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@thehostwiththemosttoast9626 Год назад

Love these creepy one-off stories. Hopefully this one doesn't end up becoming something like "Playland chronicles: Forgotten Fries (part 6,583)"

@dominicesquivel3901 Год назад

God I hope not

@christianlaforet6093 Год назад

I promise not to write a sequel!

@thehostwiththemosttoast9626 Год назад

@@christianlaforet6093 you're a real one 🙏🙏🙏🤣

@zombiekilla464 Год назад

@@christianlaforet6093 Fantastic writing my friend! It really allows you to visualize what is happening in the story!!

@zombiekilla464 Год назад

@@christianlaforet6093 Allthough, a sequel wouldn't be the worst idea if you can write it correctly

@informationaccount4488 Год назад

Without a doubt, this is one of the creepiest stories you've read. This just gives a "2010-2015" creepypasta vibe. Back when these stories were genuinely chilling. You can call me riddled with nostalgia, but those stories back then had a different formatting. A simple but suspenseful title at max 5 words. An ominous thumbnail, the concept of the story and it's flow. This feels more personal than those rulelist stories or the stories with the RU-vid video titles. It rings like the classics, and maybe it is one. The author did excellently and you narrated it superbly as well. Please, more of these!

@mistermoo7602 Год назад

Couldn't agree more!

@JRook-00 Год назад

This was surprisingly good. I have a couple gripes with the ending; Like, I have one thought in particular that would have absolutely improved upon it, but otherwise, definitely one of the better ones I've heard recently.

@dominicesquivel3901 Год назад

I know what you mean and I agree. But I hope those rose tinted glasses come with some powerful perfume. Because so many creepy pastas back then where dog shit.

@youtubeconnollyfamily Год назад

Ya stories these days are different

@JRook-00 Год назад

@@dominicesquivel3901 Leaps and Bounds. I fell out of the community for several years because of Quality. Shit like Mr. Banana drove me away because of how bad it was. Coming back and hearing all this Publication Worthy Short Stories that the Creepypasta Community is writing now days is totally jarring. Quality has come a looooooong way.

@rabidunion6949 Год назад

Okay the writer of this is 100% a parent! LoL You can't capture that kind of anxiety without experience. Great story. My heart was in my throat for most of it. 😱😆👍

@sharkjumpingwalrus6744 Год назад

When they grow up they be stuck with the downgraded adult version, Workland.

@patientlywatching7775 Год назад

😅 Wait.....😔

@ConservativeSatanist666 Год назад

Shh.. that's a secret 🤫

@queensheebah8628 Год назад

Where no man has ever returned from.

@josefkangleon8519 Год назад

The horror!!!!!!!!

@travischappell7417 Год назад

❤

@christianlaforet6093 Год назад

That was soooo good! Thanks for giving my story a voice!

@gabrielmerchant Год назад

Very nice work! Super creepy for me specifically, because my dad's name is Robert, and *I* got trapped in a playplace as a little kid because I ended up in a weird part that I couldn't recognize, and my dad had to come rescue me. I was worried then that, what if he ended up in the area i said i was, but i still couldn't see him, and i was in some alternate dimension? Or what if what came through wasn't my dad at all? Very specific to your story!! I wonder how creepy this story would be for my dad to read or listen to! 🤔😂 Say, what do you think the crime scene would've looked like, after his apparent death? Would there have been blood? Were there reports of missing children? Are the employees in on it? ... I just realized that as a horror writer, you don't need to answer any of the questions. Just me Having questions is good enough! It means you did a fantastic job. 👏

@christianlaforet6093 Год назад

@@gabrielmerchant thanks! That's crazy that you have an actual experience that so closely resembles the story 😳 As for the crime scene, it's like you said, writers never think that far lol

@tituslee2153 Год назад

@@christianlaforet6093 Awesome story man! Gave me chills! Do you have any more?

@samizdatbroadcasts7654 Год назад

You wrote this? Take a bow man, that was great!

@usamaryan7910 Год назад

@@christianlaforet6093 my bro please make a part 2 it needs one the guy can survive and be pulled into a backrooms sort of reality with endless tubes being hunted by that thing and it keeps changing into its previous victims as I torments him whilst roberts surviving for days and eating whatever rotten or leftover food that was in the tubes with like a lair for the beast where he finally kills it or loses or both of them die but sacrificing himself for the sake of others not having to die to it Just a thought I’d understand if you couldn’t be bothered your a writer after all probably working on a new book as I say this just wanted this story to go on longer that’s how good it was

@Embermoon91 Год назад

This definitely gives me fae vibes- more specifically changelings. My guess is the Playland structure is what is known in faery lore as a "trod," a sort of mystical pathway that connects the human world to the faery world. They can be located almost anywhere, but tend to favor forests, lakes, rivers, meadows and old groves, but some can even be located in homes like crawlspaces, under stairways or even closets. The fae take the children to their world to stay young forever, and leave changelings- wizened and sickly fae- in their place.

@brothers_of_nod Год назад

I feel bad when this happens to father characters who genuinely love their kids.

@rapschick7688 Год назад

As a mom…thanks for the nightmares tonight

@barkingbunny2928 Год назад

With you🐰💜🐰 All parents are. ( Mine is now 25..)

@rapschick7688 Год назад

@@barkingbunny2928 lol it never ends

@ewrgaming Год назад

I’m not a dad yet but I fear for the safety of my wife similarly.

@rapschick7688 Год назад

@@ewrgaming I get that completely

@rashadhoward3903 Год назад

As a single father this gives me so. Much anxiety …hugging my babies as soon as I get home….

@aerynstormcrow Год назад

This brought back too many memories of that damn tube maze my son loved at chuck e cheese. He would never come out and I was to much of a fatass to go in after him. Guess it saved my life. 😂

@kristadavemakingdreamscome9368 Год назад

Lol I remember when I was a kid and I went into a McDonald's playland ya know where they have the ball pit n all the tubes u can crawl thru like a little tube maze (DK what else to call it 🤣) and when I got to the end of one of the tunnels I looked down 👇 and some kid had 💩 there and on top of that there was a sock thrown next to the pile of poop 💩 apparently they used it to wipe their ass hahaha messed up right? I'm 33 and I'll never forget that

@aerynstormcrow Год назад

@@kristadavemakingdreamscome9368 god yes. I made my son a kid ball pits like the plague. I think everyone who ever worked somewhere they had ball pits and had to clean them probably feels the same way. Or, like you, saw it first hand and was like NOPE! On that note I’m usually okay with porta-John’s but NEVER EVER use one at a Boy-scout camp. I went once while visiting for a midweek even while my son was there and the entire ports John in the inside was covered in 💩. Walls, toilet, floor…Noooooooooo 😱

@megamovieman101 Год назад

I can’t say I’m too surprised that a third person narration ended in the MC dying but this was still a very tense story

@pjsmith97 Год назад

Yeah that's the rule of thumb. First person doesn't guarantee the narrator's survival (oddly enough), but third person is almost always a death sentence.

@DanielKay06 Год назад

@@pjsmith97 Well there are a few stories that also essentially end in "and then I died", and no i don't mean ones "I will die after posting this", there are quite a few where the character ends in a situation they have no chance of surviving but somehow still posted the story.

@pjsmith97 Год назад

@@DanielKay06 Yup. Weird, lol

@shinigamipet6882 Год назад

Ok lesson learned, don’t read comments until you finish the story lol

@tyejames Год назад

@@shinigamipet6882 same lmfao

@DarkEmpathy187 Год назад

The description of the playset and the "disgusting" little kids is SPOT. ON. 💯

@knex4545 Год назад

Just wait till the monster mimicking and adult to live a better life has to do things like “work” and “pay bills”

@punkyreggaeparty8786 Год назад

Every parents nightmare turned even more horrific. Another great one, MCP. You and yours are still in my thoughts. Thank you so much. Stay well.

@KingDALL Год назад

Excellent writing! Has all the best elements for terrifying horror story. The way it makes you love and relate to the characters, to make you feel exactly the emotions they're, themselves going through. Mixed with all the horrible feelings of being lost/losing someone u love, trapped, taken. Not to mention, the situations aren't only scary but the make you cringe in disgust. And to top it all off, it brings you back to your own childhood memories. Absolutely loved it!

@podoke Год назад

something about creatures that mimic things but not completely accurately scares the shit out of me. "but something was off" "it sounded fake" AAAA

@shart4429 Год назад

Erupting giggles was so perfect for a description of a happy little girl. Lol

@plix4348 Год назад

I love this channel so much. I love your narrating, your voice is so nice to listen to :D

@adrianharris2967 Год назад

As a parent you captured the terror of every playland I've been too.

@zacharysnyder2520 Год назад

Oh playland. The name of the theme park near where I grew up. Lovely.

@user-vc2up9ys6v Год назад

I love the nostalgia of this RU-vid channel

@jeanetteorosco8936 Год назад

Another awesomely written and narrated story!! I SINcerely hope there's a follow up to this story!! 🤘🏽

@toehairyum Год назад

3:55 Impressive realism here. This is exactly what I, and all of my friends did when we were kids.

@noelhenry7176 Год назад

This was excellent! Mixing that parent fear with enclosed spaces was just amazing.

@SuperNoobGaspirilla Год назад

I too hate it when they lure you inside their homes and take your place in society

@tauniafemrite2963 Год назад

Probably the MOST terrifying kind of nightmare possible! Bravo

@Nic_2751 Год назад

Man I genuinely rooted for the protag

@Tryin5845 Год назад

Do you know how fragile those playgrounds are? Any adult would have to try to not break it, I remember them feeling like the bolts would dethread with a hard push

@LadyLubdan Месяц назад

As an adult I'm scared to get in the tubes. I'm scared they'll break and I'll have to pay for them.

@TheNonameHousehold Год назад

So just like a child with their parent(s) that thing uses a child to lure the adults, brilliant strategy... too bad it doesn't work on bad non-caring parents that deserve to become m- it's next meal. ~Tucker

@laiatezenas3300 Год назад

This reminds me of several fairy tales about malevolent faes who call to adults with childlike voices, to attract them far into the wilderness or caves, and who call to children by imitating the calls of wounded animals. It's so eerie.

@paulshocks9880 Год назад

I love these stories ear buds in n relax

@raven_pheather4509 Год назад

me all day at work

@vividfiber6668 Год назад

This is the best one so far of this year's Halloween countdown. Also, MCP. Please re do the art of Jacob Emory. Its my favorite classic one you have.

@moiraesfate1 Год назад

OMG, I literally couldn't finish this one. Claustrophobia. Got about half way through and I had to stop before I started crying. lol, I can listen to anything else but this one got me.

@diarrhea6494 Год назад

this is absolutely terrifying. beautiful to listen to while drawing and playing video games!

@jenb8060 Год назад

Reminds me of my childhood birthday parties at Kinderland Scarborough mid 1990s. Loved the ‘hamster tubes/cage!

@twotamatos Год назад

This was a really well written story if we could only put this and the sewer seal in a blender you’d have the perfect fast food playground creepypasta but non the less really great narrations this Halloween thanks!

@MeatMonger_ Год назад

I was involved in a car crash that killed 6 people in Reno, Nevada in 2003

@wigglyjimbo Год назад

cool

@genericcrab7206 Год назад

pepperidge farms remembers

@dagun7316 Год назад

good job bro👍🏻

@ThestuffthatSaralikes Год назад

@@genericcrab7206 😬🫢🤭

@plix4348 Год назад

uh, nice story bro?? 💀

@weegeeluvr Год назад

A remastered retelling of NES Godzilla would end this halloween season with a bang. Love your work, man. Great story by the author, too!

@thisismyfcukingemail Год назад

So cute that he plugged his wife's tea shop! And before his stuff, even! Subscribed because that's what a real fucking spouse does, puts their s/o first and supports their endeavors.

@ActionJackson669 Год назад

Moral of the story: Put your phone down, and WATCH YOUR DAMN KIDS ‼️

@konarika2016 Год назад

One of the best I've ever listened to. Amazing narrating job, and incredible work by the author!

@notingh3re 10 месяцев назад

How is this a year old??? I remember listening to this the night it came out.

@proverbs2522 Год назад

I don’t have this problem in the playlands. I’m not five feet so it’s not too bad except the disgusting stuff in it.

@TheThugnificant Год назад

This one feels like one of those classically good creepypastas.

@NIGHTMAREGAMEROG Год назад

“Loose leaf tea thing” -MrCreepyPasta 😂

@lavenderotaku2481 Год назад

Well… at least the entity seems to like kids. Hopefully Nora gets an earful when they get back, Robert was just trying to be a good dad.

@dagun7316 Год назад

took the wooooockkkk to playland

@789syrus789 10 месяцев назад

While his friend watching tho just 🤣🤣🤣

@CuppycakeWillow Год назад

Okay, sleeping with the lights on tonight!

@usamaryan7910 Год назад

This needs a part 2 ain’t no way that’s the end of the story can’t be I won’t accept it

@mansikkapoika Год назад

Your videos never disappoint, thank you for making these

@Axe-wieldingFox Год назад

10:21 And this, sir, is part of why you don't get full custody. /j

@WoozyCool Год назад

half a brownie, small piece of sponge cake, milk coffee, hot water. rainy season. nice.

@SereneAsh-qy1pp 5 месяцев назад

This is my favorite one

@felixcosm Год назад

Fuck that was so good, I was legit disappointed when it ended!

@infinityowo1114 Год назад

Happy Halloween guys, hope this Monday isn’t like a regular Monday mood. 🤡

@joeyl669 Год назад

I don't know if it's just me, but I don't like stories with these kinds of endings. They're not real endings. Maybe the father gouges out the eye of this creature, and gets away. Maybe the father is devoured, and then what? Does the creature come out to live his life, and do they notice the blood all over its face and clothes?

@allmyragejones1 Год назад

Sad story He didn’t deserve that end

@Protobeans69 Год назад

My favorite creepypasta/ creepy story reader

@jasminerussell9732 Год назад

That’s such a good story 😊

@samizdatbroadcasts7654 Год назад

F**k man, that was a good one. There's a lot of bad creepy pasta out there but this one is a real gem. Plus, great reading as always.

@djlinkles7063 Год назад

I know it's fiction but he obviously survived since he was able to write it.

@magicraven123 Год назад

So intense 😬

@rygygardens Год назад

On this nice Michigan evening I have the earbuds in, the Stihl BR 800X strapped to my back... and MCP to keep me company!

@deaddoberman Год назад

Aaah this was so good!!! Love your narrations!!

@asrieldreemurr874 Год назад

So the monster inside the playplace was Nosk

@sluttyjuicemurder4681 Год назад

i gotta say, this was great. but i am so UNSATISFIED with the ending ugh

@Solouna01 Год назад

Make a part 2 🙏🏾

@tituslee2153 Год назад

Looooove this story

@hypnoticskull6342 Год назад

I'm gonna send this to my brother who recently became a dad

@sleepycofii1028 Год назад

You're a menace 💀

@artemisarrow179 Год назад

Oddly enough this story reminds me of the sixth birthday party I had at a McDonald’s PlayPlace back in 2001. But with less monsters tho.

@doughsmough4615 Год назад

You bothered to put a full stop, but you didn't bother to fully spell though (fullstop)

@laiatezenas3300 Год назад

Early 2000's McDonald's birthday parties were something 😂

@artemisarrow179 Год назад

I got a Jason Voorhees action too because I was crazy about him as a kid lmao

@TheMysteryman19 Год назад

always awesome mrcreepypasta :)

@snakebolt2459 Год назад

I don’t think he’s dead It ends in more in a cliff hanger so we don’t know

@noechoprime Год назад

he would do great as an audiobook reader

@celestemac6831 11 месяцев назад

Lika carrier pigeon to take a bite 😁 that’s funny…❤ ur stories ty

@drswag0076 10 месяцев назад

whatever that thing was defiantly a doppelganger or some sort of shapeshifter. also that lullaby, is that real rhyme?

@christianlaforet6093 10 месяцев назад

I made the lullaby up. But I'm happy to hear it was convincing enough to sound real!

@RonaldMcreepy 10 месяцев назад

@@christianlaforet6093make a part 2 where MC is still alive!!

@christianlaforet6093 10 месяцев назад

@RonaldMcreepy I might (quite a few people have asked for it), but it will have to wait until I finish writing my next novel.

@RonaldMcreepy 10 месяцев назад

@@christianlaforet6093 but ofc! take all the time u need!!

@jacobcampen4957 Год назад

Gotta ask . How many pages is this ? Working on short stories and wanna try and Strive for this length

@christianlaforet6093 Год назад

It was just over 5k words.

@jacobcampen4957 Год назад

@@christianlaforet6093 thanks !

@turtlegirl399 Год назад

Is there a part 2 that was good

@prongssupremacy Год назад

never going to mcdonalds again

@Thebigem Год назад

The Fucking Thumbnail scared the Hell outta me

@darreldarrenman3334 Год назад

I'm noticing that sometimes the music can kind of hurt the delivery of the story. When you have a moment where the writer talks about the depressing effect of a divorce with that kind of music it's a bit unfitting.

@peterbilt5798 Год назад

Tried to find infested but it was a Stephen king novel

@christianlaforet6093 Год назад

Yeah, my Infested gets over shadowed by that one (he's not even the real Stephen King. He just uses the name to trick people to get sales). If you're having trouble finding my version, you could search my other book We All Fall Before the Harvest and follow the author link from there. Cheers!

@Streifen1911 Год назад

so she became a version of the dad as a boy?

@Grimm-rr1uw Год назад

Changelings ?

@ansemthetrueseekerofdarkne2730 Год назад

Spiders in the house, Sleep, sleep Spider bit the mouse, Sleep deep Don't wake up or else You'll find a spider in your mouth...

@ryansmiley5495 Год назад

As I listen to this it's 30°f

@cymonjames7651 Год назад

What happened to robert I need part 2

@-M0n1ka- Год назад

I am unfamiliar as to how this works, but I just became a "Real Big Skeleton" and it said that I would be mentioned in one of these videos. If anyone knows how that works, tell me what you know. I figured that this is almost the only Channel that I watch and it is honestly my favorite. I wanted to support the channel as much as I will and subscribe for the highest rank.

@maestromike91971 Год назад

This is ever parents Nightmare. The way the country is now . Less safe then when there was less crime. Back in the 80s. When you could leave your door open at night and not worry. I grew up in a suburbs of a New England upper middle class, we had neighbors of e every race , religion and backgrounds. So I was around and knew people who were all backgrounds. We grew up.

@elvingearmasterirma7241 Год назад

Nah you just never heard of the issues because there was no high speed internet. Seriously the 80s were like Crime riddled as heck

@silllykitten329 Год назад

What about dahmer lmao

@ceruleanwolter2177 Год назад

This has crown the clown vibes

@Bluesit32 Год назад

Some people are just so dense. If the little kid is stuck, you think a grown man is going to be able to get her out? If she's stuck, she isn't going anywhere. Let someone else pull her out.