Rewriting Thor Love And Thunder (Part 1/Act 1) 

The fact that Valkyrie has never been called out for her lowlife past of desertion and trafficking always irritated me. Therefore, you having Lady Sif make that low blow actually made me cheer, lol.

The goats were not the problem. In the comics they are cool. Its the screaming.

King in black is awful

Ragnarok worked because thor was depressed but not to the point where he was broken yet so i felt like he was trying to cope with it with his humor

Loved this! Can you now rewrite Multiverse of Madness, Quantumania, and She-Hulk?

Dialogue is a little cringey, but otherwise this is ok.

Wow mate, this is some good shit. Loved your broken thor concept and I can literally feel the emotions . Looking forward to see how it will end.

Solid start, dude. I would've gone to see this movie. You're on that much of a roll. Looking forward to what's next.

This movie would have been perfect to bring the franchise back to the seriousness of the first 2 movies

Please teach me how to write like this. Like you really understand character and plot development

Really good stuff. I hope you continue with posting part 3

want a LAT rewrite? go read the comic it was based on, good work tho

Let this rewrite be your resume for when you work at Marvel for the Thor 5 movie. Do it!!!!!

Great rewrite i would've made Starlord a little more serious and stoic due to being riddled with guilt for what he did in infinity war.

Hey hey hey as annoying as the screaming was tooth nasher and grinder are a legitimate part of the Thor lore marvel or otherwise I would have Them represented with respect

Marvel should seriously hire fanfic writers bruh I've read fanfics much much much better in characterisation than whatver mcu is doing

Wow you put that together very well

Sony are you listening talk to the MCU

No one worthy ever considers themself worthy Edit: I was corrected a few minutes later

Maybe add a scene in the short montage when Jane disintegrates because I don’t know if Jane got caught in Thanos’ snap or not.

Thor Love & Thunder is like the Megamind Vs. The Doom Syndicate of the MCU ngl

Oh my Thor know I wanna watch your movie so bad

I love Flight of the Conchords, but man, I wish Taika didn't takeover directing for Thor, cause it would be so much better being more serious, cause now every Marvel movie needs to be an Adam Sandler film apparently

Love this!

Thor is not a demigod. He is a full God.

If I could change one thing about this movie it would be making James Gunn the director since James Gunn made the guardians of the galaxy trilogy one of the best in cinema I don’t know how Gunn would make this movie better but he can make a comedy movie with serious stuff like Gunn could make Thor and star lord relatable with them having kind of similar pasts Thor four should’ve just been Asguardians of the galaxy with the logo show “as” being added with Thor’s lightning.

Valkyrie needs an arc! She was so good but just not used for the last third of the movie.

no screaming goats 0/10

مجرد خيال 😴😴😴😴

What I would do is have Act 1 focus on Thor and the guardians travelling around saving people. They would come across a few dead Gods too. Thor is recalled to Earth when Mjlnoir is back, but not with him, with Jane and it saved her cancer. Then this would alert Gorr to their location and they would have to run away to Omnipotent City and get all the Gods together to defeat Gorr, but they won't listen. Then Gorr shows up and kills every one. Thor, Nat and maybe one or two other Gods would go back to the guardians and prepare for the final fight where they all fight Gorr and all the Gods he killed that are now necro-zombies. It would have the same ending where Gorr is about to wish for all the Gods to be dead, but instead he wishes for his daughter back. Jane dies of cancer and goes to Valhalla. Thor and Nora leave the guardians. I wouldn't have Asguard at all because it takes away from his ending in Endgame.

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I didn’t watch the trailer so I could enjoy the movie because I thought it would be about Bro Thor teaming up with the guardians of the galaxy

Basically People think TLAT should've been serious And think Quantumania should've been comedic

Send this to marvel

Well done

I wish fans were in charge at this point.

I love how Thor 4 has so much potential that it was so disappointing to watch it that some of us just write a new one instead 🤡

Thor movies ranked: 1) Avengers Infinity War 2) Thor 3) Avengers 4) Age of Ultron 5) Ragnarok 6) Dark World 7) Love and Thunder

One question for this rewrite… Will we still have all Gun’s n Roses music? Because the music is good and should stay.

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thor 2011 sucked, my dude

Cut out Lady Thor and replace her with Beta Ray Bill. Ragnarok and infinity war proved that you don't need Jane Foster to make Thor a compelling character , also Natalie Portman doesn't care for these movies anyway. Give Beta Ray Bill his arc of needing to save his people but being unable to cast aside his pride and arrogance, like Thor in his first movie. Have Thor mentor him so that we can see how far he has come since Thor 1.

I know I’m late to the discussion but if I were to change some things from Thor 4 it would be this. • Forget Gorr make The Mangog the main villain ( Thor 3 mentions Asgards past conquests so it fits well with the mangogs origin and kinda continues the sins of the father theme that was sort of set up in Thor 3 ) • Jane sacrifices herself to defeat the mangog just like in the comics ( much more meaningful death than what we actually got. Also would add the title of love and thunder a different meaning by having Jane defeat the mangog with “love” against its hatred for Asgard) • The Guardians should have a somewhat decent role in the movie but not be the main focus ( Have Thor be with the guardians and receive an S.O.S from a distant planet It’s the mangog destroying a civilization) They do their best against the mangog but they are no match for it and they are put out of commission. Thor puts up a good fight and even overwhelms the mangog for a bit but it’s not enough. • I’d like to think of the mangogs role as almost doomsday like with its whole purpose to inflict as much pain as it possible, its whole drive is rage, anger and hatred for what Asgard had done in the past • Alot that the original movie offers can be avoided with these changes. I think the whole aspect of Love vs Hate could’ve worked better than whatever we got. It’s been said that Thor 5 would be a darker tone and what perfect villain for it than Gorr ( It’s weird that we had two villains back to back that had similar powers)

1 thing I didn't like about the original movie is that Jane went to Valhalla at the end, she died to disease, therefore SHOULD have gone to Helheim, I understand why they did this, but it just makes no sense to me.

Thor 2 is like way so much better like way way way so much better that Thor 4 ! !

Great story but I don't understand how Jane can have cancer and have Thor's amazing godly powers...That part makes no sense...

Personally i adore thor love and thunder of course it isnt perfect at all means. But the vibe this movie gives me is incredible. Great video btw❤