Here's a song I wrote a while back, tell me way I can approve Verse 1: I wake up in the morning, feeling like I'm trapped In my own mind, it's like I'm constantly attacked By negative thoughts, they never seem to stop They tell me that I'm worthless, that I'll never be on top Chorus: Depression, it's a heavy weight Dragging me down, can't escape Feels like I'm drowning, can't breathe But I know I gotta fight to be free Verse 2: People say "just think positive", like it's that easy But they don't know the demons inside, they don't see The darkness that surrounds me, suffocating my soul It's like I'm in a black hole, losing all control Chorus: Depression, it's a heavy weight Dragging me down, can't escape Feels like I'm drowning, can't breathe But I know I gotta fight to be free Verse 3: Sometimes I feel like giving up, like there's no point in trying But then I remember the people who love me, who keep me from dying I know I'm not alone, even when it feels that way I gotta keep pushing forward, gotta find a brighter day Chorus: Depression, it's a heavy weight Dragging me down, can't escape Feels like I'm drowning, can't breathe But I know I gotta fight to be free Outro: To all my brothers and sisters struggling with depression I know it's hard, but don't give up, keep pushing You're not alone, there's help out there Together we can overcome, we can show we care.
That song would be like 30 seconds long. Theres barely any beats you could actually rap this over, since most of them are made for 16bar verses. You Verses have 4 bars, wich means your Chorus lyrically starts wayy before the chrous of basically any beat out there. If you rap slower you might be able to stretch it to 8 bars but thats still only halfway Also, you could try to improve your rhyming. Its just ab scheme with usually 2 syllable rhymes
Nah the fourth one exists but RU-vid cut it short… which was an external factor. Our sanity to live is directly correlated with our pursuit of meaningful goals. I would ask yourself the question, “what would be the thing I would do if failure was not an option” and then pursue that goal as if failure is not an option… because if truly pursued, success is inevitable
Thank you for the kind words 🙌 I truly appreciate it! The 2nd one is called “Big Bossy” and the 3rd is called “signals” - you can find em on streaming services if you search Dominico Andretti
Announcer's Voice) Ladies and gentlemen, gather 'round, For a rap battle that will astound! In this corner, slimy and slick, Octopus, with rhymes that'll make you sick! And in the other corner, lively and leaping, Frog, whose lyrics will leave you weeping! These creatures are ready to spit raps so mean, Let the battle begin, it's about to get obscene! (Octopus) Yo, Frog, you hop around all day, But you're just a tadpole with nothing to say. You think your ribbits are so fly, But they sound more like a lullaby. I got eight tentacles, smoother than silk, While you're out here croaking like a wannabe in the swamp's silt. So hop back to your pond, Mr. Green, While I take the victory, reigning supreme! (Frog) Oh, Octopus, you think you're quite slick, But your rhymes are as tangled as your arms' thick. You may have tentacles with mind-bending tricks, But you can't escape the fact that no one cares 'bout your flicks. You try to blend in, change colors like a chameleon, But when it comes to rappin', you're as bland as vanilla. So slither back to the ocean depths, my friend, 'Cause in this battle, it's clear who'll ascend! (Octopus) Frog, you're tiny, just a little amphibian, Compared to me, you're a joke, a mere maggot's minion. You claim your leaps are something to admire, But I'll swipe those floppy legs and put out your fire. You croak, you jump, but where's the substance in your rhymes? Just empty chatter, drowning in shallow waters of times. So back in your lily pad you go, dear Frog, Leaving me victorious, while you remain stuck in the bog. (Frog) Oh, Octopus, your words may sting like a stingray, But I ribbit through them, having the last say. You boast your tentacles, claiming they give you power, But I have the ability to leap from tower to tower. Your insults are weak, just like your feeble grip, While I command respect, leaping from beat to beat. You're just a cephalopod, lost in an underwater maze, But this frog's reign is what the rap world truly craves! (Octopus) Finally, Frog, your time's come to an end, Like a prince turned subject, you'll inevitably descend. Your rhymes are as weak as the swamp's old stench, While I leave a lasting impression, never to flinch. You may be the prince with your hoppy lines, But I, Octopus, am the king of these rhymes. So take a seat, Frog, and watch as I rise, While you forever fade into rap battle lies. (Frog) Octopus, oh Octopus, you think you've won, But deep down you know it's my victory that's begun. Your insults, my friend, just don't pack a punch, While my lines have the crowd clapping like a hunch. You're all arms, but no brain, just a slimy fool, While I'm here, reigning supreme, breaking every rule. So bow down, Octopus, and admit your defeat, Because this rap battle's over, and Frog can't be beat! (Announcer's Voice) Well, well, ladies and gentlemen, what a display! Octopus and Frog, both had their say. But in the end, it was Frog who prevailed, With rhymes like a lily pad, he truly sailed. Give it up for these skilled rappers, hands in the air, And be ready for more battles, 'cause we're a rap battle affair!
The Time drops deep as does my Book. I never Overthinking, 'cause to Overthinking is the Ex of look. Beyond the walls of thoughts, life is defined. I think of Love when I'm in a Mumbai state of mind. Hope the outlook got some crook. My look don't like no dirty hook. Run up to the overlook and get the cook.
I’m just joking around 😂… in almost all of my comment responses I just match the tone of the original comment. Just to have a little fun… I’ve never actually been mad at a comment. But l enjoy when I get someone to elaborate what they mean. So I pry a bit for an explanation… Seems weird but it does a few things… 1 is it makes someone explain more clearly what they mean. 2 it makes people back track on their disses. And 3 it makes someone respond to yet another comment on the post… making it grow even stronger… lol… But I appreciate your compliment on that song! It’s called Signals by Dominico Andretti X Kaipora. Thanks for listening. Do you understand now why I’m soI’m pissed ?????? 😎
