Secret Human Megastructure Shocks Galactic Council | HFY Full Story 

I guess it's hard to remember if you've killed off a character a few times already. Or released a nanovirus and infected 80% of the galaxy 3 minutes ago. So you better do it again. Continuity is hard.

How many times does the story have to repeat it self

I thought this was a human megastructure but then it turns out to be some ancient alien race that made it makes no sense

This reminds me of when I had to write up a 5000 word essay but only had 2000 words

These stories are good but not worth the commercials.

Continuity issues, repetition of the same few phrase, lack of descriptions. The story could be so much better

I fell asleep a few times, and didnt miss a thing😂, story was practically the same as every scifi story read aloud,.

This is repetitive, unimaginative, and one-dimensional. It’s read by a machine, was it written by one, too?

First they said human retaliated and took down the strongest species then they said they were thought of as primitive 🤔🤔🤔

The idea of those kind of stories is to fall asleep. That story did that perfectly. Because when AI write a story it is meant to put the human listening it to state if sleeping. I was having a grandfather that repeatedly tell me stories which i already knew, but they were the best way for me to fall asleep. Just like that syory and it's essential idea to got your mind sleep afast. The repeating if things we already know tells the mind to switch to other mode, steadfast and surely. Some people call it "sleeping" and this story is good at that. We already know what happened, but continued to listen until we fell asleep. One day i was in insomnia state if mind. I was a little kid, but as any little kids i couldn't sleep. Si, my grandfather started to tell me a story that repeated itself continuously. We both fall asleep.

very hard read, my interest started high because of the premise but decreased tremendously with each repetition, which unfortunately constitute the bulk of the writing.

58:22 better call Homer that's his section

More bristling weapons. Ho hum.

Bad guys are ALWAYS. named: Za..xxxxx .. Clearly award level writing.

Great story

These questions comes up from time to time: Just because we can do a thing; should we? Will our good intentions eventually cause more harm than good? Do we have the wisdom to know when to not meddle and assume more power so as to limit the damage we eventually do? Sadly, our history indicates we really have no clue what we do, because we don't seem to learn from that history.

I liked the story.

If a human fleet appeared out, hyperspace. And that is where the storytelling begins.

Honestly thought this was going to be a xeno payback story, I was wrong 8(

Hmm clasic options to tear the team apart best answer choose both sides certain tech locked under heavy amounts of protection or outright destroy it but the safer tech almost anyone who proves they can be trust worthy with it pretty much how the forerunners did with there tech kinda since rings did but didnt clear the entire galaxy but they made tests i would assume before even the reclaimers could actually take it over entirely however clearly the entire halo purpose was failed

i LIKE IT! you repeat alot from halfway onwards- but still, awsum story!! Good Job!

Are you sure this wasn't written by AI? Some weird almost completely parallel narratives back to back, and before anyone realizes there's a mysterious artifact at the center of the megastructure - which the humans neither disclose nor seem particularly worried about the aliens discovering on arrival - everyone's all like - Giant Structure! Holds mysteries for the ages! Like ... because it's big?

Every 5 minutes is a commercial!

33:24 was this written by a child? The GC is dealing with a faction not the legitimate government!!! Any agreements will not be binding on the humans!!!

I liked the story

The Prophets lead by the Prophet? That is a redundanting redundantly redudandanted redundant redundancy.

I'm assuming these constructs are rule based. Input a bunch of related words, themes, maybe sample works, or if it's computer driven, the Mach br uses input to find sample works. Then mash up the words,themes, samples, run through advanced error correction, finally let some jr high students poof it in some limited period of time. It's the same short theme repeated nested over and over again. Nothing specific is every said, adjective stuffed text devoid of substance. Massive logic holes. Humans off stage 100s of yrs assumed gone but really thick as thieves far from home in another races unmisssable construct. Weird

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I truly enjoy this reading 📚 videos 📹 88 thank you

Zalax? Also my heartburn prescription

Fun, however from a listener pov only and in my humblest of opinions, it feels a bit repetitive in phrases and plot.

I like the story But not as much as some as others Thank you

So death Star?

The story is good, but need to edit out all the repeating.

Humanities new gods. Made by man once again.

I can hear this ai without getting so upset. It has to be the cheapest because the pronunciation makes it sound like a ...

this looks like a complete type 1 civ ...

roboreader mispronouncing 'surface' and 'defy' was like nails on a chalkboard, seriously, just hire some human voice actors ...

WHERE CAN I SEND MY STORYS ?

Why was 6 afraid of 7? Cuz 7 "88" 9

You are getting a whole lot better at your story lines, but you need to go through and edit the story lines. Quite a few of your stories have repetitive lines. But you are definitely getting better at it.

I'm not sure if this was written by ai or someone in desperate need of a thesaurus and an editor.

Are aliens this stupid? If Humans can build one. we can build another.. and another. This is like stealing a Honda Civic but not the factories and supply chain and talent that created it.

50:03 wait!!! The virus was deployed and 80% infected and now it isn’t deployed? The Captain destroyed his facility and yet he lives? This is some crappy writing!

i like the story

Great ai generated story. Needs a bit of polishing.

I liked it. It's very done by the numbers, but it works nonetheless.

Could have been 2 hours shorter if it didn't repeat every 3 paragraphs. Lol

could be an hr without repeat repeat repeat repeat

The comments of repetition turned me off!

It does repeat itself far too often, but a good story while it's telling the main theme, could this be an AI storyteller?

Ai is getting better and the fact this was not edited just shows how passable a generic scifi prompt can be in even a free chat bot. At the level of a decent junior high writer for plot points but lacking hugely in detail, specifics and overall uniqueness. As a simple tool to output rich ideas it is rather helpful. As far as replacing human creative generation though it is far far off

Ed. Dit. Ting.

The sad & disappointing thing about piece is this could have been a pretty cool story if somebody had taken the time & energy to edit out all repetitive chaff & needless palaver. Sometimes less is more, my dude. ?:^{|?

I got as far as the 'Coverrnus(?) {cavernous?} openings that seemed to DEE FEE the laws of physics' and said to myself, 'Self, you are not going to sit here and listen to this supposed 'reader' mispronounce words in the English language for the next 3 and a half hours.' Do better. good-bye.

I'm confused... they don't know what humans are, then they do. Humans betrayed aliens, aliens betrayed humans. Which is it?

Good god .. for a story that started out so well fell into useless drivel so quickly.. at about a hour to go .. ugh should have cut the last bit.. lol.. well that's my opinion.

Getting sick of the repetition

This story jumps around so much that it's impossible to follow it - really awful editing...

Nothing nothing new in the story. Keeps repeating itself with only slight changes in detail from section to section where it repeats. Really really bad editing. Got halfway through before I had stop.

Honestly its just bad either bad writing or editing or both its just really bad

This story fucking sucks! Repetitive and disjointed. First the humans made the mega structure, then it was made by aliens. Artifact gets stolen then is miraculously back in human hands ect ect. Utter waste of time!

If I had to sum this up in one word… Juvenile. Total waste of my time.

Shit story