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The bar chart used in this video is from Cambridge IELTS 12 Test 7 Writing Task 1.
The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
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0:00 introductory paragraph
04:06 overview paragraph
05:50 details paragraph 1 - important data
08:11 details paragraph 2 - less important data
10:26 entire essay
10:35 key takeaways

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@Owen-nzrd
@Owen-nzrd Год назад
Hi Lilie really thank u for your great video , just got my 7 today ! Your video is the most useful resources .
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
Wowww, that's great news! You got a 7 for writing? What's your overall score?
@Owen-nzrd
@Owen-nzrd Год назад
@@LilieIELTS L8.5 R7.5 W7 S7 overall 7.5😄
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
@@Owen-nzrd These are really amazing scores. Wish you a bright future ahead!😊
@feruzanamozova172
@feruzanamozova172 Год назад
It is hard to believe that she got 7 in writing. She couldn't even write these sentences correctly.
@Owen-nzrd
@Owen-nzrd Год назад
@@feruzanamozova172 It’s not an exam
@ghostunderyourbed1045
@ghostunderyourbed1045 Год назад
Lilie!!! You're a gem! Thank you so much!!! Because of you, I could get 6.5 in writing by preparing just in a week. And overall, it's 7. Let me tell you, people around me had their education in English medium, so I was always much sceptical about my English proficiency level. I was too tensed, but I saw all the videos from your channel, followed exactly what you told, and I'm happy with the result I got. Thank you so so so much! Please keep helping students like us. We're really really grateful for your efforts.
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
That's really amazing! Wish you a bright future ahead!😊
@_softaetae_
@_softaetae_ Год назад
How did you prepared only in a week?? I have exam next week...I don’t know what to do with my writing test😭
@ghostunderyourbed1045
@ghostunderyourbed1045 Год назад
@@_softaetae_ hey! Don't get stressed. I'm providing some tips which have helped me to get 6.5(ik it's not much 😂, but achievable in a week of preparation ) 1) Read the problem statement carefully, like read it at least 2-3 times to fully understand and grasp the concept of the problem statement. 2) Stick to the problem statement. Look for what is EXACTLY asked in the problem statement. 3) As you fully understand the problem statement, write down the important points which you think you should elaborate in the paragraphs, somewhere with pencil, erase it once you'll be done writing the essay. That way, you won't forget the important points, and don't have to waste much time recalling it. 4) Write your essay with pencil only, so that after writing your essay, you can erase and write correct spellings if there are any spelling mistakes. 5) Be strict with the word limit. Try to elaborate your points in paragraphs within the specified limit only! 6) Try to recall some synonyms of the subject(main topic) of the problem statement. (Eg. If it's about food, then consumables, etc. If it's about teachers then educators, etc). Use a variety of synonyms to show your proficiency over English. 7) Do reserve at least AT LEAST 5 mins to thoroughly read the whole essay, correct if you find any spelling mistakes, grammar mistakes. 8) Practice, practice practice!!! Try writing essays on your own. At least you should be able to write the important points(key words), later on, you can elaborate on it on your own. Open up any RU-vid video about essay writing, read the problem statement, write your keywords, then look at the solution, see exactly what more "keywords" were required in the essay, how they've elaborated it in passages. All the best. I know you will do good!!!
@h0nie
@h0nie 7 месяцев назад
@@ghostunderyourbed1045 omg your English is so well.. how did you improve it?? do you have any suggestions for who is on the b1 level and take the IELTS exam 2 months later
@maralmogharab1996
@maralmogharab1996 Год назад
Altough there have been numerous videos that people can learn from about writing task 1, your teaching approach is far more productive and effective. Thanks a lot❤.
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
Wow, thank you!😊
@mubashirhussain3967
@mubashirhussain3967 Год назад
you are the best ... my ilets exam is on coming Sunday and i have only 6 days to practice all modules.. your channel is one of of the best channel who is actually helping me to understand how to deal with messy data,
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
Best of luck with your exam and don't forget to come back and share your score here.✊
@nishaale5729
@nishaale5729 Год назад
Hi Lilie With ur videos i could get 6.5 in writing n overall 8! Thank you! Your essay blogs helped me a lot too.
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
Great job! Wish you a bright future ahead!😊
@alpaknolgun4366
@alpaknolgun4366 2 месяца назад
this is IMHO quite an easy one, the reason being is that there is a lot of information to work with. Writing an essay on this topic was like butter. Mainly because as I said you never run out of components to describe on.
@shashankbarai1809
@shashankbarai1809 Год назад
You are the best. Thank you Tutor
@user-ko5cv7kv6y
@user-ko5cv7kv6y Год назад
you have helped me a lot
@goodvibesonly0912
@goodvibesonly0912 Год назад
thank you!!! 🤩
@omjwad2661
@omjwad2661 9 месяцев назад
Hi Lili,after describing the "never" and "everyday" categories as you did, can I add "and eaten there in both categories in 2006 and 2013 were equally common"
@siamakalaei1148
@siamakalaei1148 Год назад
Thank you so much for the video and the tips. They were really helpful. Best wishes ❤️ ❤️❤️
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
So glad!
@nancyajayan2913
@nancyajayan2913 11 месяцев назад
@ Lilie thank you dear for this wonderful lesson🎉
@mayadeniz4660
@mayadeniz4660 8 месяцев назад
You are amazing!
@raccoonrebecca454
@raccoonrebecca454 Год назад
Is it okay if I categorize it like this? I would highly appreciate your response. The bar chart displays the frequency of Americans eating at fast food shops in 2003, 2006 and 2013. Overall, the highest proportion of people consume junk foods once a week, and vice versa for every day. Moreover, the smallest overall percentage of people visited fast food restaurants in 2003. With regards to Americans who ate in fast food shops in 2003 and 2013, the percentage is identical for those who consume every day, a few times a year and never, at 3%, 15% and 4%, respectively. In contrast, 13% of US natives in 2003 buy fast foods a few times a year and roughly 5% consume every day and never. In addition, it is noticeable that the ratio of customers in fast food stores in all years who ate several times a week and once a week was almost identical. Furthermore, the proportion of people eating junk food once or twice a month between 2003 and 2013 hovers between 25% to 33%.
@user-ow3ls9nt7g
@user-ow3ls9nt7g 10 месяцев назад
This is the really outstanding Channel in IELTS.❤ Especially in writing module. You depict super fantastic That is encredible. Thank you so much dear.❤❤❤❤❤
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 10 месяцев назад
Wow, thank you!😊♥
@aircompressorkaishan4972
@aircompressorkaishan4972 Год назад
very厉害的老师,期待更新
@manaspandey35
@manaspandey35 6 месяцев назад
Thank you 🙏
@prasangatamang4929
@prasangatamang4929 Год назад
Thank you ♥️
@mahliyomahliyo403
@mahliyomahliyo403 Год назад
Great!!!!♡
@wailfazal4550
@wailfazal4550 8 месяцев назад
Appreciated
@tanjildhali9608
@tanjildhali9608 Год назад
Thanks sister,i watch your all videos and make note. I was in stress with Writing task but my brother recommended to watch your video, now i am a good student about writing task.
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
That's really great to hear!😊
@14_shahadatmadbarhossain40
@14_shahadatmadbarhossain40 Месяц назад
worth watching video
@gouravchauhan6052
@gouravchauhan6052 Год назад
I m lucky that I found your channel
@Myzz_Baan
@Myzz_Baan Год назад
You are soo good Lillie 🎉
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
thanks for the kind words!😊
@hateroftheworld
@hateroftheworld 3 месяца назад
You're a legend Lilie
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 3 месяца назад
Wooww, appreciate the kind words!
@jayanrose8929
@jayanrose8929 Год назад
Thank you soo much for your wonderful video Lilie it was very helpful. I tried writing by my own can someone tell me if this is okay? Or is it wrong? It will be very helpful for me thank you. The bar chart illustrates by frequency, the percentages of people in the USA who ate in fast-food restaurants in the years 2003, 2006, and 2013. Overall, at the beginning of the period, the percentage of people who ate in fast food restaurants every day decreased while at the end of the period, those who never ate at fast food restaurants slightly increased. In comparison, those who ate once a week and once or twice a month had a sudden rise throughout the period. The number of people who ate fast food in restaurants increased rapidly to approximately 18% in the year 2003. Then the percentage of people who ate fast food in restaurants once a week hit its highest point almost 32%. Again the number of people who ate once or twice a month faced a slight decrease to 30%. Later the number of people who ate fast food in restaurants a few times a year reduced to around 13% and continued to hit a bottom of about 5%. Both years 2006 and 2013 have fluctuations and remained the same at nearly 4% however, the figure shows a rapid increase in the number of people who ate fast food several times a week almost 20% and about 16% respectively. People who ate fast food once a week in restaurants in 2006 hit the highest percentage around 33% on the other hand, 2013 saw a slight increase of approximately 28%. However, in 2006 people who ate fast food once or twice a week saw a huge decrease in the amount by 25% while in 2013 hit a jackpot of height by approximately 33%. Later, in 2006 and 2013 people who ate a few times a year decreased by 15%. And continued to decrease further by 4% respectively.
@SajjadAli-xm2vi
@SajjadAli-xm2vi Год назад
Hello Miss Lilie, I am addicted to the design of the videos and the way that you are explaining it. I appreciate your work so much. Lots of Love from Pakistan 🇵🇰 ❤
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
Appreciate the kind words.😊
@heattransfer8003
@heattransfer8003 Год назад
The bar chart illustrate the proportion of American people who consumed fast food in restaurants in 2003 and 2013. Overall, people in USA ate fast food either everyday or never in 2003, 2006, and 2013. Moreover, majority of people preferred to eat fast food once a week or once or twice a month. It can be seen that, not even 5% of people in USA did not eat junk food everyday in 2003, 2006, and 2013. Moreover, same trend can be seen for the people who never tried eating fast food at below 5 percent except in 2003. Notably, about 15% of people consumed fast food in 2006 and 2013 whereas in 2003, this rate decreased to approximately 13% in 2003. On the other hand, majority of people preffered consuming fast food once a week at just over 30 percent in 2003 and 2006 except in 2013 at about 27%. In addition, 30% of people who had habit going to fast food restaurants in 2003 decreased 5% in 2006 and again in 2013, this rate had its peak level at almost 35%. I hope this gets at least 6.5
@user-rp3rn2vw6u
@user-rp3rn2vw6u 9 месяцев назад
I really appreciate for your kind help. I am worried about how to avoid write a wordy description and your videos give me very detailed suggestions.
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 9 месяцев назад
I used to have the same problem. So glad that you found the video helpful!😊♥
@erishaan0072
@erishaan0072 Год назад
Very useful content ma'am 🙏
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
Glad to hear that😊
@parmitamehta3171
@parmitamehta3171 Год назад
can someone suggest to me what I should do whenever I faced this kind of graph(graph can be anything like a line/ bar/ pie )...???? if I have to separate data, do I, do it by year span or categories wise???
@adebayoeunice7035
@adebayoeunice7035 Год назад
Weldone mama
@najiaferdous4161
@najiaferdous4161 7 месяцев назад
The bar chart presents data on how often people in the USA consumed fast food in restaurants from 2003 to 2013. Is it right? Please reply to me. Your videos are so helpful.
@mohammadsajjat8871
@mohammadsajjat8871 Год назад
Thanks apu
@user-vx3vy8kx6t
@user-vx3vy8kx6t 3 месяца назад
at fast food resturent or in fast fod resturent
@subashkhadka4720
@subashkhadka4720 Год назад
Thank eu mam i got good band score in IELTS all because of eu❤️i am very thankful to eu......
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
This is great news! Congratulations! Do you mind sharing your scores here?
@toobazahra79
@toobazahra79 Год назад
Very well explained
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
Glad it was helpful!😊
@SajjadAli-xm2vi
@SajjadAli-xm2vi Год назад
Do you have any reading ideas? How to to overcome all the hurdles in reading and managing time?
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
Hi, I will try to upload a reading video next month.
@DarshanKylash
@DarshanKylash Год назад
To be honest I scored well in writing because of you!
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
That's great to hear. How much did you score?
@DarshanKylash
@DarshanKylash Год назад
@@LilieIELTS I got 7 in writing, a week before the exam I thought I might get 4 or 5 and then I found your channel
@lilmayaghale4829
@lilmayaghale4829 Год назад
Thank you so much mam 😇😇
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
Most welcome 😊
@sahilnarad3338
@sahilnarad3338 Год назад
Thank you mam for your guidance today i got 6.5 band in ilets 🙏❤️❤️
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
Great!! Wish U a bright future ahead.😊
@umarmir5479
@umarmir5479 Год назад
We write overview as a conclusion
@ngockhanh4689
@ngockhanh4689 Год назад
Lille, should I group all the figures in 2003 in detail 1 and all the figures in 2013 in detail 2 ? ❤ hope you will answer my question
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 11 месяцев назад
what about 2006?
@ngockhanh4689
@ngockhanh4689 11 месяцев назад
@@LilieIELTS maybe i just omit it cuz my friends ( they got 6.5 in IELTS writting) said it would be ok sometimes
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 11 месяцев назад
@@ngockhanh4689 what if you do that and only got a 6?
@ngockhanh4689
@ngockhanh4689 11 месяцев назад
@@LilieIELTS ok, thank for answering my question, lilie
@preet2699
@preet2699 Год назад
Thanks alot mam
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
Most welcome 😊
@mahdiealvandi9687
@mahdiealvandi9687 10 месяцев назад
Thank you for your great video🙏 why can't we use age groups? 🙏
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 10 месяцев назад
Does this graph show age groups?
@LanAnhNguyen-kw5hl
@LanAnhNguyen-kw5hl Год назад
please teacher do more videos about writing task 1+2 i prefer learning English because of you
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
I'm taking a break. I'll be back after the chinese new year festival.😊
@sahilsusania782
@sahilsusania782 11 месяцев назад
Give me some tips mam ,next week is my exam.?
@drfrankenstein5414
@drfrankenstein5414 11 месяцев назад
Very beneficial video. Can I say the percentage of people who ate outside in 2003 instead of eating? and thank you a lot
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 11 месяцев назад
'Outside' doesn't work in this context.
@Uzna123
@Uzna123 4 месяца назад
Tomorrow is my exam hope this will help me😊
@r.npatel6593
@r.npatel6593 10 месяцев назад
In overview you mentioned ' in all three years' does that mean the same with 'between 2003 and 2013' ?? Wouldn't it be 10 years?
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 10 месяцев назад
No, 'in all three years' means 'in 2003, 2006 and 2013'.
@r.npatel6593
@r.npatel6593 10 месяцев назад
@@LilieIELTS so that means the chart is about three years and not 10years!!
@kidsdreamlandadventure
@kidsdreamlandadventure Год назад
Mam, Do you have pdf or app for IELTS writing task-2 creating by you?
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
Sorry, I don't but I have a website: www.ieltsessaybank.com/
@user-vx3vy8kx6t
@user-vx3vy8kx6t 3 месяца назад
please. Upload more videos
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 3 месяца назад
currently working on a membership writing course...will be back on RU-vid soon.
@edisvidinli
@edisvidinli Год назад
Your writing is really great appreciate but may i ask that is it okay to use too much those because i noticed you repeated that 3 times only in overall paragraph. By the way i just want to know that, i do not want to judge you thanks a lot mam for these beautiful original sources.
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
Hi, "those" is a pronoun here and you don't need to worry about repeating a pronoun.
@edisvidinli
@edisvidinli Год назад
@@LilieIELTS Hi again thanks a lot for your feedback.
@omjwad2661
@omjwad2661 10 месяцев назад
I still couldn't understand why it isn't right to use "fluctuate" in a category and it will be right if I used it in another category like you said in this lesson
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 10 месяцев назад
You need more than three data points to use 'fluctuate'.
@omjwad2661
@omjwad2661 10 месяцев назад
@@LilieIELTS thank you so much,i watched many separated IELTS videos that wasn't much useful: many advices, very little real information. Now I study for the IELTS only through your channel which I saw it by coincidence three days ago. And i wonder if there will be any chance to make a stimulating test for the IELTS since I prepare for it.
@AmandeepKaur-is6nq
@AmandeepKaur-is6nq Год назад
how describe Multiple line graph data iike this question number of students studying language at one University in the UK in 1990 and 2015. Because I face difficulty to write so many data on different line.
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
Hi, you shouldn't report every single piece of data. Instead, report only important data. Here are some sample essays on line graphs: www.ieltsessaybank.com/category/writing-task-1/line-graph/
@AmandeepKaur-is6nq
@AmandeepKaur-is6nq Год назад
Hi, I am from india ( Punjab) so want to say I do practice at home for IELTS exam so if I want to you check my writing task 1 or 2 how much fee according to my state of currency.
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
@@AmandeepKaur-is6nq I'm very sorry that I don't sell anything yet.
@gouravchauhan6052
@gouravchauhan6052 Год назад
Why do not you start your IELTS classes You are amazing
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
If I sell courses, how can you watch videos like this for free?😊
@gouravchauhan6052
@gouravchauhan6052 Год назад
@@LilieIELTS Thanks Lilie .....Lots of love from India 💜
@patelheet4380
@patelheet4380 Год назад
Hey lilie, i'm waiting for your next incredible video, i think u r on vacation.
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
Yes, but I'm back now. Working on a new video. Hopefully I can upload it next Money.😊
@patelheet4380
@patelheet4380 Год назад
Thanks👍
@farhanayasmine7764
@farhanayasmine7764 Год назад
sister I will give my IELTS exam on 18th March..... please inform me for my writing task I just want to read Cambridge 15 to 17 writing task 1 and 2 .... is this should for my main exam?
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
That's hard to say. In one of my actual exams, I got a line graph very similar to the one in Cambridge IELTS 8.
@farhanayasmine7764
@farhanayasmine7764 Год назад
Thank mam. But I can't generate more idea. Your video is so much helpful for me..... 🥰🥰🥰
@AmandeepKaur-is6nq
@AmandeepKaur-is6nq Год назад
It is correct if use the( we) in wtiting
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
Don't use "we" in task 1.
@rehansanilaweera
@rehansanilaweera Год назад
This one is very hard😭😭 I
@LENNYFERRARA-tr3ux
@LENNYFERRARA-tr3ux Год назад
南方妹子·讲的不错。照样我这个老师没白教你的。Ride on girl.
@djparty8371
@djparty8371 Год назад
Thanks
@farhanayasmine7764
@farhanayasmine7764 Год назад
Sister please wanna some new videos
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Год назад
I'll upload a new video next Monday.😊
@farhanayasmine7764
@farhanayasmine7764 Год назад
Thanks a lot
@shahrierislam8527
@shahrierislam8527 2 месяца назад
Please, Speak little Slow.
@allthingsielts
@allthingsielts 9 месяцев назад
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