Loved it, well done. Made the dad hairs on the back of my neck stand up. As a father of 4, grandfather of 5 and foster dad to 125 so far Marks journey as a father with every decision made with regard to what’s best for his daughter, i can relate.
So much better story telling that the majority of other sci-fi story channels out there. Most others seem like they've never been proof read and are laced with repetition and poorly read story lines that seem to barely make sense. Yours was perfect. Thank you!
hello storyteller I sit here and I listen to your story a loving father and a mother who did the biggest sacrifice of her life I like the story man it is very good thank you very much...
Another good story,unfortunately Adults are cruel and children are worse! It comes down to Racism,whether it’s against color or origin ! Again really good story !
The video story was very good, and held my attention. But once again the text on the screen didn't match the spoken words. Originally Mark met Lea(h)? on the planet Arizona, then it morphed into a different spelling of the name, but still pronounced the same. Lea(h)'s name when through repeated changes of spelling though out the. As did the planet's name where they rescued Nera (Nira). So many name changes is very distracting. Good story, needs the script reread with a critical eye for changes and misspelling of words, in my humble opinion, that is.
