Hi, I am a newbie to poetry, (hey that rhymed 🤣)... Like your style and humour and presentation. So thank you for your inspiration and starting me off on my new journey. 👍👍👍
First time watcher! I like your exercises. If they don't prod you into a level of creativity, I don't know what will. Also, I really appreciate your pacing because it makes your content easy to follow. I was blessed with--and worked on-- good writing skills, but I've wasted them most of my life. At 70, I've decided to express myself through poetry. I hope to develop the discipline required to produce enjoyable poetry. Thanks!
Gentlemen, don't slap on a bunch of Argan Oil into your beard before jumping in front of a camera... it makes it look like you got a whole bunch of snot and boggies all up in there! 😳
Here's something I came up with I'm a novice writer.. Cerebral Cortex I do what I do, trying to live like you But I can't understand how our time messing with our mind can rearrange our passion with a touch Feeling like a harden heart of Pharaoh What happened to our devotion of fondness, The warmth of goodness, where we felt like The grace of God in the light of it all, How can Love die and bring Resentment to life, full of anger and such So into this world we are born, wounded By the Devil and torn cursed by the sight of God Nor understanding the will of enlightenment To bring forth our garden of fruit of knowledge Oh Sin who are you, what's your purpose in my Life, Adam and Eve perfect husband and wife Emotional rollercoaster of lies narrating my mind Condescending and unkind What is suicide and why I know my mind is better than that sticking to a better plan Holy tongue beseeching the Son Where's your lovely ego Creating things seen and unseen And knowing the full embodyment of the Lord Wasn't I born in your name You know you're heart and it's not in vain Watching me sleep for goodness sake Take our breath of life And get rid of that Snake Writer Ryan K Pendley