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Wow its been a decade since this was written by the amazing author, Wow! Where has the time gone? I just finished re-listening to this video as I got a little bit into the premiere of the winning sequel fic story reading, narrowing ( pun foal'ly intended 😂, oh don't me mind me, I've just mare'ly been in the punoney mood neightly ;), honestly I don't know whats goaten in to me haha) I hope you like my attempted jokes😅 & that you can understand what I'm trying to spell pun- equine wise. 😊
Also, I recently finished an entire review take, taking apart what was the horseland 3 seasons and the next video recommended is called Ranking EVERY episode of My Little Pony, Friendship is magic, with 200+ on the thumbnail, and it's 3:43:50 minutes long. I know it's technically should be split into hrs,min's,sec's but its late, I'm not the best ay math, and honestly I can't be assed to gather the last few collective brain cells to work it out into words lol. But I sure as will probably watch it at some point like.
Unpopular-ish opinion, but i don't see anything wrong with Dash's character in this fic whatsoever. She is the element of loyalty, which how I see it makes the fanfiction all the more terrifying, someone who embodied a reliable older sister figure who wouldn't care about your death is much more scary than some random crazy person you've never met.
To be completely fair, Dash's anger only really came when she saw that Scootaloo failed, even with her help. Think about it, she put so much time and effort into making sure that Scoot never ended up here, only to have it all be for nothing. I'd be pretty pissed, too. At that point, there was really nothing Dash could've done.
RD: "Any last words?" Scoots: "Do you know what happens when you hit a chicken?" RD: *confused* "What?" *Chickennoises closing in from a distance* Scoots: "You done goofed"
rainbow: any last words? scootaloo: you have beautiful eyes. rainbow:well thank you! scootaloo pushes her in. scootaloo: TAST THE RAINBOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*listens to reading* *remembers that Pinkie tasted the rainbows at the factory in that one episode (Sonic Rainboom I think???)* Me: Huh. That's pretty terrifying.
- Any last words kid ? - " I don't even recognise your rainbow mane when you hide yourself in that mask of shame " - What the ? - "You don't even deserve those wings you bear ...." - You know what, just go away .
@@rainbowrenegade1479 In the Rainbow Factory where fears and horrors come true. In the Rainbow factory where not a single soul gets through. In the Rainbow Factory where failures pay their toll... Now I've awoken and I'm taking back control.
Alternative ending: Scootaloo disregards love and failure because friends and success are more important. She completes her test and passes, forgets about Orion and Aurora, and never has to go through the pain.
@@achillesisagamer875 it’s a tumblr thing called “ask rainbow factory scootaloo. But some dubs of it on RU-vid. Look up “Ask Rainbow factory scootaloo” and it should be one of the first videos you see.
I feel the ending line is very powerful emotionally. Rainbow Dash: any final words? you miserable, horribal fool" Scootaloo: "You have beautiful eyes..." The fact that even in her final moments scootaloo couldn't help but quite literly look up to RD in such a way tells a lot about the two characters, as Rainbow Dash is the element of Loyalty and taught Scootaloo everything she knew probably on a moral stand base as well, it never once describes her hating RD but only being heartbroken. I think it'd be very interesting to see more from Rainbow Dashes perspective in the situation and life with the rainbow factory Edit:yes I'm looking way too deep in a my little pony creepypasta
Hey who wanna know how skittles are made? *twisted grin* edit: can people stop replying to this i commented this 4 years ago as an edgy 11 year old edit: its been 7 YEARS PLZ IM A GROWN MAN NOW😭😭
Here's how it goes. A pony gets slaughtered in Stalingrad; City of Blood. It then gets covered by Nikolai's Vodka. It gets into little pieces and that's how it's made.
I know how they are made, rainbow dashs pee flavors them..wait *looks on table* I'm eating skittles right now! AWHWHWHWHW!! IM EATING RAINBOW DASHS PEE!!!!!!
The voice acting in this is top fucking tier. My God. I could feel the emotion, the pain, the fear, the anger in all of the voices. So professionally made and accurate. Well done Lost, and everyone else who worked on it.
A rainbows tale isn't quite as nice, as the story we knew of sugar and spice, but a rainbows easy once you get to know it... with the help and the magic of the PEGASUS DEVICE!
Now let's delve deeper into rainbow philosophy. Far beyond that of cloudsdale mythology. It easy to misjudge that floating city. With it alurring decor
But with all great things comes a great responsibility that of Cloudsdale being weather stability, how you ask are they up to the task to which the answer is in a simple facility.
28:33 The door slamming made me jump, fall off my chair, and rip my headphones out of the headphone jack These sound effects are so good, they definitely improve the atmosphere
+Ghost Gaming for the pride of the flock I believe is what dr.atmosphere more or less said in the sequel "pegasus device", the flock referring to cloudsdale, the reason they have the flight tests is to rule out what pegasi are and aren't fit to fly, and the reason they exile those who aren't deemed fit is so they wouldn't taint cloudsdale's name and pride (and after the workers at the factory needed "resources" after finding out they could kill other pegasi and extract spectra from their bodies, they had one last use for the failures,hell the flight tests existed probably long before luna was exiled to the moon)
PataponCreeper when i was a little kid I thought Rainbow Factory was an actual episode in mlp, i didnt know that it was a creepypasta, so apparently that was my first exposure to creepypasta. Yt recommended it to me i kinda got nightmares from it, but i loved it thxs yt
am I the only one who realizes when they leave the carriage when they arrived at the rainbow factory they could've flew and left away from that place and ultimately escape their deaths
Nope, or attack and get those tasers and start beating ponies with it. But it's a story and called logic most when they see someone dressed in pure black after some guy says "I'm just handed lots of money to deliver you guys and keep quite" would say "Fuck this shit, See ya Bitches!" and take off. But they don't because. . . .plot. Usually how it goes, because plot. Also pigment can be created by taking and boiling then letting dry then crushing into dust any naturally occurring object like flowers, leaves, bugs, etc, etc. also in a world with magic why not give it to the unicorns? they raised the moon and sun before making rainbows should be easy. But. . . history of pigments aside. Yeah most would've said F-this and left who'd want to live in a racist/ego city anyway? also what happens if your a Pegasus turned alicorn and fail the test? would they kill a god like a literal god? or if two Pegasus give birth to a unicorn would they have to do like twlight where she made wings for rarity since by birth that pony is a Pegasus? More questions then answer for me
They would've simply been chased down, they're children whom failed their flight test, up against guards whom have likely had to deal with ponies trying such things beforehand.
I've been a Brony for 4 years...and this is the first time I've experienced this fic in it's pure form . No songs No parodies Just the real thing and man was it every bit as horrifyingly entertainin' as it was made out to be It's currently 11:46PM down here in 'Straya and this was a horrible decision. So glad I made it
Very well done! Although, I always wished the original story would have had some of the foals escaping to whistleblow the factory. It just felt that with Scootaloo’s plan, Orion’s compassion and Aurora’s sacrifice that there should have been some element of a good ending. But then, I suppose it wouldn’t be a grimdark. My favorite was Dr. Atmosphere and your crazy Rainbow Dash.
Dash: Any last words? Scootaloo:...TASTE THE RAINBOW! Dash:Nope. "Throws in" scootaloo: YOU WILL TASTE THAT RAINBOW. "Pulls in" Dash:NOOOOOOOO I DONT WANNA TASTE THE RAINBOW!!!!!!! They melt they end.
Dr. (Whatever his name was): Dont fall behind or my helpers will have to "motivate you" Me: Lemme guess, you want to motivate them with a *_controlled shock_* Edit after 2 years: I'm gonna be completely honest i have no recollection of this comment
I'm just here thinking why the hell didn't they run away when they all failed Like they could have lived They had a chance to escape But nooooo exiling sounds cool so let's do that
Yeah and when Scootaloo went through the vent down, all the ponies in the suit were walking. So she could have just flown above them! The suits were probably too heavy to fly in anyways .
24:54, "I'm one of the four Colts in this factory". A colt is a baby male horse, under the age of 5. Unless he is a giant baby, the word you meant to say was "stallions".
Is it an actual sequel or is it a fan made sequel. Because a lot of these more famous mlp creepypastas always have a lot of fan spin offs or sequels not made by the orginal author.
This was so damn good. Ive tried listening to any grimedark storys but never managed to listen to them all the way through. Finally been able to listen to this
This has been by far my most favorite MLP fanfic and the actors were flawless and when Orion died I had actually almost cried I would recommend this to anyone wanting to get good feels and get a great story with amazing actors
I don't even remember my past, I don't remember who I used to be. I don't remember my friends of old, I don't remember my destiny. My mane is purple and my coat is orange, what I've become, I have no idea. I only know one simple thing, the name they gave me: Absentia -pegasus device by sylphstorm based of the sequel to this
"Aurora starts with the test, but pretty much right away she breaks one wing, dislocates the other, and chips FOUR TEETH. She does all of this during freefall, which I'm pretty sure was impossible beforehand." -Rainbow Dash Presents
20:54 And another And another The cold breeze rustled through the carriage benches Everything was blurry and gray And a pony looked at scootaloo and said "Ah, you're finally awake"
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