Legendary IB Teacher on Top TOK Essay Mistakes! 

0:50 unsupported claims 2:16 Being too general 3:32 Building on Faulty assumption 5:01 Being too descriptive 6:26 When using a quote 5:53 Be Specific 8:21 Signposting @Cole you can add this to the description to create those youtube chapter thingies if you want.

Thank you so much for posting this, all your videos have helped me so much!!

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can we have a video on claims?

Noice!