That sounds great!! Here's a little tip: at 2:03 (more or less) try stopping the notes by muting the string with the fingers of your right hand, rather than by lifting your left for every note! Hope this helps!
I recommend practicing slower and with a metronome. Your rhythm is a bit off, especially the easiest and the hardest parts. You play the easy parts a little too fast to catch up due to the harder parts lagging behind. This is a common mistake when learning an instrument. It's better to first practice the parts slower so you are confident playing them, and then increase the tempo. And as I said, a metronome will definitely help. But in general, good job.
@Asteria_5678 Bass is bass. It has different sound, unlike electric guitars. Also, normally bass guitars have 4 strings (but also may have 5), and electric guitars have 6 strings🤗
