I like the way that you did this but you need to heat and slightly bend the top of the frame towards you for the pack to sit right on it like they have on the original frames for the padded sleeve to go over the frame that way it will it will stay on better and not slip off.
Alsouse6 tree's and 6 elbows instead of 4 of each the lower part will have 2 tee's with a small piece in between for attaching the pack better and that way your frame will be square on the shelf and be stronger and still lite in weight.