IELTS Writing Task 1 Academic For Beginners

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🔥Welcome to your Ultimate Guide to IELTS Task 1 Writing Academic!🔥
If you're a beginner, we've got you covered. This is not just another guide; it's the longest, most detailed, most comprehensive guide available anywhere on the internet. Our aim? To help you ace your IELTS Writing Task 1 with ease.
In this video, we reveal the secrets of high-achieving students. We'll share the tips, strategies, and structures that only Band 8 and 9 students use. These tips have helped thousands of students score higher, and they can do the same for you.
We also introduce a simple, foolproof structure that you can apply to any Task 1 question. This structure will make your writing process much more manageable and will help you to produce coherent, well-structured responses.
But that's not all! We'll also walk you through, step by step, how to write a Band 9 sample. See first-hand what a top-scoring IELTS Task 1 answer looks like, and learn how to emulate this in your own writing.
Finally, we provide a checklist that you can use to review your own writing. This checklist will ensure you don't miss any crucial elements in your response and will help you self-assess and refine your writing skills.
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00:00:00 Introduction
00:00:30 Top 10 Tips
00:11:44 Top 10 Key Mistakes
00:22:56 Question Types
00:31:18 Task 1 Academic Structure
00:37:15 Band 9 Sample
01:04:40 Step-by-Step Walkthrough
01:09:52 Checklist

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@delta676 11 месяцев назад

I watched this 1 day before my exam, used what he taught in this video and his other videos about writing. Eventually, got 7 in writing with overall band score of 8. Thank you much for giving us so valuable knowledge.

@Ieltsadvantage 11 месяцев назад

Fantastic! Congratulations!

@QUIZZY000 10 месяцев назад

Wow you've done a great job!

@meenukurian779 10 месяцев назад

Going through the same phase today🙂

@happypolll 10 месяцев назад

u r so good, where u from

@GavharErmanova-bp6ok 9 месяцев назад

Waw fantastic👍👍

@Mohammadali_9999 9 месяцев назад

I watched 40 minutes of your writing tutorials the midnight before my exam, it totally cleared my mind from all the wrong things I did at writing, it easily improved my writing score from 6.5 to 7.5 . Thank you man, you are awesome.

@Ieltsadvantage 9 месяцев назад

Excellent!

@ashaponikiewska3482 11 месяцев назад

It's a fantastic channel that you have here. I have been watching your videos while preparing for IELTS exam for a couple of weeks. I just got my results - Academic - S-8.5, R-8.5, L-8.5, W-7.5. Overall band 8.5. I don't think it would have been possible without this channel. Truly grateful

@Ieltsadvantage 11 месяцев назад

Fantastic scores! Congratulations!

@loidafework6780 10 месяцев назад

Hey how long did you practice for the IELTS??

@ashaponikiewska3482 10 месяцев назад

@@loidafework6780 I took around 10 days to prepare.

@deomarcoangeloolarte4824 9 месяцев назад

Hello Chris! I would like to express my appreciation for this video. Watched it 3 days before my IELTS exam and was able to get 7.5 in writing, on my first attempt. I hope you keep producing contents like this and continue to be a blessing for future examiners..😊😇 IELTS advantage is truly the best! 💯

@Ieltsadvantage 9 месяцев назад

Well done! If you ever need our help in the future, you know where to contact us.

@its_past_here 3 месяца назад

Thinking back I did the same although I didn't appreciate my band of 7.5

@ssyo33 Год назад

I just first discovered this channel 3 days before my exam. It helps a lot and I got a 7.5 overall. Thanks!

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

Great job! Congratulations!

@zamanthaaraneta5497 11 месяцев назад

I finally found a clearer information that covered the entire prep for writing task, thank you very much

@raiyanrahman7201 Год назад

Sir i have no idea how to thank you. You're teaching methods are the easiest. You're the best IELTS teacher.

@malligaidentalacademy 11 месяцев назад

Hello sir With deep gratitude and Humblenes I would like to say that your free videos in RU-vid have helped me get a good score in reading 8.5 Listening 8.5 writing 7 and speaking 7. I need an overall score of 7 for my ORE Dental registration. This is more than happy for me . I found your channel very late in my preparation otherwise i would have joined the course and learnt even better. I would recommend your channel to my friends and students. You are doing a great and genuine teaching service to the community of IELTS. Out of all Ielts channels your channel content is very apt and to the point . Only with your channel people can pass easily. Pls publish this testimonial in your RU-vid

@mahiurrahman Год назад

The video is a masterpiece, you cleared everything about writing task 1 in a single class. The most important thing about this video is the sequence of topics you have presented here, that infused to concentrate more. Also, thanks for scrutinizing a band 9 example.

@jashanbhullar4254 Год назад

I am blessed to find your channel on the internet 👍🏻

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

Glad you enjoy it!

@AlejandroMurinigo Год назад

Me too!

@HarmanSingh-ig2dj Год назад

Me too

@happinessokoli5665 11 месяцев назад

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@happinessokoli5665 11 месяцев назад

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@ibnabassalhassan8463 Год назад

Thank you Chris. This is a life saver. I have my IELTS exam coming up next three weeks and I was really thinking about the writing part. This will really help me.

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

Glad it was helpful!

@tryyourselff 5 месяцев назад

How was exam?

@okaycuttt32 Год назад

Hey chris! I just wanted to thank you, I gave my test 3 days ago and was super worried about the writing section. Thanks to your help, I was able to achieve a 7.5 band in writing. My overall score was 8.0, thanks again for everything!

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

That's amazing! Congratulations! If you need help in the future, you know where we are.

@nimrach6625 11 месяцев назад

Can you plz help me how you got high score in writing

@christycaroline3697 Год назад

Hi Chris, just got my IELTS academic results. I'm happy to share that I have secures 8.5 in both listening and reading and 7 in both writing and speaking. Thanks for your videos. They've helped me a lot to score an overall band score 8 at my first attempt. Really glad I found you.

@christycaroline3697 Год назад

*secured

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

Great job!

@ami_631 11 месяцев назад

You are the best IELTS teacher to my eyes sir.Salute you.

@noorfatimamalik2287 7 месяцев назад

Hi Chris!! Coming back here to thank you for your guidance. I got a 7 in my WRITING task today. All thanks to you. 💟 My overall band is 8, individually L-8.5 R- 7.5 S-8.5. MAY GOD BLESS YOU.💓 I took your free course of writing too and watched so many of your videos. You are such an angel my family is so happy. All credit to you.💌

@Ieltsadvantage 7 месяцев назад

Excellent! Congratulations!

@blinkteumeforeverstay4769 5 месяцев назад

Speaking 8.5 you're perfect in speaking.. congratulations, you're great,,!!

@tryyourselff 5 месяцев назад

@@blinkteumeforeverstay4769hi, do you need speaking partner? Because I do

@leto6541 10 месяцев назад

What an amazing video Chris, you've really made it easy to understand. Before, IELTS was very intimidating for me, but you've broken it down and revealed what IELTS actually is, and now that I UNDERSTAND it, it doesn't seem overwhelming anymore.

@Ieltsadvantage 10 месяцев назад

Glad it helped! If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.

@rejoicingnow 11 месяцев назад

Hello Chris, thank you very much. You are the best teacher i have found in the internet.I have my IELTS exam in 10 days and your channel is what I need

@Ieltsadvantage 11 месяцев назад

You're very welcome! In the meantime, you should read this article from our website 'IELTS Advantage- My IELTS test is next week, what should I do?". It details what you should do from a month down to the last day before your exam. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact us. Best of luck with your test.

@Zahiyaelzuber Год назад

Thankgod I found your channel thank you for all the effort you are putting in your videos ❤️

@gajendrakc813 9 месяцев назад

So easy to understand, yet so effective. Thank you Chris. Subscribed.

@seavaaddiktedviratian4670 11 месяцев назад

Thanks a lot . After going to the preparation class for more than a month I found you as blessing. 🌸

@AIAnswer567 11 месяцев назад

This video woke me up. You're the best teacher ever

@fouziasubhani5846 11 месяцев назад

You are right, When we hate something then we never ever learn. I strongly agreed with you no matter what is your profession but you have to describe charts and data to other people.

@nasrinashrafi6475 8 месяцев назад

It's the best teaching on task1 I've seen and heard so far. Thank you so much.

@Mz_Shally 10 месяцев назад

You’re actually a life saver, thank you Chris

@Ieltsadvantage 10 месяцев назад

You are most welcome! If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.

@CentaurisNomadus Год назад

Hey, Chris! I am delighted to share my results with you! S-7.0, W-7.0, R-9.0, L-9.0, that is a band 8 certificate! 😄 To everyone reading this, just keep it super simple and practice a lot - that works. To be honest, I thought my speaking was pretty bad regarding its task achievement part, but I made only a few mistakes. I did not have enough time to check my writing task 1 response fully. But I have got 7.0 for both, which is so cool! Three weeks of intense training helped me, but I know that I can do better on my next trial. This year is the last one of my bachelor's - the document I am about to get opens up vast horizons before me. Chris, I Cannot thank you and your team more for your *free* help online! Will hop into one of IELTS Advantage's VIP courses if I will ever need another certificate to ace it with high marks - that is worth it.

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

Well done! Congratulations! If you need help in the future, you know where we are.

@vijaybasnet4281 Год назад

Hey can you help or guide me to get my desire band please

@userrrrrtttt Год назад

Woow 🤩

@sarahboushaki3546 10 месяцев назад

hello, can I know for how long did you practice ? please

@mairammamatalieva3675 10 месяцев назад

Hi, can you please share some tips on writing?

@andriennekamdom3655 Год назад

Incredible job. You are so transparent. Thank a lot for all Sir.

@shreyassaha2709 Год назад

Hey Chris, I just turned 17 and I'm in Maldives on my vacation. I'll be returning to India later today..have been checking the results everyday. A few minutes back I woke up and checked my results to find out - 9 listening, 8.5 in reading, 7 in speaking and 7.5 in writing. I am writing to express my deepest gratitude for your invaluable assistance in helping me achieve my required score. Your incredible videos and teaching methods have made an indelible impact on my learning journey, and I am truly grateful for your guidance. Your expertise and passion for teaching shines through every video you create. The clarity with which you explain complex concepts, the patience you exhibit in addressing th common mistakes, and the personalized approach you take to ensure our understanding have all contributed immensely to my success. Your videos have truly been helpful and easy to follow. Once again, thank you very much, big hug!

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

That's amazing! Congratulations! Safe trip back to India. If you need help in the future, you know where we are.

@mawllous Год назад

Hello! Congratulations! Could you please tell me how long you studied for your IELTS exam? :)

@shreyassaha2709 Год назад

@@mawllous 6 weeks

@mawllous Год назад

@@shreyassaha2709 oh wow, it’s pretty impressive! Can you tell me how long you practiced per week?

@Hawraaghazii 5 месяцев назад

You such an amazing teacher, I’m sure I’m gonna do very well in my exam because of you.

@StephenKing-wb2ve 23 дня назад

This guy is definitely an examiner. He knows every essential point in this test.

@anyamahugochinyerem5944 Год назад

Thank You for be a teacher in this topic,I strongly believe I will make It to band 9.0

@combat2064 9 месяцев назад

Hey Chris! I just wanna give you a huge thank you for your videos! I had to study for my IELTS and take care of my bedridden mom at the same time. So, you could imagine how limited my time was. I had no time to practice my writing that much but thanks to you, I managed to get a band 7 for my writing, and an overall band of 8 for the whole IELTS test. I just applied the pyramid structure for my writing. Again, thank you so so much! It means a lot

@Ieltsadvantage 9 месяцев назад

Well done! If you ever need our help in the future, you know where to contact us.

@charansriram5367 Год назад

Best video on RU-vid today i watched.

@verinavai232 10 месяцев назад

Sir, I appreciate your help and support. Respect From a low resource country.

@thandipewa1966 7 месяцев назад

I'm always listening to you Chris ,my exam is coming in January, I'm happy to have a wonderful teacher like you!!

@Ieltsadvantage 7 месяцев назад

Thank you. If there's anything we can assist you with regarding your IELTS preparation, please feel free to reach out.

@palwashakhan196 Год назад

Thank you Chris. Amazing video🎉👌

@beere.s 10 месяцев назад

Hello Chirs! I am beyond greatful for this video. I was a bit "scared" (probably rather lazy not gonna lie) to study for task 1 in the writing part. Since I need to achieve a specific score in this part, your tips were really helpful. Especially since I tend to overanalyze data. Kind regards

@Ieltsadvantage 10 месяцев назад

Glad it was helpful! If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.

@user-yr5zt4qi1x 9 месяцев назад

Sir...your work is great beyond words. God bless you...

@ARYANKUMAR-gz2qw 10 месяцев назад

It is so clear and concise. Thanks a lot.

@-chansokheng7700 3 месяца назад

I can't find enough word to express my profound gratitude regarding how effort you puc to make this priceless video for all learners who are planning or studying IELTS in various purposes.

@maxwellappeaning5205 11 месяцев назад

God bless you @ Chris for your interpretation Really educative

@MILLIARDKLUBI 10 месяцев назад

Amazing channel. Thank you Chris

@mariavasilopoulou5224 11 месяцев назад

Your videos are amazing! thank you!!!

@Radiancehaute Год назад

BEST VIDEO EVER I WATCHED AND VERY UNDERSTANDING WAY U DESCRIBE

@unickx5188 11 месяцев назад

Hey Chris, I just got my results, I scored 7.5 in writing in my first attempt. All thanks to you. In the beginning, i thought that I couldn't even cross 6.5. Thank you so much mate. I really appreciate your support.

@Ieltsadvantage 11 месяцев назад

Well done! If you ever need our help in the future, you know where to contact us.

@salonijhim5388 Год назад

Sir, i just wanna say that i really trust the way you teach I'm glad to have an honest and a trustworthy IELTS teacher like you🌚🖤

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

You are most welcome! If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.

@babalindersingh3425 10 месяцев назад

What you mean with that smile🌚

@salonijhim5388 10 месяцев назад

@@babalindersingh3425 nothing just my favourite emoji🤧

@ishannsood 10 месяцев назад

ahaha @@babalindersingh3425

@jinlee1104 9 месяцев назад

Thank you for mentioning the mindset block, which is actually how I have been feeling since I started studying IELTS. Not that I actually need to write the test, but the school that I am applying to doesn't accept my previous degrees so I have to take this exam very unwillingly. However, you are right, this mindset doesn't help at all! I will take it as an opportunity to boost my English skills which would prepare me better for any challenging situations in my future study at a higher level institution. Thanks so much for your insightful advise!

@Ieltsadvantage 9 месяцев назад

You're most welcome! Glad it helped! If there's anything else our team can do to help you, please feel free to contact us.

@impressionist4821 9 месяцев назад

Hello Chris 😊 Thank you very much for your lessons, I feel like I’m improving everyday with your help! Today I came across this line on the official ielts website about task 1: “Do not use calculations to respond the task (calculate averages, add or subtract numbers)” So, if I have, for example, a pie chart with a category of 33%, could I write 1/3 instead, or it is prohibited?

@Sara-aln Месяц назад

That’s the best video I watched and it’s very understandable. Thank you so much

@hamza7595 Год назад

Hey Chris. I am very grateful for your advice. Your videos helped me to get a score of 7.5. I am delighted about it. You are the best teacher on youtube. Thank you so much.

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

Fantastic!

@sanjarabduvaitov195 11 месяцев назад

oh it is really life saver😅.Thank you Chris!

@dineshkumar.s.p2382 9 месяцев назад

Thank you so much Chris, this video was so helpful and informative. Definitely I am going do well because this one hour is given me much confidence. Once again thank you ❤

@Ieltsadvantage 9 месяцев назад

Glad it was helpful! If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.

@HubasaFamily254 6 месяцев назад

Man, you're really clear 💯

@user-qp8op3qu8t 10 месяцев назад

Clear and to the point, thanks a world for your wonderful videos.

@robiulislamshakil4399 10 месяцев назад

Can I get the proper Writing of it? I can't get his writing

@md.rayhanchowdhury4151 11 месяцев назад

Very impressive, Thank you, my favorite teacher.

@teekaydaily28 8 месяцев назад

THANK YOU CHRIS! GOD BLESS YOU AMEN 🙏🏾

@usmantalib1738 8 месяцев назад

The way you Explain is very much easy to understand... Very good work

@nikitamaurya4518 6 месяцев назад

watched the entire lesson! Thank you!

@muhammadehtesham7318 2 месяца назад

Dam this made me so clear about line graphs. I was always afraid of line graphs. Thanks a lot ❤

@user-zj2xc5fc5e Год назад

This video has been a big help for me. Thank you, teacher. I just started ielts writing, and I was frustrated about how to start answering by viewing the picture of the bar, chart, and lines. Now, I can deal with those questions more easily cause I learned to you how to deal with them properly. Thank you.

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

You are most welcome! If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.

@MuhammadSaad-sl3he 9 месяцев назад

you are amezing, your way of teaching and thinking positive in any situation is really outstanding.... love from Pakistan

@cienciacomleticia5233 8 месяцев назад

Amazing explanation! Thank you very much! 😁

@ahmeterensaydut3074 Месяц назад

Amazing video ! It covers all the fundamental. 10/10

@zainkhalid3670 8 месяцев назад

Here is my answer to the question at 1:05:24 "This line graph presents the average closing prices of specific precious metals between 2013 and 2021. Overall, the palladium and the platinum, which were the most and least priced among the mentioned precious metals switched positions to the least and most priced respectively. However, gold saw a slight increase in price but remained in the middle as compared to the other two. Platinum that was priced around 1500 dollars per oz. initially slightly above gold and palladium which were priced around at just below 1500 dollars and approximately 2/3 of 1000 dollars respectively, by the end of the period in the year 2021, their prices saw dramatic shuffling where palladium which the least priced metal and shuffled in its price till 2017, overtook all others and peaked at just below 2500 dollars per oz. and at the same time the platinum lost its value steadily and fell below all others and stood at just slightly above 1000 dollars per oz. However, gold which fluctuated in price till 2019 and saw a rise in price to a little below 2500 dollars per oz but remained in the middle of the other two. "

@ArslanAli-jn4hd Год назад

Thanks for the effort Sir!!

@peterbwalya7765 Год назад

This is indeed amazing..am learning alot thank u very much..much love from zambia 🇿🇲

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

You're very welcome!

@ghassan321skurk 6 месяцев назад

I'll have to take the IELTS Academic test in about two months. I can understand and read nearly everything but I need to work more on my speaking and writing (they're approximately about the B1 level). I've been watching multiple teachers on RU-vid but from today you're the only one whose advice and tips I'll follow. Thank you for this enriching content! I'll let you know about my results in the future!

@Ieltsadvantage 6 месяцев назад

Hi there, thank you for your kind words and for following my advice. We would love to assist you in achieving your desired band scores. We have a range of course options which are suitable for your needs. Send us an email so we can discuss the options available to you.

@jishansameer4040 Год назад

This is actually the the best vdo on task 1 (Academic) so far i have come across. Excellent job. Appreciate if you can make a vdo on task 2 in the same way.

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

Hi there, you are welcome to watch our writing playlist here: ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-1aQZ7_tfgps.html Please enjoy it. If you need help with your IELTS test preparation, send us an email and we'll be happy to help.

@Maryanne1235 Год назад

Hey Chris thank you very much for teaching, I was really worried about my writing part but with ur help I know am gonna perform well.

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

You're very welcome! If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your IELTS test, please reach out to us.

@sidrakanwal339 3 месяца назад

Absolutely amazing explanation that i have ever seen ❤Now i can do it . Thanks a lot

@Tboygaming-pn6wm 3 дня назад

Wow,you are amazingly great at what you do,I'm so glad I found you 😊

@MangalSingh-ne1ss 29 дней назад

BEST IELTS TEACHER in the entire world 🌍

@EnergyforEcology409 Год назад

You are a wonderful and smart Teacher, Mr. Chris Pell! You are a gift of God for us!

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

I think God has more pressing concerns, but thanks for your kind comments.

@EnergyforEcology409 Год назад

If I move to the UK, I will visit you on your land!

@vamsikrishnasirmandla Год назад

Hey Chris! I'm here to just thank you. I've got my IELTS scores today and the overall score is 8 (L8.5, R 8.5, W 7, S 7). Your videos helped me a lot to achieve this. Thanks again.❤️

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

Fantastic!

@melindamaria5172 2 месяца назад

I practiced just 2 weeks with only your videos, thank you I got a overall 6.5

@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад

Great job!

@nurozturk7835 Год назад

I prepared my IELTS test with this channel and it's very helpful for me so thank you Chris! My exam is tomorrow and I'm really nervous right now but i'll keep your tips in my mind❤

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

Hi there, you should check this article on our website titled 'My IELTS exam is tomorrow, what should I do?'. I'm sure you'll find it helpful. If you have any further questions, please feel free to contact us. Best of luck with your test!

@rejoicingnow 11 месяцев назад

how was your exam? was it good?

@nurozturk7835 11 месяцев назад

@@rejoicingnow My overall score was 7! I was very nervous and excited about the speaking and writing parts but i achieved my goal.

@rejoicingnow 11 месяцев назад

@@nurozturk7835 thats good, happy for you

@aimeekhan5568 8 месяцев назад

One of the best video regarding ilets writing bravo ❤❤

@aafrinmalek1299 Год назад

U need thousand of likes...❤ great teacher... Every institution has to learn from u as they r daunting their students by making ielts more complex... heads of to u...I can imagine that your free courses r helpful then ur paid r at another level..I wish I could join it earlier.

@Ieltsadvantage Год назад

It's my pleasure.

@rossellapediglieri9925 11 месяцев назад

I love your work!!

@jirebafashion_academy 11 месяцев назад

Thank you for your effort to break down the steps for this Task1

@Ieltsadvantage 11 месяцев назад

Glad it was helpful! If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.

@mohammedm3002 3 месяца назад

Man you deserve millions of subscribers and views.

@amunevera9648 8 месяцев назад

I'm so happy I came across this channel today... My exam is in 3 days, I have been so overwhelmed with the thought of not getting a good score in writing. well, I sincerely hope I can come here to share my success story soon😊

@Ieltsadvantage 8 месяцев назад

Hi there, thank you for letting us know. You should check this article on our website titled 'My IELTS exam is tomorrow, what should I do?'. I'm sure you'll find it helpful. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact us. Best of luck with your test!

@cottonreddy755 11 месяцев назад

Watching this video before 2 days of my exam 😮. Given me the worthy knowledge

@Ieltsadvantage 11 месяцев назад

Good luck! If you have any questions, please feel free to contact us. Best of luck with your test.

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The line graph illustrates the average closing prices of chosen valuable metals such as gold, platinum, and palladium between 2013 and 2021. Overall, the closing prices of Gold and Palladium experienced an upward trend, whilst the price of Platinum followed an opposite trend. Notably, Palladium started as the least expensive metal but ended up being the costliest one. In terms of Gold and Platinum, the initial prices began at nearly $1500 per oz in 2013. Both metals followed a similar downward trend and reached a low point of over $1000 per oz in 2015. After that, the price of Gold remained steady until 2019 and saw a slight rise in 2020. It continued to level off at the end of the timeframe. On the other hand, even though the price of Platinum was initially the highest among the three, it gradually decreased until 2020. Despite a slight price increase in 2021, Platinum became the least expensive metal in any category. Regarding Palladium, the price was slowest in the first year of the period shown, standing at around $700 per oz. After experiencing fluctuations from 2013 to 2016, the price of this metal surpassed Platinum in 2017 and 2018 at around $1000 per oz. Following that, Palladium skyrocketed and became the most expensive metal at approximately $2500 per oz. in 2021. I hope this will be band 6+. Hope someone reads it and gives me feedback! Thanks

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@IrfanNurIlman Год назад

here is my asnwer to the given sample question of writing task one. The line graph presents the summary of average final prices of particular precious metals between 2013 to 2021. Overall, prices of those metals showing different figures progress with palladium bested other metals growth in the final year despite being the cheapest initially. Started as the most expensive metal in 2013, platinum ending the final price in 2021 as the lowest from the three figures, wheras gold, despite started the price about the same with platinum, shows growth to the price of approximately $1750 in 2020 untill 2021. Soaring high dramatically to its pinnacle point is palladium. Reach its highest figure of approximately $2400. Hence, in 2021 Palladium becoming the most expensive from three of precious metals.