Dude that was awesome! Lighting and cinematography was on point, mate. Don't know how the markers will react to the swearing and all that stuff, but tegardless, keep it up! You could be Australia's next Hollywood film director :p
Hey man, loved the short. Lighting and cinematography were amazing along with a solid story. Just some constructive criticism: Some of your night shots were a bit grainy due to the high ISO which could have been fixed with some lights. Some of the cuts between shots were noticeable which could have been fixed by transitioning with audio crossfades. Acting was passable but there probably wasn't much you could do about that. Overall great short film which clearly has a lot of talent behind the camerawork, especially for a year 12 student film.
Nice job, very good ending. Is there a tutorial video that you could possibly send me on how to do your opening title? I loved it and am going to be working on my ITMM major work soon
Thanks very much. Here are a couple links to some video's that may help you out. I used Cinema 4D and After Effects to create the title sequence. The tutorials cover pretty much everything I think I did. - ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-wjd77Yxwxfg.html - ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-2UrM1zvOEPc.html Best of luck with your project! Let me know how it turns out.