I'll be giving constructive criticism on this. To start, the editing style is good, but it's kinda bland. Maybe add music or sfx to make the parts without dialogue more lively and not *_just_* silence. Moreover, when you show the quests at 0:17, 1:31, & 2:16, add MORE VFX OR MUSIC. And be more transparent that these are the quests for the Militant skin, like adding "First Quest, Second Quest" and etc. Last, the part where it transitions to the hardcore gameplay at 3:11, you should've atleast added a title card that says, "HC Time." or something like that. And PLEASE do NOT make non-dialogue segments like 3:13 - 3:32, without music. Well, that's all from me. Peace
