I JUST WANT TO ASK WILL I BE CONSIDERED AS AN ELIGIBLE APPLICANT OF GKS-U 2022 (BACHELOR'S DEGREE)? (I want to persue MEDIA AND COMMUNICATION for my BA) THANK YOU!

@user-fc7nu3nn8h 2 года назад

Calculate your high school average and if they are above 80% I think you’re still eligible, like calculate the average of grade 10 &11 and 12 together.

@kalyanimenon460 2 года назад

Hii Sir, actually topik has been cancelled this year in my country due to covid.but I had been learning for it, so is there any other way in which I can show that I do know a level of Korean to increase my chances of getting selected? Thank u so much for ur dedication to help us sir ❤️ I had been waiting for this vid , but during the premiere tym my classes were going on 😕 , so now was when I finally got to watch it .

@meriemikhlasgueribis8164 2 года назад

Can you please tell me from where you prepared your test ?

@zabby9174 2 года назад

Good day, sir! First of all I'm very thankful for having you here, giving us advices on how to be a GKS scholar. Sir,I'm determined to apply for Undergraduate Degrees next year. I'm on my last year in Senior High School now and will be finish by March or April 2022. I heard that the application for this scholarship will start early in September this year. I just want to know if I could apply already when the application starts? I am really confused about Certificate of High School Graduation (or expected graduation certificate) because we just started our class this month. I already look carefully the guidelines but I really can't understand. I hope you would see this. Thank you so much.

@l307anjalichavan5 2 года назад

You can apply if you have expected graduation certificate for 2022 in September 2021

@ayasofia2849 2 года назад

thanks a lot for the videos!! i would like to apply in Korean major for graduate degree, but the problem is i don't graduate from Korean major and only have Topik 2 because of pandemic all is cancelled.. Could you give me some tips please?

@meriemikhlasgueribis8164 2 года назад

Thank you, The video was so informative. I would like to ask you what you mentioned about mentioning the university chosen, Is it the first choice university of my GKS application or the one I am attending in my country? And may I mention all the 3 universities chosen or just the top one? Thank you in advance 😊

@MrCollegeConcierge 2 года назад

You can just focus on what you want to study when writing an sop.

@angelicemman5821 2 года назад

I'm looking forward to apply for graduate program after completing my bachelor's degree. But, I'm a bit afraid as... I've heard that they'll give priority to science and engineering students and my major is filmmaking so I think my chances would be low. Anyways, I'll try to work hard. And yeah, Thank you so much for informative videos. You keep me motivated :)

@MrCollegeConcierge 2 года назад

Don't lose your hope! You can do it with me!

@yos877 2 года назад

Sir is it okay to tell the reason why i changed major from science to social in the motivation letter instead of goals of study? Thankyouu

@millisingh3234 2 года назад

Sir egarly waiting for your all videos ☺️ thank you so much for sir for guiding me to make my dream come true 😄 and I wanna ask that if I know korean language is it a plus point for gks scholarship ?

@MrCollegeConcierge 2 года назад

Of course!

@millisingh3234 2 года назад

Thank you so much sir

@KIARA-cn1tg 2 года назад

In study plan we have to write everything about semester???

@sarahmin_ 2 года назад

Sir i have doubt in notoraization of certificates where we should do that? Only in embassy and foreign ministry or with any government official?

@prernakhichi1515 2 года назад

As for embassy track do we have to prepare 4 different envelope like 1 for embassy and the other 3 for universities

@rayyan917 2 года назад

It will be quite helpful if you respond, Am i supposed to tell my recommenders to put all 4(1org and 3 photocopies) in a single envelope or 4 different envelopes??

@Abc-fw3zc 2 года назад

For embassy tract, 4 different envelope

@anshika8639 2 года назад

Sir is it nessasacry to put certificates of extra criculam can we just instead mention no. of certificates we got ?

@dibyasanjana7831 2 года назад

Sir I heard that the admission committee usually does not accept nursing students application ,does they ? As in the available departments of gks the nursing major is mentioned so I choosed

@sakhikundu1778 2 года назад

I really appreciate your effort to help us. I had one query. Is TOEFL home edition results accepted for GKS-U?

@MrCollegeConcierge 2 года назад

You should ask the embassy or university where you apply.

@muqaddasmumtaz4239 2 года назад

Kindly guide the candidates about gks applicant agreement.

@sunset5ae 2 года назад

I would like to ask what's better embassy track or through university?what are the advantages in university track?cause im planning to be on jniversity track

@onniejessie 2 года назад

I have a question. Why do we write about how we became interested in a certain major if it's about the goal and plan of our studies? We are given a very short space to write goal of study/study plan and if I waste writing about how I became interested and stuff like this, I won't have enough place to write about my study plan.

@Carlos-iy3hm 2 года назад

Excuse I'm in my last year of highschool and left with a few months before I write my final examinations soo when applying for the GKS do I have to wait for my results to be out or I can just apply

@user-po4ls8em8f 2 года назад

Thank you a lot for those useful and helpful videos. I heard that in Uzbekistan we must have minimum TOPIK 3 for applying to Embassy track. Is it right?

@MrCollegeConcierge 2 года назад

Not that I know of. You should ask the Korean embassy!

@user-po4ls8em8f 2 года назад

@@MrCollegeConcierge Thank you

@priscillacudjoe53 2 года назад

Can you please do a video for undergraduates

@MrCollegeConcierge 2 года назад

Already did!

@The_JourneyBegins_-_ 2 года назад

Sir I have a question, in department of political science and diplomacy what subjects are taught????

@kritykalita3824 2 года назад

Sir is it true that in India we can't send our documents directly to embassy?.. is it true that we have to send it too first Indian government and Indian government further give names too korean embassy????

@jina673 2 года назад

Daniel Sir, Do I have to notarize every single document including all forms (application,SOP,study plan, medical assessment,applicant agreement,etc)

@sunstarxx 2 года назад

No, not every document.

@vennyarviana4825 2 года назад

Hello Sir! Greetings from Indonesia. My name is Venny and I would like to ask a little bit. If my desired uni allows me to not get research track for graduation, is it okay if I choose and write it in my SOP? Thanks in advance.

@satbeerkaur703 2 года назад

Sir I have some questions regarding the undergraduate course. I am from India , over here we have our finals during the end of March but from the form perspective we have to submit our results of +12, but we receive our results during June. So sir can you suggest or help about this situation. It will help us alot.

@jadeisip8360 2 года назад

Hello Sir Daniel. Can I ask why international students aren't allowed to have internships? I may or may not have missed this in the 2022 GKS-U Guidelines. THank you

@kydyraliyevaulpan3252 Год назад

I am also confused with this part;( I've never heard this information before and my personal mentor (GKS scholar) said it's good to include

@jadeisip8360 Год назад

@@kydyraliyevaulpan3252 is there by any chance that your mentor is Ace Apolonio?

@debanshisahu9732 2 года назад

Sir i can just simply notarize my documents from any lawyer or i have to apostille it (sticker from Ministry of External Affairs)... i have this small doubt hopefully you will reply me

@faridamusabadaru2818 2 года назад

Good day sir. I would like to ask. What if we applied for the scholarship before and wasn't accepted can we still use some of the things we wrote in our old form for the new one

@sunstarxx 2 года назад

Yes

@rere1911 2 года назад

Sir I want to ask. Can we put the same information in personal statement and study plan?

@MrCollegeConcierge 2 года назад

Not a good idea.

@dibyasanjana7831 2 года назад

Really waiting for this sir. Please do a video about grades, transcripts. Do we need to translate the award certificates since I have some State level and national level certificates whose titles are written in English but the meanings are according to Indian language and some are also written in Indian languages.

@kritykalita3824 2 года назад

Listen na do you know how to apply in sakshat portal? Because in India we cant directly contact to korean embassy so third first select the candidates for gks...please reply me if you know

@dibyasanjana7831 2 года назад

@@kritykalita3824 I don't know about it but why you want ?

@kritykalita3824 2 года назад

@@dibyasanjana7831 bcz I want to apply for gks.

@dibyasanjana7831 2 года назад

@@kritykalita3824 so I think no need to apply in sakshat portal . You have just send your documents to the address that embassy will tell

@kritykalita3824 2 года назад

@@dibyasanjana7831 but I saw some videos where if you are applying for embassy track u first need to register youself in sakshat .Then mhrd will select candidate and the names of selected candidates will given to korean embassy.

@whiteseoltang5773 2 года назад

Thank you for the informative video! I've read the 2021 guidelines and university information and requirements but I would like to know if IELTS indicator (computer based) results are considered valid by the NIIED since we don't have in-person paper based IELTS (or TOPIK) due to the pandemic. There is a lot of unclear information surrounding IELTS indicator and I wanted to know if I should take an indicator test or not.

@ElenasAnimalKingdomAdventures 2 года назад

you can try and contact the university of your choice about it they will tell you if they accept computer-based tests

@whiteseoltang5773 2 года назад

@@ElenasAnimalKingdomAdventures thank you for answering! I tried doing that but they replied saying they follows NIIED's rules so I was a bit confused.

@ElenasAnimalKingdomAdventures 2 года назад

@@whiteseoltang5773 based on the GKS guidelines language proficiency tests are optional so you can just not add it many of the universities I contacted said they don't take the home edition into consideration

@sristiriya1228 2 года назад

Sir I have a question ... Can I get Business School through GKS program ???

@weshahkhater9353 2 года назад

In the section of the study plan and goal plan should I mention the three university that I will apply for or should mention on of them ?

@Green_Levi 2 года назад

Thank you so much for this video... I have some doubts.. Right now I'm doing BSc nursing in my country... & I'm planning to do msc nursing from s. korea through GKS .. is it possible? & After doing my msc nursing in s.korea am I eligible to give the nursing license exam?

@shiwaniojha208 2 года назад

hi! actually, I have a question... the thing is that in my country there are only two years of high school with two-semester per year but the application form has 5 years of high school with three semesters per year.. so my question is how should I fill the form?

@junkookwrecker674 2 года назад

I'm in 12th class now, as in 2021. I'm expected to finish highschool in March, right? But as you know, we get the certificate by May or June. And according to the guidelines, I've to submit the certificate by 1st March, 2022. What should I do? Please answer my question.

@asterali9836 2 года назад

Sir, are there any way that the committee might judge my application based on the superiority of the subject of major? In any way would they prefer engineering or more reputational subject? Would my choice of major work as a catalyst on my chance to recieve the scholarship?

@explorewithshivangi1010 2 года назад

Hello sir, I want to know one thing that how to read reaserch paper of the professor's of my major... Please reply🙂

@meghasah7304 2 года назад

sir if we have study in Korea through GKS Scholarship then after completing that we can apply for a job over there??

@MrCollegeConcierge 2 года назад

Yes, you can.

@killergirl5204 2 года назад

Sir can you tell me can i do any aviation releted courses through KGSP?????????

@pabasaraa8452 2 года назад

sir, Im grade 12 student . we haven"t any exams because of covid 19. then what we do when we apply to kgsp and about gpa

@anshika8639 2 года назад

Is it nessasacry to be in extra-circulam activities

@limyena98 3 месяца назад

Sir, thank you for all your videos. I have a question. I will apply for master's degree. Should I talk about why I studied X in undergrad in personal statement or goals of study plan?

@MrCollegeConcierge 3 месяца назад

If that's necessary, go ahead.

@andrekurniadinata1456 2 года назад

Sir, I wanna ask, is it okay if we write our personal statement only within two pages for undergraduates?

@MrCollegeConcierge 2 года назад

Yes.

@ezylynn8394 2 года назад

Hello sir, Your video is very informative But I'm here to clear my doubt, hope you reply I'm currently in class 12 and I'm among the top 5 students of my class My final percentage for class 11 is 75.5% I belong from an English Medium school I've other achivements too, in fields of arts and dance But due to covid we'll have our boards on two terms First will be conducted on the month of November and as per the CBSE official website we'll get our results on the same day of examination only And the second term of boards will be conducted on March So can I apply for KGSP in this coming September for Associate Degree for 2022??

@meriemikhlasgueribis8164 2 года назад

Sadly the gks undergraduate program is not available for algerian applicants, I can wait until graduating and apply for master but I hoped if I can have chance to start studying from my first year of bachelor. I want to ask If I can apply for bachelor degree from university directly without gks ? And is it a good choice and has benifits for me as internships,..?