I read 1000 Book Concepts to Help you Create the PERFECT One 

Mine: In a medieval, post-apocalyptic world, a recently retired infiltrator is called back into service to save her kingdom from a group of deadly pagans.

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My pitch: A random man is chosen as the representative of humanity and must choose 99 other people to bring along on an alien colony ship before the Earth is annihilated.

Let's try the single sentence pitch! Hailing from a society as cold and calculating as the computer it was born from, Flora grapples with her humanity of inhuman expectations. It is so much more tbh but I don't know how to condense the premise into a single sentence pitch without destroying the other three plot twists.

Group of securities guards blackmail their wealthy owner of mansion to give them tons of money however to their suprise the mansion owner give them offer to even secretly run the house and his business. And so it begins the betrayal and worst corruption scandal in history of mankind.

Now I’m curious about what you would say about my book pitch! Here it is: Two elven sisters bloom from the vine of life and are hunted for their rare gifted powers by creatures thought to only exist in tales of lore.

Seeing y'all's pitches makes me want to pitch this story idea I've been threatening to write for a while now: In the not too distant future, a veteran and her logistics company is contracted to deliver cybernetic limbs to a PMC, but is betrayed by her colleague and admirer and is forced to become a cyborg to survive.

A gothic story set in 1963 texas, a son of a used car sales man meets a young handyman, they start a new life in san Fransisco but they begin to drift apart. Not a happy ending

I am just shocked tonsee yoir sub count? Your quality of content and personality is top teir! Excited to join and support you on your rise!

it is nice to feel like i am being heard i new to your channel i have been writing for about 10 years for my own enjoyment did think anyone else would like them because they deal a lot with internal conflict there is other thins going on but all the stories i had read didn't really have hard emotional struggles so many people deal with i have recently learned that is what what a lot of readers are looking for i might have just been ahead of the game so i am hoping i will fined a place in the book world

wow!! you opened my eyes- I tick alot of boxes, but never thought of pitching like this!!! thanks!!

Man you have such great insights

Regarding the test, i was actually intrested in both 1 and 3 and not 2

When you've written a short piece of fiction, one maybe two pages long, and it mentions *climate change*, *AI*, the apocalypse, the post-apocalyptic world, questions whether other life is in the universe, explains that they probably won't come here, and gets into the AI being extremely depressed (so much conflict, both external and internal). It's not a pitch, just musing on the sheer amount of interest that could be potentially generated from a page or two I spent less than an hour writing (the two dad jokes aside - 1) whether you can be stir crazy if you have no arms for stirring, and 2) the poor AI's designation + the file type spelling out 'human' if you line them up properly)

Really good video. Thanks.

Mine is hard because it essentially has two main characters with distinct, but interrelated plot arcs, but here goes: "On a death march masquerading as a pilgrimage, an impoverished noblewoman and a demon-possessed boy seek answers to their wretched fates, and find them in service of a man who aims to shape the destiny of the entire world."

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pitch for my WIP: A sheltered but drive high school graduate enrols in an elite magical university, believing it will bring her an opportunity to achieve her childhood dream of uncovering the truth behind the sudden disappearance of an entire country from the international community over a century ago. It’s set in a fantasy world, and I’m worried that this doesn’t quite convey that very well😂 as well as being maybe a bit long. What do you think?

Guessed right on that pitch! A couple additional points. Number 3 has no indication of character relationships or character conflict. We have two names; we have no idea how those people are going to generate interpersonal conflict. Even for fantasy, which often involves world-level conflict or stakes, that high-level conflict is not sufficient. For Number 1, I’d also note that two characters just stuck on a train alone is a hard sell for a whole novel. Not saying it can’t be done, I’m just saying it’s going to be difficult to do right. Presumably the only scenes that get the reader out of that setting will be flashbacks, which could encourage an overuse of flashback. What are the characters doing about being stuck on that train? When I think of whole novels that take place on a train, I’m thinking of stories with lots of related characters crammed together, and/or lots of conflict and stakes generated by the fact of being stuck together in this claustrophobic setting (Snowpiercer, Murder on the Orient Express).

On the eve of the War of 1812, a common British soldier is thrust into a perilous mission to escort a band of self-liberated slaves to freedom while pursued by a ruthless bounty hunter and the martial forces at his disposal.

Darkness fills a teen boys surroundings when he awakes to a seemingly endless cave, his memory loss sends him on a journey to discover his true Origins which leads him to battles against opposing forces that threatens the world Any feedback random stranger reading this.

An MFA program is very helpful in learning about the writing and publishing industries. I'm a year away from receiving my degree.

Can you give a formula for a book with multiple protagonist?

I just found your channel yesterday and I’m surprised at the little following with this great content. I have had this idea for quite a while now but I never actually wrote a pitch so.. I hope this is at least a little interesting. A young sorceress does her very best to keep up appearances, after her brother mysteriously disappeared seven years ago, until she receives a letter that makes her question everything she thought she knew about her family’s past. (I see how it sounds similar to the first pitch example with the letter but I really did plan the inciting incident to be that letter so I just left it at that) Criticism very much welcomed! Have a lovely day :)

I don't write but do read romance from time to time. I've had an itch for a book and I am sure I am not the only one so if someone wants to take this idea and run with it feel free. So the idea is for a queer straight romance. Okay I know you are thinking what but wait for it. A lonely incel wants to loose his virginity but can't find a girl who wants to date him let alone marry him. Then he makes friends with a bi guy and bi guys girlfriend. The three explore the difference between romantic attraction, sexual attraction, and friendship.

Sherlock Holmes, but he's a wizard and all the mysteries culminate in one large conspiracy.

Yeah guys, just PREDICT the trends 2+ years ahead of time, that's all. LMAO

Pitch for my wip(which i kinda just came up with on the spot so probs not good): Years of oppression has finally reached a breaking point, where two members of the oppressed will finally- with a cost- help return their people to the place where they belong, while navigating and using everything in their power to do so.

the problem with writing for market or trend is they flood the place with generic stereotypical stories they don't have to be good or original a lot of people with dark skin are outraged at all the everybody is racist books movies and youtube content i choose to start my own fire instead of feeding an out of control one talking the lives of innocent people that might sound harsh but if i want the world to be a better place it starts with writing stories that show kindness and not everything is bad in the wold i grow up poor the amount of hate i see about that group of people is skinning even now that have nothing to do with skin tone

The Rainbow Galaxy: In a dystopian world where art and queerness is increasingly illegal, will Milo succeed in opening the portal to the Rainbow Galaxy, a queer artist utopia, or will she perish in the post capitalist hellscape? Does that sound interesting?? I’m planning to probably self publish, but I still need to market it well

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My pitch: A naive teenage girl flees the domineering CEO posing her as his daughter by pursuing a “free-spirited” musician who is actually a struggling addict. Feedback very much welcome.

I have a question. I ask this in the least political way possible, but it does have to do with politics. I know a lot of the issues you brought up that are selling really well right now seem to play a bit more on the left side of things. Now, my novel takes place in rural Texas and New Mexico and most of the main characters are very socially conservative cowboy-types, and they and their way of thinking are portrayed positively. Politics don't come up much, but theism vs atheism do, as well a one-off comment on abortion (again, the conservative side is portrayed positively). I want to make it clear that this is not a political book, it's not about anything currently going on in the news, it's just written from a very backwoods, country way of thinking. Is this something that is unlikely to be published in the current marketplace?

I'm proud to write well without the A.I.

I agree. Trans & climate crisis stories are adored by DEI editors & publishers. But do they sell? Netflix & Disney are losing billions on political correct narrative sermons.

I choose #2. #1 - That pitch needs editorial work. "And now there are two of them." Two of what? Now there are two best friends??? I expect the writer is trying to say Zyair and the sister's best friend are locked up on a train. Also, locked up on a train... how do you get locked up on a train?? It is a mode of transport, that shuttles people from one station to another. Is the writer trying to say that the train somehow got stopped in its tracks? #3 Isn't this a pitch in the Romance genre? The pitch should have that main romantic conflict in the pitch.

I can't WAIT to write the gayest racial victimization story set in an A.I.-run virtual reality world that is falling apart from climate change during a war on immigration. The twist is that the oppositional characters are minorities also, and the main antagonist is a genderfluid transexual. I'm pretty sure the protagonist, the sidekick, and the antagonist are going to end up in an abusive but very cutting-edge throuple. "The heart wants what the heart wants" emotional thoroughline will permeate the entire work. Also, I will still figure out a way to make straight white males the secret true villians that pull all the strings behind the scenes. Toxic Masculinity™ WILL be seen for what it is. ✊🏿 You made this happen. It's going to happen.

Regarding trends: So, if you're writing leftist lit, you'll have a much better chance of being published.

So there's nothing trending right now that isn't baseless, shallow, unsubstantiated, tyrannical bs?