I wouldn’t be surprised if any classic sml fans would abandoned sml after this pathetic excuse for a “movie”.But for me personally,the most disappointing thing I found was the fact that Jeffy wasn’t killed off.
Yeah that cheap ending which ruined the whole “sad moment” they had at the end, which also killed the “Omg i can’t believe this happened!!” vibe of the whole ending.
One way this could work is if someone said that Mario is no better than Jeffy’s real mom who only wants Jeffy for money. Then have Mario go through an arc and realize to value Jeffy as a son not as profit. And have Jeffy’s dad actually dead instead of retconning him to be alive.
That's what I thought. Though my way would be where when in the van, when Marvin calls Nancy out for being a selfish greedy asshole who only wants Jeffy for money, he starts to realize that he is just like that and then says "Oh my God. What have I done?".
I think it was a little above average for an SML video. Much better than the regular videos, but not as good as what it could’ve been before the cease and desist. I loved the beginning scene and final chase scene (plus the explosion part is freaking awesome). However, the thing that annoys me the most is the long ass couch scene with Rose, Jeffy, and the cops on the phone. That dragged out scene alone negatively affects the score majorly. I will say, in defense of Logan, I can tell he tried. I just don’t think he’s good at storytelling. But I gotta respect the time he put into it and the parts of the special that were actually good. Younger me woulda LOVED this, but present me just simply likes it. It’s cool for what it is. Now, I wouldn’t say it’s DISASTROUS. But that’s just me. Definitely messy tho.
Honestly, the entire 2nd act is just horrendous in terms of pacing. Remove like a good chunk of it, and a pretty good amount of the pacing problems are already solved. Logan definitely put in a lot of effort when it comes to the settings and special effects, but that alone can't save a bad story, especially if it's badly paced. Would I call this the worst SML video ever? No, not by a long shot, but I still think it's a very poor attempt to try to replicate what would've been the movie. Give this a couple rewrites and a significantly shorter runtime, and we'd be on the right track
You think Juinor Joseph and Cody would of played a bigger role? You think we would of seen Shrek, Woody, and Tony the Tiger? You think there would of been more action scenes than just that one chase scene? No none of that.
Y'know considering the movie was originally supposed to have Mama Luigi and pretty much every SML character up to that point this movie feels severely watered down and just kind of a waste of time and the funny thing is Logan's quote on quote loyal fans don't seem to have functioning brain cells cuz they say this video is good for some reason I feel like modern SML fans and just Logan nowadays focuses too much on how good the video looks rather than how good the video is either that or just focuses on quantity over quality which is a practice I am very against
Here’s what could’ve made this great 1. The news scene was cut. There is no reason for that scene to exist other than to ruin Mario’s character further. 2. The fake emotional ending actually could’ve worked. Instead of having the status quo, have Jeffy jump from the fan, with Mario not seeing him, and spend a good more amount of time showing his way home. Jeffy said he did so much after, well then great show it. Also have Mario take longer to realize how much Jeffy meant to him and maybe show him getting the goddamn money.
@@Zoo_keeper23232 SML has an excuse to make his content different because of the C&D. Family Guy has none. The show should’ve ended after season 9 before it turned to a monstrosity.
The video was mid in my opinion, the only thing that bothered me is that they decided not to kill off Jeffy and make a sorry excuse on why he didn't get exploded in the explosion, the ending made no sense at all, overall, it wasn't bad, but it also wasn't good
I expected something to happen to Jeffy's inheritance, sml has a status quo to keep and stuff, and it would be a huge lost if they finally got rid of Jeffy
At First I found this Video Underrated and Overrated but Now I See Multiple Problems With It that I Can’t Ignore as it Ruins the Story,the Characters,the Lore,and the Writing.
good video, the only thing that bugged me was people still thinking the cease and desist letter was fake. It’s a stupid idea that it fake, no sane person would delete all of their channels just to sell merch, that’s fucking stupid.
If you want naturality just watch Spider-Man Across the Spider-Verse, TMNT Mutant Mayhem, and Spectacular Spider-Man those are all great movies and TV shows and all of their characters and the characters' lines don't feel bad or unnatural or cringy or corny in any way those things are straight-up MASTERPIECES!
I still kind of respect Mario for not telling Brooklyn Guy to bring Jeffy to foster care because my friend was in foster care and she said they took her toys and stuff and that was really sad she didn't have a very good childhood but at least Jeffy didn't have to go through that and also I think my friend is out of foster care now and she's almost 18 so she's about to graduate so that's good for her.
It’s really hard to hate SML and logan. Mainly because the SML movie was planned in 2017 or 2018 and during this time this is when the cheating problem happened. causing the movie to get cancelled and Logan went insane. then all of his videos got demonetised. switched channels AND GOT DEMONETISED AGAIN. switched and also stopped posting and then finally to the current channel. At least it came back. there’s more but it’s mostly about Logan so uh yeah
I only watched this because of it being the follow up video from Jeffy's Parents, I didn't watch it expecting it to be good or great, and I feel as if I was right to think that. Honestly though, SML wasn't good even before Jeffy was introduced in my opinion, all the rasict and dirty jokes (shudder), if SML finally decides to retire one day, it wouldn't affect me at all. Also, oh boy MagicMarioBros, when I first found his channel I did find it enjoyable at first, but the more I watched I started to get so sick of Jr.'s stupidity, that I feel like he's almost like a carbon-copy of SML's version of Bowser Jr. and I hope he makes him smarter because dumb doesn't always equal funny. And also also, how did I predict that you are going to review this channel? I am definitely going to wonder how the next review will play out (and hopefully it doesn't cause another crisis).
This movie was so contrived and overly bloated It could have been a 10-15 minute video easily, but they had to stretch it out Like you said, I gotta give him props for at least actually putting it out despite the hell it went through, but it was a disappointment But, if you want some not horrible videos to watch, I’ve got a few plush series you might be interested in I sadly had to stop making plush videos for the time being, due to lack of time to make ones I’d be proud of, but I do still have all of them up
It was pretty overhyped but I’m glad they put some effort into it. If any of you watched the behind the scenes of this video on Chilly or Lance’s channel, Logan mentions that this project took a whole week to film. Logan has also mentioned in the past that they usually take a couple hours to film a normal video.
I think it was a 4/10 The end was good but there was barely any action if there was more action it would have been way better If it was like a whole action movie great but it’s been 6 years and it was kind of a let down
There's a fan made sequel video where Jeffy's father is still dead and the guy that we see on tv is a payed actor and it later gets revealed that it was all a plan set by Goodman so he could buy all of the valuable paintings for a dollar. So that he could later resell them all for billions of dollars. If this was an official video I would be less irritated by this disappointing video.
It honestly just painfully average. And compare to the cute mario bros movies which put a lot of effort, while the sml movie just put the bare Minimum.
@@mpkreviews1555 Here is some behind the scenes to show what the crew is trying to do: ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-lkWMhvFRyXY.html
And yet your videos still haven’t gotten any better. You keep criticizing random plushtubers for just having fun, and you’re acting like you could do something much better. I’m sorry, but if you’re gonna criticize something with more effort put into it than 21 minutes of your own RU-vid video, than you shouldn’t criticize it. If you made something like this, it wouldn’t be any better, if anything, it would be so much worse. The whole point of reviews is to give constructive criticism, but you’re not saying anything constructive. You’re just saying it’s terrible and then just saying nothing else. If you wanted to do a review, say something actually constructive instead of just saying “it’s terrible”.
15:23 this is what I’m saying, yeah i loved those scenes but the rest of the video was boring or had horrible pacing. The car scene was cool though. But they had to ruin it with a lame twist with Jeffy secretly surviving.
yeah some of this is kinda unreal they could've found out they didn't hire a clown but you gotta understand plot convinence yes it's unreal but it has to be done in order for the story to work yes it's a "movie"that has to be serious. but this is sml what else do you expect.
Plot convenience can only excuse so much and can only be used so much. If plot convenience was the answer to something small, then that's fine. However, if it's the answer to a major point of the story, like Screwball getting into the party, then that's bad writing. Every story needs at least one little contrivance in order to work, but there's a huge difference between a minor contrivance and a huge leap in logic just so the story could progress
@@mpkreviews1555 Yeah I do feel like plot convenience is kinda used too much also being a good exuse for unreal things that people would actually be aware of. it did feel like a lazy video as well I mean there was so much stuff like the news part that felt like they threw it in when Marvin said it wasn't about the money and Jeffy quickly ignoring his real mom is out of jail feels kinda lazy too.
I did personally like this video but I can see why you hate it. The scene with Brooklyn Guy showing off his car dragged on for waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too long. I did like this though. I do 100% respect your opinion.
I really liked the video but I can see how people wouldn't like it. It didn't really live up to the hype but I thought it was great, I was constantly on my toes. Disappointing but detaching it from that hype I think some are overhyping and underhyping it, not my favorite video.
@@mpkreviews1555 True, thanks. They definitely could've cut out the car scene though. BTG imo was pretty funny outside of that in my opinion and I get wanting some comic relief but still. Also the Jeffy fake out, while disappointing, I think was executed well enough. Not better than some videos like The Bet though.
If he reviewed me I think i would go from 160 subscribers to -2000 within minutes if this is how he reviewed this. (I agree with every point in the video btw)
i dont like reviewers they say bad stuff about every little second of a channel like chill down and remmeber he had to vlogs everyday and make other videos its hard to make videos with all that. and take a break man chill out
You do realize I pointed out a lot of positive aspects at the beginning, right? And everything I pointed out was things that were objectively wrong with the movie, so it's not just complaining for the sake of complaining
