You've just achieved all the factors for a good animatic in my opinion, we can understand what's happening, understand the story and on top of it all it's some good character designs!
Thank you !! I didn’t post a lot about this story ( i’m planning on doing more ^^) but i have some drawings on my insta : GrandioseTirade And on my tumblr : grandiosetirade
Wow thank you that’s really nice ^^ if you want i have an instagram and a tumblr of you want to see more of them ^^ and we’ll see for the art trade if you want i’m open ^^