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Scholarship Essay Sample About Why I Deserve The Scholarship

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One of the most stressful questions on a scholarship application for your student can be “Why do I deserve this scholarship? It can be hard to know exactly how to answer the question as your student wouldn’t want to sound too greedy or too needy. In this video, we’ll share 5 scholarship essay tips to approach this question in the right manner and get higher chances of winning scholarships.
00:00 Intro
02:53 Explain how scholarship funds will help your future goals
04:00 Focus on the purpose of the scholarship
04:41 Use specific examples
06:06 Focus on how you’ve overcome obstacles
06:55 Maximize your word count
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@TheScholarshipSystem Год назад

Comment below: what’s a specific example you could use to help answer this question?

@walkwithme2700 Год назад

Why do i deserve this scholarship money : 1. Fund will help. How impact in the long run. Better the world. Contribution to society. 2. Focus on the purpose of the scholarship. Core to the purpose of the scholarship. Relate to the donor 3. Use spesific example. Show them something. Not tell them. Spesific story about the idea you want to say. 4. How to overcome obstacle 5. Maximize the word count

@TheScholarshipSystem Год назад

YES!

@daviddimanochie5405 4 месяца назад

@@TheScholarshipSystem Can number 4 and number 5 blend in together?

@michelemusick6498 Год назад

Thank you for this information. We just joined the scholarship system in June and starting to apply. It's actually fun...thank you for all that you do!!

@TheScholarshipSystem Год назад

You're welcome! We're glad you are finding it helpful!

@ibe.11 9 месяцев назад

What if the field I plan on pursuing in the future isn't as 'helpful' as a veterinarian for example? I plan on majoring in information technology, how can I highlight how I'm bettering the world?

@eloisecarcini1280 4 месяца назад

Thank you for the advice!

@TheScholarshipSystem 4 месяца назад

Glad it was helpful!

@rogerspree 3 месяца назад

I want to use an experience I had at a hospital with a family friend who is a doctor. How I conversed with some of his patients and comforted them

@TheScholarshipSystem 3 месяца назад

This would be a great topic to include in your essay!

@baotramnguyenle9720 5 месяцев назад

I have a question. I'm preparing a video application for a scholarship. The requirement already included some questions and I have to answer within 2 minutes. Should I just follow only the provided questions or add other bullet ideas like you recommended in the video? Thank you so much

@TheScholarshipSystem 5 месяцев назад

If time permits, you can add other content. Check out our video on video interviews. ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-XOeCIq3x2nE.htmlsi=X-TGf0WOmHuWMMnh

@itzregina326 Год назад

Hello I have a question! For a some scholarships I’m applying for there is no word count. What do you recommend as a solid word count for this kind of essay?

@TheScholarshipSystem Год назад

If there is no word count, usually about 500 words is good. But it never hurts to approach the scholarship organization itself to see if they have a preference that wasn't stated.

@itzregina326 Год назад

@@TheScholarshipSystem thank you!

@ayeshaakter3959 Год назад

Hello madam I enjoyed watching your video. I want to apply for a fellowship to do Ph.D. in public health. I am going to apply for this first-time international scholarship. So I don't understand how to write nicely. I have masters in public health and have been working in the public health sector for 10 years. It would be very helpful if you could advise me on how I should put all this together. Thank you

@prathoma2375 2 месяца назад

Hi, so i am applying for this scholarship where i want to amswer this question by mentioning the financial burden that the only earning member of my family faces to pay for my education, and hence, the scholarship would lead to me being able to help relieve that stress somewhat, while also clear away some educational fees...what do you think of this?

@TheScholarshipSystem 2 месяца назад

This would be a great start, but you also need to mention how it affects you personally.

@prathoma2375 2 месяца назад

@TheScholarshipSystem Cool, will keep that in mind. Thank you tons for the reply :)

@Max_Lavoisier Год назад

Please, what about merit scholarships

@TheScholarshipSystem Год назад

Hi Maxwell - did you have specific questions? If you are just wanting to learn about scholarships in general, try this video: ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-vjrErw2Er0s.html

@PixelproAnimation 4 месяца назад

I am going to apply at GIST korean university for master. In application it asked what are your financial problems and why do you need matriculation fee waiver??? please tell

@TheScholarshipSystem 4 месяца назад

Our content is for students living in the US attending college in the US. But for the most part, if a scholarship asks to prove financial need, then you have an opportunity to explain your family's financial situation. You can include a monthly cashflow budget, if necessary, to prove that there is no discretionary money available. You can also discuss how you want to avoid student debt and how that will benefit you in the future.

@PixelproAnimation 4 месяца назад

@@TheScholarshipSystem one more question related to us universities. I have heard that people should directly apply to the PhD instead of masters because for PhD we have good chances. ? Additional, recommend university list without IELts and no applications fee. And currently open admission of which universities?

@helenjabar5196 9 месяцев назад

Hello, I have a question! For some programs, I’ve applying they asked What will I contribute to the program? little confused, what would you recommend? Did you make any video about it? If yes can you attach the link for me? Thank you a lot!

@TheScholarshipSystem 9 месяцев назад

The answer is similar to Why I deserve the scholarship. When asked about what you will contribute, you will need to share what makes you different. How will your perspective, personality, attitude, or skills make a difference to the program, the participants, or the project? So you will want to share how you being involved will make an impact to the program and to the overall experience. So if you reframe the question to, Why I deserve to attend this program... it may make the question a little easier to answer using our suggestions.

@helenjabar5196 9 месяцев назад

@@TheScholarshipSystem thank you, helped a lot!

@usmaarshad9196 4 месяца назад

It's really awsome video...very informative

@jesubankejosephine2381 Год назад

This was so helpful

@TheScholarshipSystem Год назад

We're glad you found it helpful!

@sairamariamissac2881 Год назад

Hi mam, I have opted for Msc accounting and finance in uk university. Can u tell me what kind of community service I can provide?. Plzz reply

@TheScholarshipSystem Год назад

Our information is for residents living in the US attending college in the US. You may need to find resources closer to your area.

@user-tt6pp1kf6c 11 месяцев назад

What about the question tell us about a personal achievement that makes you proud

@TheScholarshipSystem 11 месяцев назад

That's a great topic - we can certainly cover that one in future video!

@zuriyatiismail4917 Год назад

3:05

@ShreyalAhir Год назад

Great vdo

@TheScholarshipSystem Год назад

Thank you!

@shaeztime6972 6 месяцев назад

hello mam can i get scholarship i have money problem but my have a dream study in abroad im' looking scholarship 5 months too i dont know what can i do for my dream 😢

@TheScholarshipSystem 6 месяцев назад

Our content is for residents living in the US attending college in the US. You may need to search for international scholarships.