I love how this turns from a POV where you see how many breaths you have into a POV where you marry a princess until her brother comes to tell you..."YOU GONNA DIE."
Here is some tips! (Not meant to be rude) Maybe make less eye contact with the camera cuz it kinda indicates it’s there in the POV Make a little bit bigger motions like jumping back or standing to the side/backing up on scary scenes And lastly (not forcing you to) I think it would be cool if you could collaborate with other creators and also if you made the other characters (like ur little sis) talk like u talk as them not just words on the scene-THIS LAST ONE IS JUST IDEAS!