Galactic Council Betrayed Humanity and Paid The Price When Our Fleet Arrived! | HFY Sci-Fi Story 

Broken and disjointed. No continuity. Locations jump around. One moment they are on the bridge ( what a Torture rack is doing on the bridge I cannot say ) the next they are in the engine room.

How did Cragg get into another fight after he had died in a puddle of blood earlier?

Many of these scifi stories sound like they were written using AI. I am growing weary of them.

OH PUUULLLEEAASE !!!

Loved the story.

That was Great

All of this tellings i really like very much,but it should bee animated that has been King of all story..... I Am sci fi lover... SO TANX FOR ALL YOUR TELLING STORIES... GREETINGS FROM OSLO

Great as always! I like the story!

I liked it

I really feel like the quality of the stories has been dropping. Scripts need to be run through several drafts before they get published for a reason, this one has the markings for a great story but it really felt like a standard Sci-fi movie that's forgettable. Take beginning where humanity was betrayed and their escape from the council, that alone should have been a hour story. Easily part 1 with seeing how the ambassador was struggling to get out of jamming. Part 2 would be the slow invasion by the enemy, say colony after colony getting hit, the humans are; alone until one of council members joins in. Part 3 would be the conclusion of the battle of earth plus the betrayal we saw. Then end it with the new species attack.

I like the story

I loved the story.

I liked the story. Thank you.

I liked the story!

keep it coming

These are great

i like the story

Let's take a quick timeout to discuss how to beat the doomsday cannon while it finishes powering up and blasting earth during our meeting... Let's also go onto the ships our new tech should be destroying and set charges and then fight, kill, and borrow both their same exact sized flightsuits and ships which we have no problem flying...

Love the story keep going but make sure to make a script draft so you can catch any mistakes in the plot or ominous the story also would love to see this animated if possible but keep up the good work❤❤

The ending sucked on this one. If the galactic council betrayed us, there is no way, we would have forgiven them so easily!!!

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One moment, it's Bobby, Mike and Jack who took down this Cragg. The next, like the very space-time continuum warped and reformed, Bobby and Mike are elsewhere completely, and it is Jack alone that takes down Cragg who'd been giving him great trouble the previous scene... At that point, I no longer saw any further reason to keep following along; if the story's going to jink and juke all over the place like that once, why wouldn't it happen again?

What the hell happened at 57:56 😂😂

I liked the story

Which was first video in this series and how can I see them in order?

Doomsday cannon...could it be related to the location of the Doomsday Glacier? Thwaites "doomsday" glacier...reminds me of Thomas Waites and Tom Waites. Off the shore of Antarctica 🇦🇶.

Story iss chaos. In one second the alien is dead and in the next one off the brothers talk with him, places are jumping around and people, too. Bad broken story.....

Liked the story. Needs work though.

Fool me once shame on you fool me twice shame on me

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A very 'young ' story, aimed at youth. Quite basic full of tropes and formulaic stereotypes. Fun enough, although frustratingly simple for a mature listener. Would be interesting to see this properly fleshed out at some point, as there's lots of potential here.

It was a good try, but a lot of story is missing. It jumps around too much and leaves out way too many connecting details.

88 I enjoied this story and the excellent read❤😂🎉😢😮😅😊C.S.A.BABY

How many different ways can pronounce a persons name?

These notes are a great idea for a story. Flesh this story out and it would make a good multi chapter story. You have way too much going on for a short story.

I hate AI voices, but it was a good story.

Are these written by ai? It feels way to wonky

There must be different versions of this story, and the RU-vidr stitched it together badly. Should of stuck to one version of the story. I've listened to stories that had different versions of it, and it turned good.

Are these completely AI generated?

What AI is Used for this

this is a story , actually not a bad concept but the “Person” who wrote it has not much of a concept . Torture on the bridge , locations jumping , people fighting after they dies a traitor wants a meeting on a planet after he’s been under guard ………or maybe the 3 species have only a limited number of names ???

Someone really needs to proof read these stories. There are too many inconsistencies.

shield room bridge engine room bathroom shower closet what is it where is it why is it all over the place

This story is definitely written by AI, most likely ChatGPT. That one line at around the 46 minute mark... "We'll make them pay for every inch of earth's soil", I have heard that line in at least another 3 or 4 stories over the last day or two. Same goes for thenphrase "tip of the spear" at around 56 minutes! I am also NOT sayjng this channel is responsible, but many of the HFY sci-fi channels have been doing stories that have been written by authors on reddit, and the channel owner has not given them permission and the channel owners claim they have wrote them themselves. For those that channels are responsible, I hope the author's set up a yt copyright claim against them. Unfortunately this is not the only niche where this happens. I narrate creepypastas, and it happens alot there too.

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If you dont like the story dont listen.

Sooo the whole fleet including capital ships were support for two small fighter ships. The pilots also where the main fighting force. This convoluted story is terrible. Humanity deserved to die in this one 😂

A few jumps in plot but not bad and I'm sure you or your A.i. I don't know will get better in time. Not ment as insult looking forward to future story,s

This sounds like fully AI, too many jumps. Shame.

This would have been a good story but for the crazy jumping from one event to another. No continuity at all. Completely disjointed.

Too much mombo-jumbo...and a lot of contast...seems to be the mind of a high schooler...

this one is trash, they keep believing the same guy that betrayed them twice already... like what???

Lay off the drugs

like hell you will take my dog . i will not subcribe

What a waste of time reading...

A bullshit of a story. Why go into hand to hand combat when you have weapons that throws projectile or death?...

Very poorly presented. No continuity. How many times does the enemy leader die? If you want this channel to grow you need to present better work.

I like the story

I liked the story!!

I like the story