IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 | How to write a perfect introduction 

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Hi Asiya, need your feedback in this for 10:02 I have written, The pie chart and bar graph illustrates what are the world's water resources and where they are allocated.

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1)The Chart provides information about number of people coming to australia and canada between a five year period 2012 and 2017. 2)The pie chart displays data about amount of water resources being provided globally. 3)The Maps illustrates its changes for newbury high school in the past year 1980,at the present,and its future developments for the year 2030. 4)The chart displays various stages of process involved in reproduction of aluminium drink cans. 5)The diagram displays how electricity is being produced by utilizing geothermal energy.

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the bar chart gives information about the visitors who visiting in both countries in the year 2012 and 2017.

the diagram displays the stages involved in aluminium drink cans recylcing.

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The maps below represent the periodical developmental changes in Newbury High School and its constructional expected improvements in 2030.

the chart displays how many tourists travelled to Australia and Canada from 2012 to 2017

The given graphs illustrate the distribution of water resources world wide.

The chart provides information on the natural sources of water available on earth and examine the sources of freshwater supply laying emphasis on the distribution of the Renewable freshwater supply across different regions of the world

I have used following style. Please let me know if they are correct. Example 1: The provided data comprises a bar chart illustrating the top countries that produced and consumed the most oil in 2010 and 2015. The provided data comprises a bar chart representing how many people were employed in four major industry sectors in the UK between 1910 and 2012. The chart illustrates the leading nations that produced and consumed oil in the years 2010 and 2015 / in two time periods (2010 and 2015). Example 2: The provided data comprises a chart representing how many people visited Australia and Canada as tourists over a five-year period. Example 3: The provided data comprises two pie charts and a bar chart representing the distribution of different types of water resources and its supply in various regions of the world. The provided data comprises maps representing Westfield university before and after its proposed redevelopment. The provided data comprises maps representing the main changes that have taken in Newbury High School from 1980 until the present moment and the proposed development up until 2030. Example 4: The provided data comprises a diagram illustrating the steps are involved in recycling aluminum drink cans. Example 5: The provided data comprises a diagram illustrating the process of electricity generation in a geothermal energy.

The given line graph illustrates that how many number of explorers visited Australia and Canada over a five-year period.

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The maps provide the change of the year 1980 and now of the new plans developed.

hello asiya i have a question in the introduction do i just need to paraphrase it or do i need to paraphrase and write more?

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The graph describes the number of the employees at different locations in the Uk economy between 1910 and 2010.

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The maps display information about the previous, current, and proposed design of Newbury High School.

Hello maam can i use The bar graph illustrates the top ten nations who produces and consumes oil in the year 2010 and 2015?? Please reply 🙏

Hi,is this correct to say that:The diagram displays the stages which involved in producing electricity by geothermal energy??

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my introductions were as follows: The provided graph gives information on the foreign tourism of the two developed nations of Canada and Australia between a five-year period. The provided graphs illustrate the type and share of the major water resources across the globe which are namely saline and freshwater. The following maps give insight on the current structure of the Westfield University while proposing some developments in the future. The provided three maps illustrate the layout of the Newbury High School in 1980 and the present while proposing a redefined structure for the future. The diagram gives information on the processes involved in the recycling of a simple aluminium drink cans. The following diagram illustrates how the heat from the Earth can be utilised to generate electricity.

The information regarding thé changes that took place in the Newbury High School in the life span of 43 years from 1970 tở present date is illustrated by the rendered diagram.

the diagram illustrates the process of producing electricity using by geothermal energy. is it write?

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The diagram illustrates the procedure by which aluminium drink cans are recylcled. how about this one?

Is this correct? The diagram illustrates the steps on how the aluminum drink cans were recycled.

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The chart illustrates ten of the highest oil producing and consuming nations in the years 2010 and 2015. / The chart displays ranks of the first ten nations on the basis of maximum oil produced and consumed in the years 2010 and 2015. [Will these work?]

Greetings Ma'am . I'm a big fan of yours and I hv a question In the example of " how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity" can we also rephrase this question as " The diagram illustrates the process of, how the electrity is being produced using the geothermal energy"... P.S. looking forward getting a reply as soon as possible

Can you make a perfect overview please ?

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The Chart provide information on Australia And Canada tourist for 2012 to 2017

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I think it’s a great one for writing task 1.

In 11:36 is it okay if i said The maps illustrate the Westfield university currently and the improvements in the future ? And in 12:40 is it also good if i said the given maps display the changes over different periods of time of Newbury high school and the vision of development in 2030

The maps provide information what will change in newbury high school after its development up until 2030 The diagram illustrates the steps of produce electricity by using geothermal energy.. Is it write or wrong?

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"The data presentes a complete study about worldwide water resources including renewable freshwater distribution." Sounds good?

we cannot add 2 overviews right?

how can levels of employment be written as how many people were employed? it changes the meaning.

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Can i say: the diagram provides information about the step of how to recycle the aluminum drink cans

I'm gonna take the test again on Nov 26. I previously got speaking 7.5, reading 8.5, listening 8, but got a 6.5 in writing due to running out of time and mistakenly focusing on task 1 instead of task 2. :( I've been watching your videos and find them really helpful so I'll have to ask, which do you recommend between your IELTS academic pack or the step by step writing tutorial?

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