hello im an aspiring artist myself and I have to say that looks amazing...also love warships and have always wanted to try drawing something like the HMS Hood firing...you nailed the gun effect... I like to give advice on improvement where I can but this was pretty amazing haha but i guess one thing is that the bridge could use just a little more details but this is in no way saying it is bad really admire your work i will check out your channel!
I was actually able to draw it exactly like you because I am a good artist and I love drawing but it wouldn’t have been possible without your video. You just draw amazing and with steps . Like and subbed for your lovely talent and skill