Even if this was a High school project, "In Flander's Fields"deserves much more respect and research. This is a "C" grade. Don't settle for mediocraty.
You forgot to research the reason the Poppies are mentioned instead of Rose's, they are Hardy flowers with seeds that can wait a century for the right soil, during ww1 the soil of no man's land was so churned up that poppies grew