how NOT to report every single piece of data in an ielts task 1 bar graph

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Do you tend to report all the data in a chart in Writing Task 1? In this video, I will use the bar graph in Cambridge IELTS 15 Test 1 to show you a magic method that allows you NOT to report every single piece of data in a graph.
The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
▬ Contents of this video ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬
0:00 Intro
0:36 Identify important data
02:34 Make broad comments
05:06 Overview paragraph
06:00 Last 4 weeks
07:25 Paraphrase chart description
09:18 Whole essay
09:24 Key takeaways

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@charityamabuabeng9666 Год назад

So I have my exam in few weeks and I have been so worried about bar graphs but after watching this video I understand everything. I can’t believe it’s this simple. God bless you🙏

@LilieIELTS Год назад

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@docomocco1396 22 дня назад

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@mdrahulrabby5752 5 месяцев назад

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It used to be one of my biggest problems. 😊

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@yogitagoldsmith7056 22 дня назад

thank you soo much its my starting of writing task 1.... i found this video very informative nd easy

@LilieIELTS 21 день назад

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@hahahaha8468 Год назад

You are the first RU-vidr that let me have the desire to comment, your video is so helpful, basically answered all the questions I have for task 1 for now. Thank you for the kindly sharing!🌟

@LilieIELTS Год назад

Woooo, really appreciate the kind words!

@namsu8853 Год назад

Please reply (exam in 3 days) Can we say the number of residents opting for a Cafe were the highest And, can we say outpaced instead of outraced??outpaced??? In this graph you've not compared each other. So, it's OK not to compare???? Please reply please

@ShantanaDas- Месяц назад

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@wkzf Год назад

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@SandeepKaur-su4it 10 месяцев назад

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@LilieIELTS 2 года назад

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@nhannguyen9618 10 месяцев назад

I do really love your content as it helps me a lot. But Do you have any books or blogs that have some sources of vocabulary for presenting the ideas in writing?? because i dont have much high-level academic structure

@LilieIELTS 10 месяцев назад

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@zkvlogs307 Год назад

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@koushikmajumder8870 Месяц назад

First of all, thank you so much for such informative videos, they are just excellent. What i am struggling to find is standard sample. Can you kindly suggest me a book where i can find all the samples (let's say for bar chart at least 5) for all types of criteria's of writing task 1?

@LilieIELTS Месяц назад

You can read sample essays on my site 😊 ieltsessaybank.com

@itsharmansandhu777 4 месяца назад

Mam Thankyou very much actually I suffed from same kind like I describe all the figure in detail but when I watch this video regarding my mistake Now I feel really good again thank you Mam for giving good solution.

@LilieIELTS 4 месяца назад

glad that the video was helpful😊

@itsharmansandhu777 4 месяца назад

@@LilieIELTSmam just I have one doubt about introduction like in introduction line" in five cities in Australia" is it correct line OR" in five cities of Australia" is correct line I am so confuse please let me know about this enquiry

@rammshahh522 2 года назад

Great content 💯 You'll grow faster if you upload twice a week

@LilieIELTS 2 года назад

Quality first.😊

@jazz3646 2 года назад

@@LilieIELTS do you have have fb account or any other platform where i can contact you.

@pradippaudel967 8 месяцев назад

I am not well prepared diagram nd map 😢 i only focus on graph😢 Hope i got desirable band. If i get my band i will give you thank you bottom of my heart❤

@pharmdnotesbysravani2137 10 месяцев назад

Subtitles covering the matter,wat ur showing.... overall ur excellent

@mazharshoikat5729 Год назад

superb

@LilieIELTS Год назад

Thanks 🤗

@realman849 Год назад

My basics English is not so good its my humble request please provide general structures for every type of chart in easy words

@Tamanna001-l8j 9 месяцев назад

Thanks mam 😊

@LilieIELTS 9 месяцев назад

Keep watching😊

@aishaaomarovaa7 10 месяцев назад

Hi Lilie, i have a question, can i replace result(s) with outcome? And of course, THANK YOU for your helpful videos!!!

@LilieIELTS 10 месяцев назад

Yes, 'outcomes' works.

@noobgorkhali8317 Год назад

This is an eye opener even for a blind person. hehehe. Great lesson.

@LilieIELTS Год назад

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@kirandeepkaur9937 Год назад

Very helpful

@LilieIELTS Год назад

Glad you think so!😊

@kirandeepkaur9937 Год назад

Mam how we can use connectors and synonymous in writing

@LilieIELTS Год назад

I'll try to explain a little bit the use of connectors in the next video.

@kirandeepkaur9937 Год назад

Thanks

@nhatanhphan9005 5 месяцев назад

Do we use present simple if the chart doesn t mention year or time?😢

@sheikhsakib92 Год назад

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@LilieIELTS Год назад

Really appreciate your kind words.😊

@familyinstitution2874 6 месяцев назад

Plz solve and upload all ielts exercises

@LilieIELTS 6 месяцев назад

you can read sample essays on my site www.ieltsessaybank.com/

@gaurisworkharel8692 Год назад

You're soo sweet Your voice is very decent🥺

@LilieIELTS Год назад

Oh, thank you.😊

@devurru Год назад

Amazing lecture but the minimum word limit is 150 words and this is short by 20-30 words. Anyways quality is excellent.🔥

@LilieIELTS Год назад

Hi, it's 167 words. You can read the essay here: www.ieltsessaybank.com/coffee-buying-habits/

@nirazanjr1557 2 месяца назад

Today is my ielts test wish me good luck ❤

@sanduniperera126 Год назад

Could I know we can use only past tense for describing?

@LilieIELTS Год назад

Yes, that's exactly what I did.

@user-vc6wx3vc7k 24 дня назад

Mam i don't know how to present data like at 23% by 50% and exam is comming please help

@macykwok1453 Год назад

In the overview, can we say the two main features are 1)having tea or coffee in a cafe is the most popular + 2)buying fresh coffee is a less significant habit in all cities? May i know if the second observation is ok?

@LilieIELTS Год назад

But I can argue that buying instance coffee is a less common habit, can't I? I think it's more accurate to say that buying fresh coffee is the least common habit in all five cities.

@macykwok1453 Год назад

@@LilieIELTS yep, your latter sentence is what I wanna say--- 'least common' :) thanks for your reply 🙏

@saturatedk9674 Год назад

Hiii. Id have a question. Should we also spell out the number in percentage under 10? Thank you.

@LilieIELTS Год назад

No, we don't need to.

@saturatedk9674 Год назад

Thanks very much.

@seanolan Год назад

Band 9

@nerdguy1061 Год назад

can we use (less likely than )in task 1 ?or is it less than more appropriate?? ---------fresh coffee section...

@LilieIELTS Год назад

"Less likely than" is a type of language used in statistics, so it's actually very good for task 1.

@12344342131323211322 Год назад

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@amirtha0907 Год назад

Wow

@jazz3646 2 года назад

Ohhh God thank you for this video.... I urgently need your help plz do reply and lemme know of charge anything to teach. Thank you ❤️🤗🤗

@LilieIELTS 2 года назад

Sorry, I don't sell anything yet. You may find my writing blog helpful: www.ieltsessaybank.com/

@jazz3646 2 года назад

@@LilieIELTS okay... Then could you do me a favour, or evaluate my writing or discuss graphs with me? I am a good learner and would not take much of your tym.. If you could do a friendly favour or a favour for sake of humanity? 😔

@LilieIELTS 2 года назад

Sorry, I don't proofread essays. But if you have any *specific* questions about writing, you can leave a comment on RU-vid or on my blog. I'll do my best to answer. 😊

@johnwinjoby544 7 месяцев назад

Should we use connecting word more often . Is it necessary ???

@LilieIELTS 7 месяцев назад

using linking words is not the only way to create flow.

@johnwinjoby544 7 месяцев назад

@@LilieIELTS ok

@binodsapkota6680 Год назад

you sound like ; hau kang we knat ( HOW CAN WE NOT) its cute haha

@LilieIELTS Год назад

You listened so carefully.😀

@omjwad2661 8 месяцев назад

I know that you've mentioned the difference between Adelaide and the other five cities in the overall but shouldn't I mention it again in the detail paragraph 1?and can I say that "in Adelaide both going to a cafe and buying instant coffee leveled off at nearly 50%? Can I say that the percentages of people who bought instant coffee fluctuated

@LilieIELTS 8 месяцев назад

I was busy with the challenge. The first sentence in the third paragraph compares Adelaide to the other four cities: www.ieltsessaybank.com/coffee-buying-habits/ No, you shouldn't use 'level off' and 'fluctuate' for a chart that doesn't show trends. dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/level-off

@omjwad2661 4 месяца назад

@@LilieIELTSi just saw your reply thanks a lot and waiting for the next challenge since it was impossible for me to participate in the first one

@namsu8853 Год назад

Can we use the word fluctuated between ... to.... for this bar graph? Eg: the coffee intake for three cities (Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobo) fluctuated between 20% and 40%. I'm freaking out. PLEASE Reply

@LilieIELTS Год назад

Hi, I don't think you can. To fluctuate means to change continually. However, those percentages don't change. They're just different from each other.

@namsu8853 Год назад

@n.s4476 Год назад

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@AliHashime 10 месяцев назад

What about instant coffee you did not mention

@LilieIELTS 10 месяцев назад

I believe I mentioned it.

@nnebochinwe2696 2 года назад

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@Manisha-ms3nh Год назад

Is that so? why is that ??? probably you are a foe.😂you comment didn't even get a like from her...

@MuhammadIqbal-kb6dy Год назад

Can we use reserach instead survey?

@LilieIELTS Год назад

No.

@namsu8853 Год назад

@khairulalamgir3885 8 месяцев назад

Dear Madam, "with those in Brisbane and Adelaide, both at nearly 35%, less likely than those in the other three cities to do so." I have not understood properly. Could please write those sentences in actual form. That means that you have written it in short form by reducing the large one. I would like to see it actual sentence get better, please. Thank you.