Love (trying not to use that word lightly) the message in this one. It's true that as a whole we've somewhat cheapened the word. We need to remember what it really means to love. *favorited also*
You've been really working on that piece, haven't you? I was truly able to see your change in that tone that we talked about earlier. One thing, make sure not to lose it in the end. This is a piece of gold, mister. A reflection of your hope, and a hope that I can relate to. *favorited*
So ... um.. RU-vid ate my comment... which pisses me off.... Sad... or more angry frustrated panda!!! like on south park.. haha Really beautiful, Trevor. The title is really perfect. I wrote more....... damn youtube... *pout* -mk
I truly enjoyed this. Unlike pop music that always seems to idealize love and look at it with rose-colored glasses, this is raw and real. I love poetry for it's sheer honesty. We're so caught up in fallacies. Where is the truth? Where is real love?
I seem to do some of my best work at night. I kinda let all my emotions go and end up just *living* the piece, whether I'm reading it or writing it. Thanks so much for your comment. Feedback always makes my day. ^_^ ~Trevor
