Hey, this one is good! I think it works well with the intense bit. If there's anything I could say though, maybe do more of a build up effect for the backing intense part and, something I noticed overall with your music is... The calm melody stays the same throughout the song. I think practicing chord progression would make your songs feel more dynamic and really drive the effect forward! I don't know too much about music theory though, so I'm probably just spouting nonsense.
