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Task 1 Process Diagrams: Transform Band 6 to 9 

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In this video, I take you through the journey of transforming an IELTS Writing Task 1 report from Band 6 to Band 9, specifically focusing on process diagrams.
I start by examining a real student's report and pinpoint the common errors that lead to lower scores. Through this analysis, I show you the mistakes and reveal how simple changes can significantly boost your score. You'll learn the ins and outs of effective paraphrasing, the importance of a clear and logical structure, and how to choose the correct vocabulary to accurately describe process diagrams.
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@razaulhaq8871
@razaulhaq8871 2 месяца назад
I got 7.5 overall with just one week of prep, because i did what you've said in your lectures "keep it simple" thank you Chris
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Great job!
@shaxlomakhmadjanova1106
@shaxlomakhmadjanova1106 2 месяца назад
Aw, that's awesome, I'm preparing for 5 month and still I don't think I'm able to get a band 7😢
@trashaccount4854
@trashaccount4854 2 месяца назад
@@shaxlomakhmadjanova1106omg same
@SardorBek-qg7ex
@SardorBek-qg7ex 2 месяца назад
Menimcha shu bratni hammag vediolarini kuzating manam ieltsda hech nimani bilmasdim shu bratni korib ielts dan 5.5 oldim​@@shaxlomakhmadjanova1106
@Developer_017
@Developer_017 2 месяца назад
Don't worry it would be good keep going ​@@shaxlomakhmadjanova1106
@pranavbanerjee8625
@pranavbanerjee8625 2 месяца назад
This dude is genius. Used his strategies to get an overall 8 band. Thanks Chris!
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Well done!
@anatoli2002
@anatoli2002 2 месяца назад
It's extremely important for test takers to know how to deal with the process in Writing Task 1, especially with the natural process. Thank you so much, mr. Pell!
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Thanks for sharing!
@mitsokukim1122
@mitsokukim1122 2 месяца назад
Hi chris! I am very grateful for your channel. I prepared only for two days and followed all your tips. I scored 7.5. You are the best teacher ever!!!
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Fantastic!
@forlorn916
@forlorn916 2 месяца назад
Chris is hands down a god-tier teacher!
@shaxlomakhmadjanova1106
@shaxlomakhmadjanova1106 2 месяца назад
I was looking forward to a process video. Thank you so much Chris may God bless you
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
You are very welcome
@daveasna91
@daveasna91 2 месяца назад
I got my result yesterday. I can't describe enough how much this channel and IELTS advantage website have helped me. No more IELTS test for me 🎉 Thank you very much Chris.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Great job!
@abahesther3994
@abahesther3994 Месяц назад
How did you manage your time? My exam is on may 4th and I'm still having challenges in managing my time.
@daveasna91
@daveasna91 Месяц назад
@@abahesther3994 I just practice a lot and put myself in the exam condition. However, I reduced time by 5-10 mins. Say for example, if the real test is 60 mins, I allowed myself only 50 mins. I then used the remaining time to double check the answers or went back to the question that I was not sure about.
@daveasna91
@daveasna91 Месяц назад
@@abahesther3994 I just practice a lot and put myself in exam condition. I allowed myself to have the last 5-10 mins to review answers and went back to the questions that I wasn't sure about.
@daveasna91
@daveasna91 Месяц назад
​@@abahesther3994 I just practiced like the exam condition and reduce time by 5-10 mins.
@atiyahan
@atiyahan 2 месяца назад
Hi, Chris! I got overall score 7.0 on my first time after 2 weeks watching almost all your videos, especially for writing and speaking, thank you so much for the lesson "keep it simple", it really helped me through my IELTS journey, thank you!!
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Fantastic!
@JIJisan-kl4oe
@JIJisan-kl4oe 2 месяца назад
Hey! Sister give some tips and tricks😢
@atiyahan
@atiyahan 2 месяца назад
@@JIJisan-kl4oe Sure! For preparation, I practiced everyday. I tried to practice all sections. But, if I didn't have enough time, I would be focus on what section was my worst weakness. In my case was writing section, so I made sure I practice writing everyday by doing at least 2 tasks (part 1 or part 2) a day, and read many essays for part 2 to improve my flow and vocabulary in writing. And before you study, you have to make sure to empty your mind, so you can be focus. I did 'silent time' for at least 10-15 minutes before study (no phones). Mindset is also important. "Think simple". You don't have to think about grand ideas, think simple. If you think too hard, especially about the idea, you'll ended up writing nothing. You also have to put in your mind if IELTS is a communication test. I got this from Chris and it helped me to calm and thought clearly while I do the practice and the test. For the test day, just have fun and stay focus. Particularly in speaking, as Chris said, take it as you talk to a friend at a café. (This even made me forget about I was at IELTS speaking test when I had the conversation with the examiner 😭, but it caused me to speak naturally) That's the tips and tricks from me, hope it helps😊
@mmskawish
@mmskawish Месяц назад
​@@JIJisan-kl4oewatch IELTS advantage
@justmehere-
@justmehere- 2 месяца назад
you are truly a hero, i don't trust any of the ielts content out there but yours and I was struggling to find process diagrams videos until right now. I am taking my test towards the end of April and I will hopefully update you about my results.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Glad I could help!
@justmehere-
@justmehere- 2 месяца назад
quick question, all of your videos are fantastic and beneficial, however, since you have been posting for a long time i am not sure if i should go through them all or only watch the long versions. so, what do you suggest? also, besides your vip course, could i take one complete mock test with you when i am done preparing so you could guide me through the final touches one or two weeks before the test? or is that something that you don't offer? anyways, thanks a lot for everything you do
@colt166
@colt166 2 месяца назад
And thank you as well for sharing brilliant information with us and we all are eager to watch other types of task 1 reports
@Sunshinepower6
@Sunshinepower6 2 месяца назад
Wow 🎉 super! I was needing help to understand the writing task 1 process . Thank you so much for supporting us with your useful advice and help🧡💯
@Willpower757
@Willpower757 2 месяца назад
The same 💯
@shornaamin4964
@shornaamin4964 2 месяца назад
Thank you so much SIR. give us this type of video again n again!!!
@sabahatiqbal
@sabahatiqbal 2 месяца назад
Chris your techniques are easy to understand and follow. With only one week of preparation using ielts advantage strategies I was able to score 8.5 overall!!! 🎉I can’t thank you enough and will definitely recommend your channel to anyone who needs help with their ielts. Keep up the good work!! 👍🏼
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Excellent!
@consequeence
@consequeence 2 месяца назад
Your video is just right on time. I needed to learn this before my exam date next week. Thank you!
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Glad it was helpful! If there's anything we can assist you with regarding your IELTS preparation, please feel free to reach out.
@rafayatulalamrifat6057
@rafayatulalamrifat6057 2 месяца назад
I remember back in October's end, i found your channel and started to watch your content. With only 5 days of preparation and solving cambrigde 17,18 according to your tips i secured band 6.5 ( no band less than 6), that too with basic English and the most toughest reading question of 2023 . I was only 🤏 much close to get band 7. Shall i found your channel earlier, i would have scored band 7.5, 8 who knows. My profound gratitudes to you and wishing you good luck.
@guillermomoreno2345
@guillermomoreno2345 2 месяца назад
Chris, I am from El Salvador and took the IELTS exam this past Saturday and I got overall Band 7 which is what I needed, and I would like to express my gratitude to you and your team for your hard work. I purchased a course a month ago from a different instructor and was very confused on how to answer the task 2 for the writing exam. I found your channel just a week before my test and you really helped me understand how I needed to answer the writing task 2 with your free content plus the tips you provide for the other tests. Looking back, I regret not finding your channel earlier, I would have purchased your course, I am sure it would have resulted in an even better score. God bless you and your team for all you do !
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Well done!
@MarvinGlory
@MarvinGlory 2 месяца назад
@@Ieltsadvantage pls,sir,I love ur teaching and I have also watched your videos with so much understanding, I need more of your teaching,mostly the books..
@trashaccount4854
@trashaccount4854 2 месяца назад
wish me luck, my exam will be almost 2 weeks later and please God wish me best luck🥺 i am so nervous, and i wish that i will come to comments section after exam and say you about i gain overall band 7 score😭😭
@shalomgab
@shalomgab 2 месяца назад
@@trashaccount4854 "say you about" is wrong. You should say: "I wish that I would come to the comments section after the exam and tell you about how I got a band 7 score overall "
@trashaccount4854
@trashaccount4854 2 месяца назад
@@shalomgab ahah thanks. Noted
@atNguyen-ox9rp
@atNguyen-ox9rp 2 месяца назад
I’ve been waiting for this video for a long time.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
I hope you enjoy it!
@zebosobirova9689
@zebosobirova9689 2 месяца назад
Thank you very much Mr Christopher I was just studying about that topic.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
You're very welcome!
@BENIIN365
@BENIIN365 2 месяца назад
Hello Chris,Thank you for helping people with IELTS because I upgraded my task 1 from 5 To 7 band score after your videos,thank you Chris you are the best teacher!❤❤❤
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage Месяц назад
Excellent!
@user-dr7fd3dt2t
@user-dr7fd3dt2t 2 месяца назад
Chris, we are really happy with your work 😀 it is gonna be so useful for me
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Great! Thank you!
@ucanhnguyen1431
@ucanhnguyen1431 2 месяца назад
I am a big fan of 'transformation' videos like this. Those are a good supplementary source for me besides your VIP writing course where I am currently a member.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Glad you like them! Thanks for being a VIP.
@_tideaina
@_tideaina 2 месяца назад
Hello Chris, thanks for all your help! I got an overall band score of 8 in my very first IELTS exam. S - 8, L - 8.5, R - 8, & W - 8. I was worried that I would perform poorly because I fell sick a couple days to my exam, but your writing and speaking challenges really helped me improve and excel. Thank you❤
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Congratulations!
@adityasawant48
@adityasawant48 2 месяца назад
Hi Chris! I hope you're doing well. I got my IELTS result today and got 7.5 overall in the first attempt. I prepared for like 3 weeks before the exam date. Your ultimate guide videos about listening, reading and writing were truly amazing and informative. I used to struggle a lot with practice tests as I had no idea about how effective strategies can improve your speed and accuracy of answers. My score jumped from band 4 to 8 in reading just by applying the strategies you mentioned. The same thing went for listening and writing. Even on the test day, I watched your videos about stress management and they helped me a lot as I followed your advice. So, Thank you so much for helping me with this✨
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Wow! Great job!
@jasvindersingh5525
@jasvindersingh5525 2 месяца назад
Best teacher ❤
@okechukwujoy3277
@okechukwujoy3277 23 дня назад
Hey Chris, I'm so thankful for and to you. I was unsure about my Ielts readiness 2 weeks to my exam(I hadn't being able to give time to study, I had just barely concluded reading a book about IELTS writing a friend sent me then). Initially, I had planned on practicing everyday for the rest of the week before my exam but that was when I stumbled on your video and I went ahead to consume them totally😂, afterwhich I practiced just 1 reading passage, 4 listening tapes, 1 writing module and 3 speaking practice with my friend. My results came out last week and I made a total of 7.5:R-8, S-8,L-7.5,W-6.5. I scaled through the band score I needed for each module, so, I'm super excited and also grateful to you. Thank you so much for your helpful videos.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 23 дня назад
Thank you for sharing your success story. Congratulations on your fantastic IELTS results!
@Mr.factfule
@Mr.factfule 19 дней назад
Relly nice explanation. Thank you. I like this kind of writing even more thanks to you. 👍
@waqar3669
@waqar3669 2 месяца назад
Hi there, Chris! It would be unjust if I do not express my gratitude for your simple, effective & to the point guidance in various vidoes available on your channel. I just got my desired band of 7.5 (overall) and I was able to learn a lot from your guidance for speaking module. Keep up the good work and continue helping the IELTS test takers with your free videos who might not have the resources to join special VIP course of yours 🙂 Once again, thank you so much for sincere guidance. Lots of love from Chakwal, Pakistan.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Well done!
@user-ym6qu4ro6e
@user-ym6qu4ro6e 2 месяца назад
It’s very helpful for me..... Thank you so much Chris😊
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
You're most welcome!
@dias7412
@dias7412 2 месяца назад
Impressive explanation!
@sunshinesooyoong
@sunshinesooyoong 2 месяца назад
Hello Chris, I got overall band 8 with S-8, W-7, R-8.5, L-7.5. I watched your videos on speaking and writing and it really helped me a lot on the test day. Thank you so much for amazing tips. Sending my biggest gratitude to you.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Great job!
@aigulissayeva631
@aigulissayeva631 Месяц назад
Thank you. I hope, I will be able to get good score with help your recommendations.
@streetbeastsnp8005
@streetbeastsnp8005 2 месяца назад
Thank you, ielts advantage. I got an overall band 7 in ielts . 7 in reading,8 in listening , 7 in speaking and 6 in writing , your teaching methodology is very good and your videos on speaking was a game changer for me. Again i am very thankful for your work 😊😊😊
@trashaccount4854
@trashaccount4854 2 месяца назад
wish me luck, my exam will be almost 2 weeks later and please God wish me best luck🥺 i am so nervous, and i wish that i will come to comments section after exam and say you about i gain overall band 7 score😭😭
@alexandrawineblood1556
@alexandrawineblood1556 2 месяца назад
@@trashaccount4854 good luck!
@EmanuelleCosta-ei9ph
@EmanuelleCosta-ei9ph 2 месяца назад
Hi Chris :) I never thought it was possible, but got 7.5 just by watching your videos and following your tips for a week. I really advise anyone who is still preparing for the ielts to watch 100% of your content, there is nothing better available online. Thank you so much for the excellent work!
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Well done!
@candralasdyantoro3360
@candralasdyantoro3360 2 месяца назад
Thanks this lesson.
@c10ud7
@c10ud7 Месяц назад
Tysm for these videos man, I was able to score an 8.5 first try by solely relying on your website. Great resources!
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage Месяц назад
Well done!
@TungNguyen-mx6zd
@TungNguyen-mx6zd 2 месяца назад
Super. Many thanks from HCMC, Vietnam❤
@nghiphuong2054
@nghiphuong2054 14 часов назад
thank you so much for making this video
@ramprasadneupane3448
@ramprasadneupane3448 Месяц назад
This has been a great series, now waiting for "before and after" type question.
@-mx9mi
@-mx9mi 2 месяца назад
Thank you so much chris. I received an overall 7.5 (L 8.5, R 7.5,W 6.5, S 7). I didn't expect to receive this much score in IELTS but your tips really helped me a lot.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Excellent!
@Seeker-path
@Seeker-path 11 дней назад
Hello chris recently i found your videos it was very well explained it helps me a lot to work on my writing that was not good enough before ...
@mildrednwofor5237
@mildrednwofor5237 2 месяца назад
Hi Chris. I’m chisom from Nigeria. I took my first ielts and got a 7.5 after listening to you RU-vid videos. However, I needed a band 8 and I started watching your videos again especially for reading as I got a low band for reading. I wrote a second ielts and my results just came out yesterday and I got a band 8. Listening 8.5, reading 8, and writing 7 and speaking 8. Thank you very much Chris. 🎉🎉
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Woah! Congratulations!
@duyquannhan9414
@duyquannhan9414 2 месяца назад
Hi Chris, I watched some of your videos for tips to try some online ielts sample test. Thanks to your tips, I was able to finish the reading section pretty early for my 1st time. I only got 6.5 for reading though, but when I checked the answers, some of my mistakes are quite unjust. For example: _ Some mistakes are from not copying exactly what was written in the essays, like my answer was "friends and families" while the correct answer is "families and friends". _ Another one is from an anatomy diagram for a fish. The part that need filling in is pointing to the fish's pectoral fin, so I answered "pectoral". But the accepted answer was "pectoral and pelvic" since this is exactly what was written in the essays. I even looked this up afterwards and the pelvic fins are indeed at a different position from the pectoral fins (it's quite obvious from their names). This seems to be a problem for computer based tests since the answers are checked automatically. So I want to ask since I have no experience with ielts, does this problem occurs in the actual ielt tests, specifically the computer based test? Since I decided to take the test on computer for the headphones advantage in the listening session.
@sabrinapetitjean5247
@sabrinapetitjean5247 Месяц назад
Thank you so much for this content
@user-ft5kq2ug5j
@user-ft5kq2ug5j 2 месяца назад
Thank you very much teacher🤝
@JubairAhnaf
@JubairAhnaf 2 месяца назад
Hey! Thanks to this channel, I managed to get a Band 9.0 without any guidance from any other sources. Thank you very much 'IELTS Advantage'!
@dolinhchi3733
@dolinhchi3733 2 месяца назад
really??? u got a 9.0????
@JubairAhnaf
@JubairAhnaf 2 месяца назад
@@dolinhchi3733 Yes, I was pretty confident about getting band 9 in listening and reading module but a bit nervous about the speaking part as I was worried about my accent. But thankfully, I managed to pull it off.
@alexandrawineblood1556
@alexandrawineblood1556 Месяц назад
I promised myself that I would come back and write here once I got my IELTS score. On Monday I had my first ever try (IELTS general). I had one month to prepare. At first, I was watching your videos on RU-vid and then I realised that I am struggling with writing. So I bought your VIP course. It was the best decision ever. BTW the mindset course is really really helpful! I've got an overall 8.0 - Listening - 8.5, Reading - 9, Writing -7, Speaking - 8. I will try my very best to make my grammar more clean and get an 8 in writing next time. Thank you so much for helping me on this way!
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage Месяц назад
Congratulations! Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful news! It's great to hear that you found our VIP course helpful. If you need any further assistance or guidance as you continue your preparation, please don't hesitate to reach out.
@danieldorathy2655
@danieldorathy2655 2 месяца назад
Thank so much for such educative videos Sir.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
You're welcome!
@user-by9cc8wi2y
@user-by9cc8wi2y Месяц назад
thank you so much, chris! i only had around 10 days to prepare and i watched a lottt of your videos, and i love how informative and accurate they are! i cramped 5 videos in an hour before i went into my test center, and i can say that i was very relaxed and ready for the test hahaha overall, i got a band 7.5 R 7, W 7, S 7, L 8.5 !! once again, thank you sooo much! thanks to you, im going to study abroad🫶 God bless youu!
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage Месяц назад
Great job!
@sauravss1306
@sauravss1306 2 месяца назад
Thanks to your guidance. I achieved good bands in all the modules. L - 8.5 , R- 7.5 , S- 8 , W- 6.5.( in just 2 weeks of preparation)
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Great job!
@user-xi9zq1qo7l
@user-xi9zq1qo7l 2 месяца назад
Hi thank you a lot. I improved my Writing from 5.5 to 7 and Speaking from 6 to 7.5. You are really good teacher thanks to you I got good results
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Keep it up
@adinamakulbekova5766
@adinamakulbekova5766 Месяц назад
recently i got 7.0 by only watching ur videos for a whole week before an exam. I'm so thankful!!! You are the best, Chris!
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage Месяц назад
Fantastic!
@nafisanaznin4022
@nafisanaznin4022 29 дней назад
Just gave my ielts exam. I got a band 8. L-8.5,R-8.5,S-8,W-7.5. Your channel helped me a lot. Mostly for the writing part I only followed your blog. Thank you very much Chris.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 29 дней назад
Great job!
@creepydude2458
@creepydude2458 2 месяца назад
Sir i watch ur videos .. thankfully i got overall 8 bands and 8.5 band in speaking thanks for your providence
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Great job!
@MadinaGulyamova-mg8fl
@MadinaGulyamova-mg8fl 2 месяца назад
Tnx Chris so much i was able to write both tasks in real exam , because of ur lessons and I remembered a lot about ur suggestions and even without practicing much I wrote a good stuff and I’m so happy 🥹❤️❤️ ur the best teacher!!
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Great job!
@sitharasr6119
@sitharasr6119 2 месяца назад
I got an overall band 8 and 7.5 in writing only because of your wonderful writing tips." I kept in simple". Thank you Sir
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Excellent!
@Tempest2678
@Tempest2678 2 месяца назад
Hi, Chris! Thanks to you I got 7.5. Thanks for all this valuable lessons.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Well done!
@riclown691
@riclown691 2 месяца назад
I got overall 8.0 ! THS for your channel !!! ❤
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Well done!
@ChelseaChellaLaurent
@ChelseaChellaLaurent 2 месяца назад
Listening/ Reading - 7 | Writing/ Speaking - 6.5 I was able to achieve an Overall 7 in IELTS yesterday. All thanks to you Sir ! Initially i paid and joined with a “magical guru” like you mention all the time. I accidentally came across one of your thumbnails just 5 days before the exam. Right away i reset all what i learnt from that guru and watched all of your videos day and night. I can proudly say that although i was needed an overall 6.5 for my journey, I was over the moon to know that i got a 7. Phew! Indeed you are the real wizard in IELTS. Thank you again for your truthfulness and guidance. May all gods bless you and wish you keep up the good work. !! Chelsea Laurent From Sri Lanka 🇱🇰
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Congratulations!
@jotchahal6347
@jotchahal6347 2 месяца назад
I have exam tomorrow please wish me luck 🍀🙏
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Good luck!
@MrAnako
@MrAnako Месяц назад
What did you get?
@suxrobutayev-wh5py
@suxrobutayev-wh5py Месяц назад
Luck
@sangirdagiimaa4555
@sangirdagiimaa4555 2 месяца назад
Thank yhou very much.Video was very helpful for me.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Glad it helped. If there's anything we can assist you with regarding your IELTS preparation, please feel free to reach out.
@arunpawar2124
@arunpawar2124 4 дня назад
just perfect
@ravensaid7226
@ravensaid7226 2 месяца назад
Hi Chris. Great vid as always, very informative. My first question- for writing an overall paragraph for a process diagram I’ve been given a tip to break a process into stages (let’s say, 2 or 3 general stages) and outline what they are, e.g plastic bottles are recycled and sorted, then are processed using various machinery, and then are turned into raw material for new plastic products (or something along the lines) - so we’re essentially breaking the process into stages, and omit simply listing all steps, which would frankly be a shitty overview :) what do you think about that approach to understanding the diagram effectively? Second question - as information needs to be logically organised, isn’t it essential to show that logic to the examiner?Or are they going to understand the underlying logic of unchanged shape of the bottles being in the first para, and then fiddling with it being in the second? Seems unlikely, so should we or not? Cheers and thanks much for the videos
@-SANTHOSHKUMARES
@-SANTHOSHKUMARES Месяц назад
Hey chris, I am a VIP student. I took the IELTS test a year ago and got a 5.5 overall. After I joined the VIP 2.0 course, I got an overall score of 7.0, and my listening score was 8.5. Thanks to you and the brilliant course you created.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage Месяц назад
Great job!
@HuongPham-vy7sp
@HuongPham-vy7sp Месяц назад
How can i sign up VIP course?
@Thr334ooz
@Thr334ooz 2 месяца назад
Another great video here, Chris. My students have had a lot of success with some of the methods you mention for all skills. If you're taking video ideas, I'd love to see a comparison between paraphrasing techniques. The discrepancy between 'Uses paraphrasing effectively as required' (Band 8) & 'Uses paraphrasing effectively' (Band 7) is one of the parts I struggle to teach as an IELTS tutor myself. Any advice is appreciated, thanks!
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Great suggestion! I'll look into it. In the meantime, please refer to an article on our website on 'How to Paraphrase in the IELTS Test'. It will show you how to paraphrase effectively. If you have any further questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
@preciousmwanza6776
@preciousmwanza6776 2 месяца назад
U are the best
@hellomynameisalaina
@hellomynameisalaina Месяц назад
Hi Chris, thanks to your videos I managed to score a Band 8.5 overall! Thank you so much 🥳
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage Месяц назад
Fantastic!
@shirinoyumarova2535
@shirinoyumarova2535 2 месяца назад
Hello thank you for your valuable information. My question is how should solve list selection type questions.
@merttosun8308
@merttosun8308 2 месяца назад
Thanks for the clear and detailed explanation. But something caught my attention in 19:05 Shouldn't it be dropped instead of drop?
@zahidabibi6532
@zahidabibi6532 2 месяца назад
Thanks a lot sir. Best regards
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
You're very welcome.
@chamikahemakeerthi4106
@chamikahemakeerthi4106 Месяц назад
Hi chris..I scored overall 7 in IELTS just by watching your videos and I only had 2 weeks to prepare..Thankyou chris❤✌
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage Месяц назад
Great job!
@azamova_m
@azamova_m 2 месяца назад
Im really appreciate your efforts🥂❤️‍🔥💣🔥✅️
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
I appreciate that
@sabajafari8638
@sabajafari8638 12 дней назад
Thank you🌹
@farheennaz8758
@farheennaz8758 19 дней назад
I had my test yesterday, and I got this diagram question, thanks for your video, its really helpful 😊
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 19 дней назад
You're very welcome!
@user-pi9hk7ie6u
@user-pi9hk7ie6u 2 месяца назад
Pray for me guys tomorrow's my exam😅
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
All the best!
@user-it3pr3oz5k
@user-it3pr3oz5k Месяц назад
how was it? :)
@fawkesito
@fawkesito 29 дней назад
How did it go?
@aminaballa2399
@aminaballa2399 2 месяца назад
it is great
@adyyyy099
@adyyyy099 2 месяца назад
Thank you ❤
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
You're welcome!
@animaryann
@animaryann Месяц назад
I just got 7 for writing and that's exactly what I needed!!!🙏🏻 i had to pass ielts asap so i only had one week to prepare and your videos saved my life! 7.5 overall😊
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage Месяц назад
Congratulations! Well done!
@jeyfinity
@jeyfinity 2 месяца назад
Chris you are an angel … God sent 🥹
@BaljeetSingh-ez9vz
@BaljeetSingh-ez9vz 2 месяца назад
Why everyone in the comments section have 7+ bands…😂
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Hi there, we'd be delighted to help you achieve your desired band scores. We have a range of course options which are suitable for your needs. Send us an email so we can discuss the options available to you.
@abitofeverything_0
@abitofeverything_0 3 дня назад
I have a question: I have always written the overall paragraph mentioning all the stages briefly, so which is the best way to write it? Only mentioning the first and the last stage or all the stages?
@taajeducationielts
@taajeducationielts 2 месяца назад
excellent
@jeyfinity
@jeyfinity 2 месяца назад
I started binging his tutorials a week before my test.. got overall BAND 8. R-9. W-7.5 L-8.5 S-7.5. Guys, don’t blindly do a bunch of practice tests. Pay attention to his techniques in each aspect of the test and PERFECT PRACTICE MAKES PERFECT SCORE
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Congratulations!
@IrodaKhilichova
@IrodaKhilichova 9 дней назад
Super🎉❤ congratulations 💥
@rinkeykumarichaudhary5074
@rinkeykumarichaudhary5074 2 месяца назад
Great video
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Glad you enjoyed it! If there's anything we can assist you with regarding your IELTS preparation, please feel free to reach out.
@rurikaimudin8979
@rurikaimudin8979 2 месяца назад
Remarkable
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Thanks.
@nabtahilkhantanoli5806
@nabtahilkhantanoli5806 2 месяца назад
can we use space between paragraphs in ielts computer based test? like press enter and leave a line or just write one below the other?
@alexaalam2920
@alexaalam2920 Месяц назад
i got 6.5 overall by just studying for some time and my score is 7.5 L , 6.5 W , 6 R , 6 S Thank you sir
@atNguyen-ox9rp
@atNguyen-ox9rp Месяц назад
I’ve heard that to gain band 7 or 8, you have to use C1 C2 vocabularies and advance collocations. Is that right?
@lisa-mariasymonds1606
@lisa-mariasymonds1606 Месяц назад
Thank you so much for all your great videos! I am currently studying for my IELTS test (only 2 more weeks to go). I am struggling most with writing but I am slowly getting there with all your helpful tips and insights! I've got a question regarding describing units in a diagram e.g. a line graph that shows energy consumption in quadrillion units. Do I need to write out quadrillion units every time I put in the number or can I abbreviate it e.g the first time I write: "... 50 quadrillion units (50qu)" Can I then use that abbreviation in the remaining text or is that not allowed? Thank you for your help :)
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage Месяц назад
These can be abbreviated or written in full. All of the following would be correct: * Fifty kilometres * 50 kilometres * 50 km * 50 kms Even though writing numbers out in full is acceptable, it is best to use number forms instead to avoid spelling mistakes. Best of luck with your test!
@lisa-mariasymonds1606
@lisa-mariasymonds1606 Месяц назад
@@Ieltsadvantage Thank you for the information! 🙏
@riteacesh
@riteacesh 2 месяца назад
I got overall 7 in ielts.Your videos help me a lot,thank you chrish❤️
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Great job!
@riteacesh
@riteacesh 2 месяца назад
Love you from nepal❤️🇳🇵
@tharindumadushan9525
@tharindumadushan9525 12 дней назад
Should I use present tense or past tense
@azitaramezani1424
@azitaramezani1424 27 дней назад
Thanks
@catherine6044
@catherine6044 Месяц назад
I had R 8.5, L 7.5, S 7, W 7 on my first trial, thanks to your videos and the idea of using the vocabulary we have and keeping it simple. At a point I taught this test was too simple and I was going to fail😂 but I persisted . You're such a great teacher Thank you very much God bless you for your hard work
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage Месяц назад
Well done!
@aditya.keshri
@aditya.keshri 2 месяца назад
Thankyou chris i got 7.5 by doing what u said i got 7 in writing which i wasnt confident about... thanks a lottt
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Great job!
@sdoyeji6492
@sdoyeji6492 2 месяца назад
Hi, Chris! I want to ask you a question about taking IELTS on computer. When in the listening part, the answer is 19977 77011 and if I ignore the white space between the numbers, my answer like 1997777011 could be wrong?
@rigirti915
@rigirti915 Месяц назад
Could I write like “ transported to be sorted OUT by hand” ?
@specific319
@specific319 2 месяца назад
instead of writing "on the contrary" can write in written part 2, Paradoxically, while there are numerous advantages of....... ,it also brings with it several disadvantages. and using paradoxically can help to increase band?
@gamingarena8393
@gamingarena8393 21 день назад
Sir We mentioned step 5 in body paragraph 2 . If we mention each and every step in paragraph 1 like Step ... so will there be a penalty or it is quite accepted ?
@tinnikar1843
@tinnikar1843 28 дней назад
Hi, if we have to get a band score of 8/9, do we need to use c1/c2 vocabulary?
@Ariafor_reality
@Ariafor_reality 2 месяца назад
I took my first exam last week and got 7.5! My hands were shaking but I still managed to get 7.0 in speaking. Also big thanks to your videos and free challenges, they are super helpful!!
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 2 месяца назад
Great job!
@colt166
@colt166 2 месяца назад
I have a remaining question in this. Did this task 1 fullfil the word limit
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