Homework 1: Give me a good title for my poem- post it in the comments section Homework 2: Do the Quiz shawenglish.com/quizzes/basic-english-poem-quiz/ Homework 3: Write a poem and post it in the comments section
My first try: After school, i get tired Whispers me : get ready My mood's off , i cried Sleepy breezes , cozy pillows Cruel homework , my head's fried Maths questions , makes me freeze Science logics like fairies on trees What's left ? It's just the fate Bitter and bitter , the homework taste.....
Here's mine. It's not that good, I think. Please do correct if I made a mistake. And please recommend what else to add. Teddy Bear Soft and fluffy, That's how it feels. Like a buddy, The heart, it heals.
Hi Robin! I'm Layla! I watched this video again on my account. I hope you do more videos about poetry and give more examples if that possible. I want to learn more. I know that might take you more time and money, but it would be fruitful lesson. Thanks a million to you dear Robin for all the efforts you make. I'm so lucky to have a lovely and honest teacher such as you. I never can do all that without your help. You are the best ever. ❤️
Hi Robin and Leigh! I have watched this lovely lesson. I really enjoyed and I hope you make another one. This is an a especial video with a special teacher. 💗. My Homework!: 1. The title of the poem I suggest is LONELINESS. 2. I did the quiz, but I think there an issue in the link or something else, it doesn't show me the result. I will try to try again next time. 3. My poem: Spring I want to smell the flower, I go and see lots of grass, I will feel more power, I drink fresh water from my glass.
My Homework!: ✔️1. The title of the poem I suggest is LONELINESS. TRY AGAIN 2. I did the quiz, but I think there an issue in the link or something else, it doesn't show me the result. I will try to try again next time. 3. My poem: ❤️Spring ❤️I want to smell the flower, ❤️I go and see lots of grass, ❤️I will feel more power, ❤️I drink fresh water from my glass. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
It’s a lonely morning Perhaps am still mourning For my long late sibling Named conni Probably siblings are the enemies we can’t leave without Without u am left out I miss our Good old memories Here I am about to black out U slept and woke up in another far way colony 😢 Poetry ❤
Hlo watching it in 2024.. I have composed my own poem on friendship...while watching it. She is the one I enjoy with, Whether I am happy or sad, I know she'll never ditch, Even though she makes me mad...❤
It's my first ever poem guys..It's quite simple, pls tell me how is it Playing in the snow, little kids were giggling Rubbed the fog on my window, Thinking of days I couldn't bring A cup of coffee in my hand Listening to music on my phone Completely lost in a wonderland Where I was all alone
Wao❤madam very informative video . Title:Me and Morning Mam before to watch your video i wrote it is right or wrong? _____________ Title is Who am I? ___________ "I don't know who I am" Being rude, disobedient, mean, or outspoken. "I don't know who I am" I am gentle, hardworking, considerate or obedient . "I don't know who I am" I am the one to speak ill of someone, to fight over things, to behave like the worst enemy, or to abuse. "I don't know who I am" I am going to cry on small things, I am going to be angry on things, I am going to be right on the one whom I call mine or I am going to be extremely angry on him. "I don't know who I am. " ~Sundhay G~
Maam can you check my poem and can you tell me how it is and can u tell me my mistakes and also can you tell me how to avoid those. Waiting for your reply.. Here my poem is:- Winter The night of the winter is long and cold, The borne fire makes it warmer, As it can makes me hold, And the soup and noodles could makes it more charmer.
Hey ..... After watching your video I get an idea 💡 And I wrote many poems Here is one of mine **Stars** ✨✨ As they are very far These are nothing but stars A gigantic celestial body which looks so small But actually they are very large and tall In the dark blue 💙 sky They look a small blue dye But once sunrise they tell us bye
this is the title for your poem Happy to be alone. i writed a poem, the title is "Lazy" I don't want to wake up in the morning, I feel hot because of the sun, I close the windows because it's annoying, I turned on the electric fan.
Hi, I can't wait to listen to another class with you. I love listening to your sweet and soft voice because it inspires me to improve my English. Thank you.
I don’t know if I should be concerned with the amount that you are going through or not because you have a very strong sense that you’re not doing it right and I know you have to do that but you are doing what you’re supposed be done with and you have a good heart so you should have that confidence in your body that you’re going to be able with it so I think that is a great way of going through this process of getting through this and I hope that you’re able and you have some time and
A bright summer's day ------------------------------------ A bright summer's day, the sun's warm embrace, A gentle breeze whispers through leaves, so free, Nature's symphony, a tranquil, calming grace, In the azure sky, birds paint a jubilant spree. Fields of green stretch, where wildflowers bloom, Their colors dance, in meadows kissed by the light, Underneath the trees, there's a sense of perfume, As the world awakens from its peaceful night. Children laugh and play, their joy knows no end, In the golden hours, where innocence finds its way, With each passing moment, new memories they'll tend, On this bright summer's day, in the sun's warm display. Picnic blankets spread, families gather near, Sharing laughter and stories, a bond so strong, Ice cream in hand, there's nothing left to fear, As the hours waltz by, like a cheerful song. Cicadas hum their tune in the midday heat, Nature's rhythm plays, a soothing, timeless song, Underneath the shade, it's a perfect, cool retreat, Where the daydreams linger, and memories prolong. As the sun sets low, painting skies in shades of fire, A bright summer's day bids a sweet adieu, In the tranquil twilight, as stars begin to inspire, We'll cherish these moments, forever in our view.
Heyy, check out my poem. Its called "Will you be my valentine?" Love in quarantine Our romance bloomed and I wasn’t sure if I was alright, But your love took me Soaring high, That’s why you’re mine Day and night. Will you be the joyous Wine in my life? And can I hold your Delicate hand as we Celebrate our love on Every valentine? I’m so grateful to have you in my life, You mean the world to me. You’re my everything. I don’t believe in fate or destiny. But I know you’re the one for me. We’ll build a life together. and nothing can come between us my love. You are worth loving, Leaving you is the worst, This month will end soon, And you remain my glowing moon.
Summer Today is summer day , I can't always have my way, I wish i can play out side, Some of my friends come to say hay , Today was a bummer, At least Today is summer day .
I was having poem competition when I saw this video and I have some points to keep in my mind after that next morning came I done my best then I got 1 price 😊
Hello... i had watched your teaching it awesome.. i would like to ask 1 questio. Is it will be good to write a poem in a way having conversation Between me and the things or object which is not human..?? 😊❤
*Echoes Of Love* Initial breakdown was okay, But gradually it hurts more and more, It was like a painful bouquet, I was screaming for. The yearning, the longings, all died, When she moved, and I cried, I want her to stay, But someone better than me took her away. One sided may be, Like the love of leaf for a tree, I and the leaf were betrayed by, We both know we will never be. Painful love but beautiful story, Incomplete but about nothing to worry, I will pray for whom you choose to be best, Though moving on won't be a simple test. -kashish arora I tried I don't know if it is poem even or not.. but hope it would
Hello, Robin. I did the quiz and I tried twice hahaha. On the first attempt, I only got 2/10 and this irritated me so I decided to try again and the second attempt was 5/10. Okay, I admit that I am not a poet.
Can anyone check my poem!? Jealousy It is the starting of war, You make it you loose it, It is not what you can share . Makes the anger high and high Stubborn feelings and thoughts, It made me oppressively cry.
In the cold winter night, Moon glows like light, The climate is very chill, As we do anything as will. We usually wake up late, But,we blame the fate, We drink hot coffee, And,eat some toffee.
Best English teacher I have ever seen I hope you don't mean but ma'am you daam look like a queen and now I hope you don't mind 😅 And ma'am title I think for your poem "EVERY MORNING I'M ALONE" :)
I wrote one poem The lamp of light or The light of human In light of charming Where baby can born A light of wonders They grow like a thunder In light of emission They get admission A light of reflection They throw their fear for deflection They shine like a moon in a darker sky They bright like a sun to fly and fly They sleep as a dusk To work like a musk They silent like a deep water To become a master They never feel lethargic To turn their dreams as magic ✨ Poet Aarya kumari Mishra.... Can u choose which topic suits on it... the first or the second?
When I saw you on this lesson tonight It was my first time but I hope it won't be the last Would you come again with another video So I could see you every then and now!
HELLO Mam. I hope you are well. I am from Pakistan. I watched your video and it's very amazing and informative Thanks alot. Title I suggest is My activities with beautiful day.❤ Homework _________ Title is Silent Friend When I feel alone She talk to me When I stand alone She guide to me When I cry alone She laugh me When I sometimes gone She miss me
Summer I ran to the hay, To have a play, After I drank a cold drink, Inorder not to shrink, Because of the hot weather, That made everyone to sweat beyond wonder.
I’m grateful 🙏🏻 For the video and clear explanation! Poem is a song of a Soul! It can be written in a spark of inspiration! Doesn’t matter if big or small. Power of One’s imagination has no limitation! If well written - able to touch the hearts of all! Poem is a beautiful form of self expression! Blessings 💜
Today's morning It's dawn For morning walk I have gone I have seen the sun rises With my eyes I felt brezee weather My friend was there who was wearing a jacket with leather I saw some birds were flying so higher Now I and my friend are happier I saw some boys who are army aspirants They were running so fast with them I couldn't match my movement I tried my best at last I came Beck to home and that's how today's morning gone ..
The title of ur poem could me "My mornings" The sky The blue thing that is bright, With a lot of clouds and light, The thing that is round like a freshly baked fluffy pie, I would love to fly in this beautiful sky To describe this in perfect words, The winners are the free birds, But at night it's black style, Would flatter the heart of every selenophile.
First, thank you for your tips. Second, here is my poem, it is about sadness. It is my first time, so please don't judge me🙂 It is a pain, When my money drain, My life is a gloom, Where i never bloom.
Thankyou ma'am for this beautiful lesson thankyou so so so much ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ But i couldn't find the tittle please make one video and suggest us more for tittle please 🙏🙏🥺🥺
Money Life is agreeable with money, With it, you'll get more lovers, Imagine if I'm having money, I'll be regarded as the dearest. ~SUNUNU IMAM FUSEINI.
When I caught in your glance, my heart begins to take a thump. I afraid more than day by day, I don't wanna lose you away. Cigarette can destroy my lungs, you can ruin me in your hands. One a secret I never told, that I have crush on you.
for my best teacher in all times 1- thank you for your lesson 2 - you can choose from this names for the poem . the summer, today will be good.with no plan.the fun of the summer. 3- i will right different kind of poetry for my friend Mia .she is youtuber model and i will write it for you in the comment soon too . 4 - and that is the important point but i have not time to write it now by details that point is why we write poetry?sure it is beautiful but the important reason which i will write it now comes from our language .poetry in arabic language means the feeling and we write the poetry to give the others our feeling to share us our feeling or to teach others or to help others or to ask others for helping to other people or for us or to our girls to show them how much we love them and or, or, or we will have a lot of or if i will write for you why we write the poetry . i wrote my first poetry from 35 years for my girl .i was in 15 years old . and i wrote some english poetry in my channel for who i love and for fatherless and motherless .i wrote for homeless a poem too but i want to make it song .i tried to find somebody to do it in usa but i did not find anybody.i have more than 5 or 6 poem for the girls who i love but i did not download it yet. i will try to make it songs because i try to learn how i make songs as a professional and i am trying to learn english very well because to much words in my mind and the grammar will help me to write more good poetry .you will surprise when you will know the reason . the reason is the searching for beautiful women to marry her in usa or in any country which they are speaking english .i am 50 years old and i am not married yet.and the reason for that will make me tell you my life story and no time for that. i will be happy if you visit my channel on youtube art in short time and you watch my poetry and my songs which is by english language which they need some fixed for the voice but the important point is your watching to my movie the dream. it is by arabic language but i translated to english and please give me your opinion about it. may we will work together in my magazine the art light electronic magazine. i had a lot of problems to publish it from many years until now and this the second reason make me i want to leave egypt . i need people from every where in the world to work with me because my first target is make the people around the world and governments loves the united world which no egypt, no usan no england but only one united world that the principle which make that world became united is the science because that is the only principle will make us will become united in one-day and i wish that day comes soon and may be you can help in that. i do not promise by giving you money because that is will depend on your sales in your country which you will be the manager to my magazine over their.you and who will work with you will take 70% from the sales in your country. thank you for your time .best wishes . god bless you.
Title I wake to my Day, I been wanting to write a poem, to help in healing process, many years ago, I was a soldier in Germany, and I went to the Red area of Nurenburgh , I am wanting to capture how, I would want to please my desire for, sin, and how, sin is a process, that lead to an end of brief bliss, but ends in despair.
Well, hello there This is my boem but I don’t have the title to it . Also when i die Also when they will cry Also when dry the eye I’ll not return in any day
