How to make your writing funnier - Cheri Steinkellner 

+Ytremz I think you're Pickle

+MrC0MPUT3R This is why I had to scroll down? :/

Comedy is 90% timing, 10% wit, and 3% attention to detail.

+That One Guy i get it lol

+MrC0MPUT3R Clever, very clever

Hesusio lmao

well, you are a tumour

zaqareemalcolm bruh

Who said you had to laugh at it.

At least you got 303 likes outta it

Rick

Yes

@X Æ A-12 r/woooosh

Rick did it

No

W̴̡̢̡̡̧̧̡̡̨̧̨̧̡̧̢̨̨̧̧̨̡̧̨̡̧̨̢̧̢̡̨̛̛̛̛͍̼͙̭̱̘̗̦̯̯̠̟̠̥͍̼̺͖͈̻̘̪̙̬͈̝̺͎͕̮̼̮͖͎͍̹̠̟͙̗̥̠̻̝̥̰̝̟̮͇͖̠͓̭̖̺̲̗͔̥̱̙̣̫̳͔̩̣̺̙̯̠͓̰̖̪͙̦̣̖̪͓̼̮̲͔̯͓̫̻̘͎͈̱̜͉̹͔̹̪͍͖̰̪͎̼̲̬͈̻̠̭͍̦̜͈͉̠̙̟̙͇̖̦̥͉͍͍̤̦̯̥͍̱͕͖͖̪̖̹͈̣̞̥̤̤̟̳̞̰̙̱͕͓̜͈̜͖̲͔̱̖͔̗̬͕̻̬̜̬͎̙͍͓̥̰̘̤̻̻̮̺͓̮̭͓̮͕͎̳͎̲̩̞̻̮̪̝̳̭̼͙̩͙̠͍͉̖͔̰̘̺͇̳̜̠̻̩͉̩̰̬͕̮̳̩͙̞̝̝̖͓͇͉͚̤̘̟̲̭̝̳̬̯̣͓͙̅̆̈́͊͌̅̾̆̓͒̉͋͛̈͐̐̍̂̓̏̋́͊͊̈́͌̈͐̽̔̊͒̈́̉̈́̍̂̅̈́̃́̓̌̊͂͗̏͋̄̄̂̀́̒́̓̈̈́̆̈́͆̒̈́̒͗͋̾̊̀̂̍̍̃̐̆͛̓͋͒͛͌̀̎͋̾̋̐̒͂̃́̎́̍̃͑̔̈́͂̃́͒͂̅̉̒̑͆̐̀̉̎̊́̿̇̂͒͛̽̽́̓̈͆̓̐̃̐̑̓̏̋̈́͂̈̑̈̂̓͋͐̀́̄̈́̈́̅̾̉̌̉͑̋̆̐͋̄̆̈́̓̄̐̌̇͐̈́̽̇̕̚̚̚͘̚̚̚͘͘̚͘̕͘̕͘̚͜͜͜͜͜͜͜͠͝͝͝͠͝͝͠͝͝͝͝͝͝͝͠͝ͅͅͅͅͅͅͅͅͅE̶̡̢̡̡̡̢̡̧̢̢̧̧̨̜̜̘̼̪͖̝̮̮̫̹̥̻̼̖̤̻͚͈̭̺̹̜͎̹̟̰͔̤̲̥̤̮̻͔͔̣͙̤̤̜͔̼͕̱͖̮̜̻̬͖̪̩̘̝̳̯̖̙̦͎͕̥̤̥̱̰̰̜̫̼͕̰͓̩̪͇̩̟̘̭̠̬̣̱̝̜̩̟̣͍̦̯̘̺̪̟̊̌̃͛̀̆̉͒̍̂̒͗̈̍͜͜͝ͅͅȨ̶̧̨̡̡̨̨̨̧̡̧̧̧̧̡̢̨̨̢̢̧̢̧̡̨̡̛̦͖̦̰͉̯͔̜͔̘͙̠̩̦̣̺̼̞̭͙͇̝͉̦̲̤̖̤̩̖̤̰̦͓̞͙̜̱͓̩̥̤͇̲̫̗̜͉̘̟̹̯̠̣̙͉̤̼͚͓͎͖͉̜̳͖̞̦̯̞̫̟̱̻̦̼̻̬̞͍͕̥̼̯̠̲̝͉̺̺̬̬͉̲̳͍͍̻͎̫̲̬͈̲̰̭̣̺̙̜̪͇̥̼͇̱̤̲̱̯̟̱̞̣̰̻͔͇͈̮̩̻͕̗̺̘͍̤͖̙̯̼̠͎̦͈̥̘̬͇͙͇͓̩͉͙̰̲̼̹̱̥̗͇̦̠̳͉̙͍̘̲͔̟͓̠̭̜͍͍̹͉͚͕̘̭̮͉͎̭͓̥̬̫͙̻̠̭͎̖̼̘̲̲̱͙͈̳̲̯̺͓̪̑̇͐̀̿̀͂̏̄̄͋̌̇̒̀͐͑̿͛́͒̐͌̓̑̓͋́̅͆̓̈́͒̿̀͛̈́̒͂̚̚̕̕͜͜͝͝͠͝ͅͅͅͅD̷̡̨̡̧̡̨̛̛̛̫͔̼͉̭͕͍͇̦̜̩̫̟̟̜̘̭̭͓͈̲̹̮̮̫͕̠͕̼̤̰̘̜̺͗̉͑̽̈́͋̎̊͋͛͆͋̿̄̉̆̄̋̉͂̈́͛́̅̀́̈̇̏̉̎̽̈̈͑̓̒̽͗́̉̄̃͊̓̎̚̕̕̚͜͝͠͠ ̷̨̧̡̨̨̢̢̧̡̢̨̧̧̡̧̛̛̛̛̛̛͍̬̠̳̪̟̳͈̙̩̥͉̮̫͇̪͇̺̖͚͎͈̹͙̺̗̰̤̠̥̹͕͙͇̤̗̠̙͕̥̪͉͖͖͙̬̝̪̺͍͇̙͇̗͖̜̣̟̥͕̬̞͈͍̱̙̥̖̯͕͚̠̠̲̖͉̥̗͎͕̪͓̜͉͖̥͈͚̘̗̭̥̗̦̤͚͕͕̙̞͇̘̮͉͕̗̟̟̤͕̼̭̥͈̱̪̲͉̟͔̖͔͖̼͍͔̺͉͇̥͍̜̼̟̩̞̯̳̠͔͇͖̠̩͍̟̝̲̜̫̪̬̥͓͉̖͎̥̭̝̪̜̰̠͉͚̼̭̱̔̋̍͐̊̏͗̄͂̿̈́̈̍̒̓͒̀̀̋́̄̾̂͑͂͆̍̆̄̓͂̎̀́̂͒̑̔͋̔́͌͂̍̒̄̂̈̆̀̋̒̇͒̈́̓̓̈́̂̏̀̏̅̒̒̈̆͂͐͒̏̎̉̊̆͐͑̆̒́͋̿̐̈͛̃͌̎̋̽̀́̈͌͂͋̇͐̈́̋̐͂͛͗̌̐̓̐̀̾̃̔͛̀̈́̊́̋̌̂̐̋̀̎͆̔̄͋̏̂͆̎͐̐̆̾̓̅͗͒̒̾̈́͛̂̀͂̎̑͒̾̎̊͆͒̀̃̐̓̐̐̇͌́̃͋̓̌̂̈̏̐̂̈́̇͊̋̀͊̽̑̇̈́̈́́̒̉̆͐̀̇͐̆̾̄̒̐̎̊̋͑̈́̌͒̏͌͐̃̏̄̐́̉̏̅̾͒͂̃̄̀̔̉̈̎̿̒̍̏̒̑̈́͗̈́̐̽̈́̇́̽́̾̓̾̐͒̿͊́̕͘̚͘͘̕̚̚̚̚͘͘͘̕̚̚͘̕̕̚̕͘̚̕̚͜͜͜͜͜͠͝͠͠͝͠͝͠͝͝͝͝͝͝͝͝͝͝͝ͅͅͅͅͅͅͅȨ̵̡̧̧̡̨̢̢̡̡̡̡̢̧̨̡̢̡̢̛̛̛̛̥̠̝̘̼̠̪̣̗̲͇͓̖͍̫͈͕̦͕̠̖̖͎͕̳̠̪͕̝̰̺͖͓̖͖̗͉͍͖̪̱̺̥̬̱̻̣̤͍͖̜̯̩̘̪̝̰̣̩̪͖̺͈͇͖̠̻̳͓̣̼̫̩̳͙̳̜̠̩̰̙̤̭̭͚̼̬͕͇̟͙̻̫͓͈͖͖̳̱̬͓͓̱̬̲͚̻̰̖͕̳̞͙̜̼̮͕̭̙̪̱͉̳̣̦̙̳̰̲͇̳̹̳̦̮̻͙̬̱̯͈̥̻̜̮͖̟̭͇̰̥̻̰̞̲̻͚̳͍̫̭̘̘͍̙̬͓͙̠͎̫̝͔̫̼̞̼̝̘̟̲̣̗̞͇̯͈̪͕̱̥͚̻̤̪͖̬̜͇̻͖̹̟̹̩̻̼͚͓̺̹̾́̃̅̈́̂͋̈́̓̋̒̓͗̀͑̐̊̄̌̃̿̅̍̄̓́̾̿̈̉̇̇͆̈́̈́́̈́̐̌͊̓̾́̏̒̈́͆̂͐̓͗̿̆̔̇̌́͂́̃̊̊͆̇̈́̾̒̍̈́̈́̋̃̅͋̽̃͂̑̉̌̌̽̀͑̀͂̌̂͊͆́̌̍̏̾̌̀̉͗̈́̈̽͆̓̐̒͐̏͑̈̅̓̾̿̽̽̆̆̊̋͊͐̈́̆̉̌̔̓͐͑̃̀̓͛̐̏̇̅͌͛͌̈́̀̏͊̀̏̊̎͛̑̔̊̏͆͌͋͛͊̈̿̔̏̅̓͒́͆̉́͐͊̕͘͘͘̕͘̚̚͘͜͜͜͜͜͠͠͝͠͝͠͝͠͝͝͠ͅͅͅͅͅͅͅÃ̵̧̡̨̧̡̨̨̧̧̡̨̡̡̨̧̨̨̡̢̨̡̞̫̤̘̙̲̲̖̲͇̻̼̺̲̙̥̭̺̫̞̼̣̞̝̘̗̼͓̬̭͙̼̹̬͓͔͉̟̺̲͓̻̯̬͕̜̯̗̻͈̱̰̭̲̞͙̞̘͖̲̞͔̞̥̘̩̳̺͈̜̻͔͓͔̯̪̗͇̼̯̹͇̱̰͚̣̺͉̪̫̮͔̹̱͍̥̺̱͈̟̺̥͓̫̗̤̼̬̜̠̼̦̼̭͇̱͖̬̦̬̺̜̻̺̟̝̫̲͙͙̩̻͉̞̼͙̭̟̘͉̰̘̖̘͓̝̦̳̱̣̳̬̘͍̳̥̞̮͕̭̰̻͖͖͚̫̘͖̫̯͔̪͉͔͙̰͈͙̬̲̭̗̗̙̣͚͎̳͙̯̠̰̗͈̲̠͙͙͈̫̘̗̓̏̂̀͂̈͋̅̿̆̈́̐͜͜͜͜͜͜ͅͅͅͅŢ̷̢̧̧̡̨̧̢̡̡̧̨̛̛̛̻̩̬͖͖̬͕̞͍̟͔̣̖͉̦͇͈̹̹͚̙̦͔̻̘̝̬͖̹͍̭͈̝̜̳̣͔̘̟̮̖̯͖̤̥͇͖̪̪̫͔̝̫̰͈̪̞̜̼͚̰̺͈̜͎̻̰͙͔̤̫̲͚̹̐͋̆̔͌̈̌̌̑̓̇̉̏̆́̀̒̂̄͌͑̆́̒̾̾͒͋̄͂͊̂̇̐͂̾́͒̍͌̏͐͋̓̃́̐̏̍̈́͂̅̄͂̈͂͌͛̒̉̊͒̑̔̓̄͒̃̀͒̓̔̕͘̕͘̚̚͝͝͝͠͝͝͝͝͠͝͝ͅͅȨ̶̧̧̡̛̛̛̦̠͕̻̘̮̼̝̠͙̫̱̘̩̯̤̘̹͇̟͎̠̌̒͒̓̀̎͑̿̒͗̒̿͒͗̀͒͌̌̔͑̽̀̈́̑͐̋͆͋͆̾͌̈́̈́̑̈́̒̀̓̐̾̑͗̂̑͌̒̏̈́͑̂́̾̂̈́͌̊̑̽̄̆̑́̍̃̐̈́͐͊͌̐̓̅͆̇͆̾̂̈́̑́̆̿͋̈̉̋̆́̐̃͐͆̍̉̑̇̑̈̅̂̀̽͆̆̔͒̈́̄̿̒̄͆̎͊͂̀̒̍̆̅̉̒̔̔̏̔̔̀͛̈́͗̋͐̔͑̈́̀̽̀̆̐̔͆̋͌́̽͊̉́͒́̈́͌̅̿̅̇̓̄̒̏͛͑͆̀̈́͌͌́̈̈́̊͛̀̈́̏̓͂̔̂̎͂̑͛̈́̈́̈́͐̐͐͊̃̀̅̓̈́̍͗̌̂̄̀͊͋͐̀̐͊̈̿̐̉̒̈́̋̇͘̚̕͘̕̚̕̕̚̚͘͘̚̚̕͘͘̚̚͝͝͝͝͝͝͝͝͠͠͝͝͝͝͠͝ͅͅͅͅȒ̵̨̢̧̢̨̧̨̨̢̡̧̢̧̨̢̨̧̛̛̛̛̛̳̪̝̦̞̮̖͍͎͎̹͈͉͍͓͇͓̼̻̞͉͈̯̮̝̜͙͎̲̭͖̗͎̤̘̦̪̭̲̰͚̘̙̮͎̮̪͇̠͙̟͉̮̩̫̞͇̣͙͍̥͓̻̞͖͓͚͓̼̪̩̮̭̼̻̗̗͈̻̺͎̯̱͕͕̠̣̯̮͓̻̫͙̳̞͇̬̞͈̗̱͇̼̫̰̖̯̰̖̫̮̝̼̜̘̖̺̫̗̪̰̟͈̳̦̫̥͈̱̣͍͖̮̻̣͎͈͎̺̻͔̱̙̘̺̥͍͙͔̙̗̰̫͍͔̥̟͎͔̞̹̤̻̠͙͖͙̬̫͖̖͇̞̮̦͙̗̦͙̬̰̗̺̜̟̻̬̝̰̩̹̰̦̜̖̝͈̞͔̻̮͓͚̘͙̝̈́̆̈́̅̈́̀̽͗̊̈́̈́̉̇͊͊̾͑͆̽̊͋̍͌̽̏̀́̉̇̉̋̅͑̏̀͋̾̂̈́́́̅̎͑͑̿͗͆͋̽̂́̀̈́͑̈́͂́̓̉́́͛̐̒͋́͒̿͆͋̒͆͌͆̍͛͒́̿̔͗̍̃͊͑̅̀̎̎͂̅̑͑̀̅̎̑͒̉͒͋̀̈́͐̆̈́̆͗̀̍̂͊̈́̋́̆͆̅̒̄͛̌̈̋́̓̏̂̉̿̅́̑̂̌̋̃̿͂̊̈́̏́̿͊̽͗̓̓̎̿̑͊̐̾́̈́̈́̑̏̇̀͂̓̈̐̚̚̚̕̚͘͘̚̚͘̚̚͜͜͜͜͜͜͜͜͠͝͝͝͝͝͠͝͠͝ͅͅͅͅ

I love that this quote is real

YAS VEGGIETALES

still the best quote

yes!

SMART!

oh my god i sat here like an idiot trying to replace and sound out the words thinking "this makes no sense"...until it did.

XD

That's not _quite_ the case with who, tho ...

KrazyKrissy Twhat?

+hadroncollidier Disco! HAHDUHEHAUHHEHAUHDHAUHEHUHDHUAHFHUAH!!!!!!!1111!!1!!!!

What! Quick, someone quote an iconic vine!

@@skilletlord3800 I like trains.

@@skilletlord3800 bird up

'Disco.'

I laughed more at this than I did at the video lmao

@@2yden2ivers3 Yeah thats not *funny* arthur

YOU SHOULD'VE USED "COCONUT"

@Pranav Mukkara Joker movie reference

@@georgewashington7871 I-I'm sorry.. hah. It's just, It's *been a rough week* murray.

Preach it to the choir. I have no idea what I just watched or how it helped

Biches!

Bad day?

poop

+HCN 27.0253g/mol That's rude :(

Exactly

Horror is when a shark eats your saxophone. (jk, supposed to be funny)

+Jacob Griffin horror are your comments.

+Vinicius Ferreira horror IS* your comments.

MCisra3l And IS is a terrible organization.

+Jacob Griffin The line isn't funny because it's random. It's funny because you'd expect it to be "Tragedy is when I cut my finger, comedy is when *you* cut *your* finger", because that's a variation of something we have probably all heard in our lives, however has a twist ending which is not only funny, but also describes humour... And now I've explained the joke and it's no longer funny.

2:26

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Its the funniest thing I've ever seen

Is fany hahaha

I DONT UNDERSTAND Y IT GETS ME EVERY SINGLE TIME

Shakimomo

*Gun*

Wow, modern kids are so broken they see everything as a step up from what they know and deal with. That is top notch sad af.

E

You made me laught pal dammit​@@SharkSalesman90

Dave Teves true. The beginning was ok but it starts to get dry.

I laughed every time.

Dave Teves I agree it would of been better if they kept the first few, then kept the last one and trashed the rest

i think it was okay, and the last one was rly funny cuz i should have been propered for that, but i wasnt... surprise... dots.. connected.... laughter.... just as she said. :D

Dave Teves 😂😂😂😂

What amazed me is that was also Neil Gaiman's number one tip for writing at all... (it's in the posface on "Sons of Anansi")

ops "Anansi Boys"

And Disco

Or cartoony goofy?

I don't nun-derstand

This is funnier than the actual video.

Get out

Omg hahahahaha

it's the "im so sorry" for me

+boy638 The easiest answer would be "for socialising". No other mammal tells stories and that includes funny stories or jokes. Laughing comes from the ridiculously that occures in jokes when the answer or punch line is so suprisingly awkward *or* logical for the hearer that he/she's overwhelmed. Telling jokes *right* is the real challenge.

And why/how the poop comes out when we laugh on the toilet.

+boy638 Laughter is a reaction to a sudden surprise followed by realisation that everything is okay. The first "joke" ever was probably a rustling bush that someone thought was a tiger but ended up being a small shrew or the wind blowing. Have you ever laughed after a dangerous near miss? I once surprised myself when I cracked up laughing after just making it off a collapsing, makeshift log bridge, I was in hysterics but also thinking "why am I laughing? That was really scary! I could have easily broken both my legs!" I think it is your body pumping you full of endorphins to counter-balance the stress of the situation you just escaped from. Comedy replicates the effect in our heads, we get really confused and worried as our brains get tricked but then we realise what happened and make sense of it and laugh. I think comedy is like mental magic (as in tricks, not "real" magic). A comedian uses words to achieve the same effect as a magician does with props. They are both testing our sense of logic, deceiving us and then leading us to a resolution.

search Zogg From Betelgeuse. Your welcome :(

+minimooster **:)

They call that a 'callback' in the biz. 😉

It's about having funny commedy in a story

thanks I've been looking into making a comedical short film but I never knew what to include or what to add since I'm not the funniest guy but a person who loves reading and watching comedies.

I highly recommened the book the hidden tools of comedy. Most of what I wrote here I learned from this. It is far from perfect, but it really explains nicely what comedy is and how to do better comedy.

Exaggeration in short

T8g

T8g

Kkk

you know, maybe they were right

I think the Ku Klux Klan is hilarious.

o *K* Ay...

*CA* K - CAre

go away the kids wont get it

Where? What proverb? What does the Bible verse say?

Didn't say anything about a bible verse. It's just a german proverb

German is not even a true language, its mostly a rip off of english and canadian. So gtfo.

I hope you're trolling...

+Vinicius Ferreira hahahahhahahahhahahahahahahahahaha

Let's tickle the pickle

Ha ha ha!!

Oof

*cough* but jokes at least have meanings in them *cough*

@@aashi_1657 STAY AWAY FROM ME! AHHHH

Send me your life story let's see it's funny or not.

Same💀💀💀

Masters of comedy

+Karsim shrawasti Are you suggesting coconuts migrate?

+Zenkichi Hitoyoshi Not at all! They could be carried.

+Draevon May But for them to be carried in time, we need to know what the airspeed velocity of an unladen swallow is!

+GhastlyDerp It's actually 10 m/s

NataNaga it isnt funny without a k

What the deal with Disco jokes, amiright amiright?

iTs FuNnY bEcAuSe ItS rAnDeM!11!11 XDXDXXD

it follows every rule DISCO

@@audreyyu5153 disco joe then

coconuts are transported by ships... or even mail

+Alex Stefanov (umnikos) you do not get the joke, do you?

Maybe she used a European swallow

+bbbeware bb You know, I thought of that. But when you think about it, a five ounce bird could not carry a one pound coconut. It's really a simple matter of weight ratios.

Maybe there was 2 swallows?

if you'd watched, you'd know that humour is subjective

+Rice Waffle was just a few simple examples, but is how them said, humor is relative.... everything is funny, and nothing is, all depends of the eye of who listen, or the ear of who see...

+Rice Waffle Yeah, this was mostly cringe-worthy, but I admit to laughing at the body builder rabbit.

+Rice Waffle Meh. If that argument worked, you wouldn't need advice to write humor. Just binge watch funny videos on youtube and you'd eventually become a comedy genious.

+James D (I laughed at that comment way too much omg XD)

normie has been found

oh wait i'm a normie.

@@JoThNoMi you're 1 year too late

@@juanvaldivia8001 i'm replying for no reasons.

Why

I mean, casually explained had a funny video. I haven't used it, but it at least comes from a reliable source

Digaddog the casually explained one was great

So true

I like it

I think they are making a third

PRGME7 I preferred the books.

+Swamp Witch yea but the movies have a better story

Was this sarcasm?

Either that or her humor are same level as amy schumer

AMOGUS SUS

Jared Nguyen I'm sure he'd be disappointed in seeing this video.

he actually uses the zig zig zag pattern sometimes

RU-vid ReRyan

LMAO

actual funny comment i died of a heart attack and several illnesses

@@seignee F

particularly the plosives without voicing.

The issue with is is that comedy can be/often has nuance Hitting the same well too many times can lead to diminishing returns If you tell the same joke in the exact same way with 0 changes, you're bound to get bored Most funny jokes are at their funniest the first time they're heard or understood, that third time will rarely hit the same as the first. So it's important to add distance spice it up etc in a way that still keeps you on your toes. Some people genuinely flanderize so much to the point where they have one joke that they just turn too predictable

@@theradionicrevival8068 Oh yeah, predictability is also a problem. In economy I learned about this thing calles Marginal Benefit, which Is the benefit you get for each unit you consume of a certain product. For example, if you consume one bottle of soda, it has a great impact on you and you feel satisfied. By the fifth soda bottle you will not feel the same satisfaction you felt the first time, because marginal benefit decreases the more units you consume. The same thing happens here, like you said.

Orange you already grape at this?

Puns are the cheapest form of jokes. Their only redeeming value is their cringe factor.

Ninjawa Ya..puns can be a trashy form of jokes..litter-ally. Ya that was a pun describing a pun, sorry it's...bin a while

Well...Shakespeare was fond of them. :/

+scottseptember1992 hahahahahah

I laughed at this comment.

remember when the kkk enslaved and killed all those black people? that was funny because it happened to somebody else. because logic.

Ayyy KoolKidzKlub

@@GigaDarkness Not the facts, but maybe a lighthearted joke based on it.

dude, you're already a genius. why do you need this video???

+Mask Phantasm Yes, that's a great song.

Okay.

It shouldn't, the tips you got here was absolute shit

+iDropAll Pkers They gave a few decent tips but basing all of your jokes off of the example jokes given in a "comedy guide" is bound to fail. But thats not what they had in mind for this video. The most important tips they gave were the ones on how "comedy is subjective" and how to get in the work flow such as writing down jokes as they come to your head until you find something unique and funny. Other good tips they gave were drawing connections between things, and pointing out flaws and playing it up. You can see many popular comedies use these to their advantage.

+Andrew Ryan well in theory this sounds good but... Let's take a carrot for example. Carrots are orange, orange is the name of a fruit and a color. I like oranges. Oranges are used in certain foods. *cant think of anything more* Carrots are long. Carrots are hard. SO IS MY PENIS. Is it this you are talking about when it comes to the mind map thing? Like my "second example succeeded"? Coz I don't really get what is flawed that I'm supposed to fill in with a carrot and a mind map...

iDropAll Pkers I think you misunderstood, the mind chart is just a tool to help you create jokes, not the joke itself. So if you don't put any creativity, effort, or timing into it of course the joke isn't going to work. All the tips they gave where meant to be used in conjunction with one another. Don't blame the video because you have a harder time at grasping the balance that you must have to actually amount to good comedy.

Kraft is not a K-word.

+ziellone neither is coconut.

Spliter I am cooking in coconut oil right now.

Travis Kraft Well, that's healthy

+Travis Kraft Kraft durch Freude?

Like on the Simpsons, Sideshow Bob's arch nemesis is Bart, and a rake (:

Frrrrrr

thanks for it hope you lied