Oooo you wanna talk trauma? Ok! Well the OC seen in my pfp is called Erin Thorne. She is from a maze runner inspired rp story made by me. Her dad is the leader of the maze and she can't tell anyone or she will be killed. Her dad murdered her mum. Her dad tested on her and turned her into a demon. She was thrown in the maze. Her entire clearing full of people was devoured by grievers (big monsters) in front of her very eyes. This includes her best friend who she was falling in love with. They also destroyed the clearing and her home in it. Then she starved for days waiting for the creatures to leave but they didn't so she legged it into the maze. She had no idea where she was going or if she'd survive. She then found another clearing containing the person who pulled some levers in the maze leading to the events in Erin's clearing. That same person laughed at her trauma, joked about her dead best friend and proceeded to kick her out of THAT clearing as well. She then had to live in the maze. She almost died there. The person who kicked her out saw this and left her to die. He also called her things because of being a demon. She tried to cut her horns off but it didn't work. More trauma throughout included--- Her best friend from outside (not the one from her clearing) being "killed" by her dad. Being tested on, abused and tortured by her own dad. Killing multiple people by accident from being out of control in demon form. Killing someone she fell in love with and kissed. They came back to life though. Also killing someone who trusted her and talked about everything to her. Someone who felt like a brother stabbed himself after an argument. Someone who guarded her outside the maze gave his life for her to live. She tried saving some friends but failed. She watched a mass murderer kill loads of people and then she killed them. She doesn't deal with things well and trys to not cry because her dad says "crying is weak" and other things. She thinks everyone hates her and some people do. THIS ISNT EVEN HALF OF IT! So yeah. Trauma. I know it's a lot. I don't know why I decided to share this but... Enjoy I guess! 😅
Recipe for an oc! Ingredients: 25mg of comedy 2 cups of trauma 1 tbsp salt 1tsp-1/2 cup of hotness 1/4-1 cup of secret spices (abilities) 2tbsp sugar 2 cups trauma Method: Mix salt and sugar to create the perfect additude In a seperate bowl mix trauma and comedy, these mix well Put the additude and comedy-trauma in a bowl with your hotness and mix well Finally, season with your secret spices and bake in your head for 6-12 months
I was using this video as a guide for my new musical and I had a vauge idea of what I wanted for my protaganist. But using this video helped me figure out exactly what she was all about, (and a lot of it was also kinda ironic because she lets other people use her as a shoulder to cry on but is secrectly suffering from PTSD for three quaters of the story, than finally cracks to the love intrest while also trying to deafet a evil pirate dictator, who took over her home and almost killed her in her backstory and has to get help from a prince to save it.) Thank you for helping with my writing, this really means alot
Thank you so much for the advice! The video was great and has helped me figure out the missing pieces to some of my characters. Love the ideas about your Plot and OCs ♥️
I’m going to start writing my first truly long story (I haven’t put anything on paper I’m still working on the plot) but these videos have been an immense help! Thank you!
Thank you so much! I’ve been so stuck trying to make new characters recently for drawings I make, but your videos really help me come up with unique storylines and character traits!
Tip I do:as you make stories there in flesh the character out from a blank slate and then just go back and rewrite bits to match your fleshed out character
Thank you so much! Your content has always helped me with the story I want to tell! I am planning to start it soon so this video and really all your videos are really helpful in figuring out the characters and story. I look forward to your stuff, and your own story! Thanks!
When you’re whole main story concept is to make the origin story your main story. Having a reverse mystery in you know the ending but how did we get there bc future vision outcomes and almost all the visions end in that way. So Motivation: Knowledge to save the future of her home.
well I make characters in the Rick riordan verse and my own stories I love giving them trauma- I mean character development I love writing my villians and there are two types of villians I like the ones who are angsty and have a reason to be villians and the ones who are evil because they just are
Here is my characters traum- a mean... LORE! Well the OC seen in my pfp is called Erin Thorne. She is from a maze runner inspired rp story made by me. Her dad is the leader of the maze and she can't tell anyone or she will be killed. Her dad murdered her mum. Her dad tested on her and turned her into a demon. She was thrown in the maze. Her entire clearing full of people was devoured by grievers (big monsters) in front of her very eyes. This includes her best friend who she was falling in love with. They also destroyed the clearing and her home in it. Then she starved for days waiting for the creatures to leave but they didn't so she legged it into the maze. She had no idea where she was going or if she'd survive. She then found another clearing containing the person who pulled some levers in the maze leading to the events in Erin's clearing. That same person laughed at her trauma, joked about her dead best friend and proceeded to kick her out of THAT clearing as well. She then had to live in the maze. She almost died there. The person who kicked her out saw this and left her to die. He also called her things because of being a demon. She tried to cut her horns off but it didn't work. More trauma throughout included--- Her best friend from outside (not the one from her clearing) being "killed" by her dad. Being tested on, abused and tortured by her own dad. Killing multiple people by accident from being out of control in demon form. Killing someone she fell in love with and kissed. They came back to life though. Also killing someone who trusted her and talked about everything to her. Someone who felt like a brother stabbed himself after an argument. Someone who guarded her outside the maze gave his life for her to live. She tried saving some friends but failed. She watched a mass murderer kill loads of people and then she killed them. She doesn't deal with things well and trys to not cry because her dad says "crying is weak" and other things. She thinks everyone hates her and some people do. She has died multiple times THIS ISNT EVEN HALF OF IT! So yeah. Trauma. I know it's a lot. I don't know why I decided to share this but... Enjoy I guess! 😅 ALSO FOR ANYONE WHO MADE IT TO THE END, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING IT ALL I KNOW ITS A LOT! Ive been working on this for nearly a year with my friends. FOR MORE LORE, CHECK OUT THE CHANNEL- V4L3RIE please do it, you dont have to subscribe to her but at least check it out! She makes maze lore videos, funny skits and ship edits (we dont talk about the ship edits though) please no hate on her channel or i will remove it. If you want me to explain any videos just ask in the comments! Thank you! ❤ My friend is quite a lot younger than me btw so definitely no hate and i know some videos are rushed and drawings arent amazing but still! Edit: more trauma She came back to life after sacrificing a girl named meadow. She didnt mean to kill her... Recently a new maze part opened up. Erin found it. She believed it to be the exit as it looked like the exit had been believed to look like. She then led everyone towards it. The door then closed behind them all causing them to be trapped. It was in fact not an exit but more, dangerous unknown maze. Erin blames herself for leading them all there. They descovered a girl named Crystal who told them she had been there for years and led them to a clearing. She lied and said everyone was still alive. Really, she was the only one. Recently in this new maze, a fear simulation room opened up that is controlled by the maze boss, Ceaser, and everyone has been forced to enter. She had to re-live all her trauma, face her worst fears and face unimaginable things. These things include - seeing Valerie shoot herself, her dad stabbing her, her clearing being destroyed again, her old friend dying again, her turning into a demon and more. She also recieved a beating from ceaser for no reason. A little later, after the fear simulation, ceaser injected her with a serum, making her think he was good and the gladers were evil. She tried hurting them and running away. During this, she was terrified. She also accidentally revealed the truth that ceaser is her father. This made ceaser angry (even though it was kinda his own fault). He managed to create another serum to make everyone forget it. Erin then snapped out of it when Valerie gained her trust again. Erin tried to injure ceaser only to receive a bullet to the head! (Kind of him) She is now bleeding out. Will she be able to come back to life this time?
1:12 agree with something with your tone of voice and body language, but send the opposite message with the words you’re actually speaking (in shorter definition, my kind of humor)
When you’re whole main story concept is to make the origin story your main story. Having a reverse mystery in you know the ending but how did we get there bc future vision outcomes and almost all the visions end in that way. So Motivation: Knowledge to save the future of her home.
