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Similes and Metaphors - How to write better poetry 

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@kapahi7468
@kapahi7468 7 лет назад
I'm getting a "here in my garage" vibe.
@poesho
@poesho 7 лет назад
Damn straight!
@blaze4404
@blaze4404 7 лет назад
KNAWLEDGE
@musaenoch2277
@musaenoch2277 3 года назад
i know Im randomly asking but does anybody know a trick to log back into an instagram account?? I was dumb forgot my login password. I love any tricks you can give me
@xlmusic6419
@xlmusic6419 7 лет назад
I'm glad you mentioned the realised cliché moment. It happens to me quite often, shower thought moments where I'm trying to sum up some sort of realised truth, only to suddenly think "damn". It's been said before but never really understood. Those moments are still great/inspirational. Great video! Subbed.
@ikarus8982
@ikarus8982 6 лет назад
Sometimes having slight elements of cliche adds familiarity to the poetry. Which can make people like it more. Great video!
@KuchBhi-nb6zk
@KuchBhi-nb6zk Год назад
"Sausage of happiness" is an incredibly moving image
@nilahrios531
@nilahrios531 Год назад
😂
@bellamybug
@bellamybug 8 лет назад
Good point at 13:44. One thing they always tell me at school is that, if something doesn't fit or *can* be improved, then we should remove it and improve it. They also tell us that similes and metaphors are important because they appear in more than just literature; it appears in music, etc. I primarily focus on using metaphors, because that is thought to be the best way to gain marks in assessments to do with persuading. Thanks for sharing, I've certainly learned today. :-)
@poesho
@poesho 8 лет назад
+Oliver Garcia That's interesting, Oliver. Why do you think your teacher awards metaphors more in assessments? In real life, when there is no one to grade our work for us, do you think metaphors still serve an important purpose in helping us think?
@bellamybug
@bellamybug 8 лет назад
Poetry Show Great question. It made me think. Metaphors make me think because my theme of writing tends to be quite literal - unfortunately for me, because our next topic will be focusing on *non*-literal writing! I always assumed that poets always scrutinize their works through and through, or assessed their piece with other people. The whole purpose of metaphors is that it makes you think - it's not easy to come up with one, which I learned the hard way. In general, I presumed the teacher awarded more marks because metaphors incline to entice more people - and poetry geeks - into reading, etc.
@sethpandah8049
@sethpandah8049 7 лет назад
However, cliché has a lot of power too in the fact that it is an established idea because the fact that it has been used and thought before bring people to a familar setting. It has been said that "everything has been said, but since nobody was listening, it has to be said again." Now I'm not saying to always use cliches, but never ever ever using one is called being a hipster. (Okay so I'm joking on that one...) I mean really, if a cliche takes a spot in a poem where you would say something yourself, I don't believe that any idea is 100% original. Someone out there has to have thought of your idea in some form... So really not using clichés is really you taking established ideas and trying to say them in another way that is basically the same just slightly different.
@poesho
@poesho 7 лет назад
CommonCore Autismos I prefer poetry that challenges established ideas. Sure, cliche has a place in poetry, but many beginning poets misuse cliche, or don't realise they are using one. I wouldn't say never use cliches, but I would be very careful about using them unless I was convinced it was the best way to communicate my ideas.
@yolandayoima7826
@yolandayoima7826 7 лет назад
YOU'RE VIDEOS ARE AMAZING THANK YOU ITS SO HARD TO FIND GREAT POETRY VIDEOS
@jeremybenson5782
@jeremybenson5782 7 лет назад
I happen to think sausage of happiness is awesome, and you smiled when you said it, so you know you like it, lol. It's not a good idea for personal poetry, sounds like a good way to get ideas for a comedy movie though.
@sophiyabineesh4084
@sophiyabineesh4084 2 месяца назад
Amazingly explained ❤
@TheMiningMersie
@TheMiningMersie 7 лет назад
i feel like you are staring into my soul. But thanks for this info, i was having trouble with metaphors for my songs (when i get bored i just make songs, and i just want to get better)
@MadArcher0
@MadArcher0 3 года назад
This channel is underrated
@chiomaprecious9230
@chiomaprecious9230 3 года назад
Splendid. Thanks, I'm learning new stuff.
@Kyr1981
@Kyr1981 8 лет назад
I remember seeing that "sausage of happiness" video. It was an awful metaphor and made me instantly about penis. Ha!
@_Anon-8020
@_Anon-8020 6 лет назад
K.Y. Robinson haha,i guess the might've thought hard about it but ends up getting sexual.which is not thought through.
@ikarus8982
@ikarus8982 6 лет назад
Could work as wordplay too. The sausage of happiness/a penis... lmao!
@icepalmhearthgold338
@icepalmhearthgold338 8 лет назад
thanks for uploading! I really need a lot of metaphors in my story but getting this is a lot of pain of confusion.
@henrykrinkle4580
@henrykrinkle4580 8 лет назад
The sausage of happiness? That's so cliche.
@sumayahalfeed9270
@sumayahalfeed9270 5 лет назад
What about the white man of boringness
@martinhasson4942
@martinhasson4942 4 года назад
Shall I compare thee to a sausage? 😬
@marynjunnge6994
@marynjunnge6994 4 года назад
Cute photo
@mauricesadler2662
@mauricesadler2662 6 лет назад
Me personally I like including cliches alongside original metaphors and similes as long as it adds to my main muse
@sophiyabineesh4084
@sophiyabineesh4084 2 месяца назад
Great video ❤
@thesoultheory3822
@thesoultheory3822 5 лет назад
Subscribed. These are excellent tutorials about poetry. I hope you continue doing this.
@AdamGaryPoetry
@AdamGaryPoetry 5 лет назад
Have you seen the latest upload? :( gutted.
@aleidacabreja9760
@aleidacabreja9760 4 года назад
I feel so happy that my house is painted for the summer and is beautiful
@aleidacabreja9760
@aleidacabreja9760 4 года назад
I feel so happy that my house is painted for the summer and is beautiful
@awoman9750
@awoman9750 Год назад
The notion that we should scrap random association as a means of metaphor discovery is nonsense. I have never tried it but will now, since this is a technique that engages the mind instead of sensoring it, and poets I know who do use it, do so with impressive results.
@dotterel
@dotterel 7 лет назад
13:46 "Yeah, I want there." Haha, love this show. Appreciate the hard-work you've put into it.
@mahimadevkota4443
@mahimadevkota4443 7 лет назад
you are simply awesome
@OldNerdLogan
@OldNerdLogan 25 дней назад
Sausages have made many people happy
@crafofart
@crafofart 3 года назад
The Sausage of happiness 😂😂😂
@Harry-sl6dn
@Harry-sl6dn 7 лет назад
Metaphors e.g.your smile lights up the room
@ip4502
@ip4502 6 лет назад
Harry Singh cliche
@saeedbaloch2393
@saeedbaloch2393 6 лет назад
impeccable illustrations mate
@victormorgado5318
@victormorgado5318 3 года назад
what a happy night for me
@kentfarmer2911
@kentfarmer2911 4 года назад
The sausage of happiness has it's place in pornographic poetry just like the melons of joy and the drapes of ecstasy.
@noellhench55
@noellhench55 3 года назад
I found really helpful. Thank you big for this.
@crazyduck1254
@crazyduck1254 2 года назад
i’m just curious, I like your show, who are you? A poetry professor?
@stephenjoiner3738
@stephenjoiner3738 6 лет назад
Who was the best creator of metaphor in lyrical poetry?
@cocorosh7295
@cocorosh7295 5 лет назад
Kodak black
@ieltstoefl7586
@ieltstoefl7586 6 лет назад
Thanks . . . I'm arabic speaking . . . our poetry is very musical . . . I can not taste poetry in English . . .
@clasesdepoesia9166
@clasesdepoesia9166 8 лет назад
Good idea to teach us some notions about poetry, I start the same project (you could see my channel), but the difference is that my language is SPANISH! : D and now i don't speak english with the level that i will need to teach poetry... anyway some ideas are common and useful for any language you use for example imaginatives metaphors
@poesho
@poesho 8 лет назад
+Clases De Poesia cool! Good luck with your project :)
@reubenjonahetubi5910
@reubenjonahetubi5910 5 лет назад
can I use my 5 senses to make metaphor out of them to write a songs, if yes how?
@AdamGaryPoetry
@AdamGaryPoetry 5 лет назад
Definitely!
@DrRCStone
@DrRCStone Год назад
Pretty sure I just streamed Sausage of Happiness 18 just last night.
@cherryEntafield
@cherryEntafield 7 лет назад
this is a great video, thanx
@sjinvestors250
@sjinvestors250 Год назад
Nice
@helenstangret8830
@helenstangret8830 Год назад
I can’t find the link that you refer to
@martinhasson4942
@martinhasson4942 4 года назад
Lubbly Jubbly! Great video! 👈
@Deezeez23
@Deezeez23 7 лет назад
Props on tha Prop
@lisalawn1111
@lisalawn1111 3 года назад
Thanks!
@esmeekim7774
@esmeekim7774 3 года назад
Do you have tips in order to win a poetry writing competition? It says in the criteria that the poetic structure is 30% for the overall score from the judges and I am not so sure about that... Any tips to win?
@franklindelanore8271
@franklindelanore8271 8 лет назад
Ty for the info
@BeiberLux1D
@BeiberLux1D 7 лет назад
My English teacher is making us do the random paper thing
@stephenhowell8132
@stephenhowell8132 3 года назад
any recommendations on what poetry i should start reading
@blurisking
@blurisking 2 года назад
“sausage of happiness”?!?!? Maybe for a rap song I guess 🤦🏽‍♂️
@wanxiao.890
@wanxiao.890 2 года назад
100 yay
@oscarramirez7019
@oscarramirez7019 8 лет назад
lovely mate
@poesho
@poesho 8 лет назад
Thanks!
@mikefuller6959
@mikefuller6959 7 лет назад
A poem by Mike Fuller Pink Racing Car A pink racing car. A pink racing car. In my dreams I could go far In my beloved pink racing car. Mike Fuller ( 2015 )
@mikefuller6959
@mikefuller6959 7 лет назад
13:22 By the group Blondie in their memorable hit from the 1970's for one example.
@skepticaldopefeind
@skepticaldopefeind 5 лет назад
You think LSD will give me new fresh metaphors?!
@AdamGaryPoetry
@AdamGaryPoetry 5 лет назад
Only one way to find out...
@skepticaldopefeind
@skepticaldopefeind 5 лет назад
Adam Gary Poetry ooooh!!! How should I find out!?! Should I cheat on my girl!???
@AdamGaryPoetry
@AdamGaryPoetry 5 лет назад
@@skepticaldopefeind No! BUT you should maybe walk into a parked car? That will definitely give you the answer! Make sure you're also holding a garden hose though, just in case!
@MartyMediaDotMe
@MartyMediaDotMe 7 лет назад
yo thanks so much for your tutorials they're so useful
@sarashabbir1190
@sarashabbir1190 4 года назад
I also post my poetry on my channel
@pranavthinks
@pranavthinks 3 года назад
Good
@vainboii7669
@vainboii7669 6 лет назад
But what if the subconsciousness in my brain pops up something so cliche 8:59
@soul_onf_ire
@soul_onf_ire 2 года назад
@13:00 Blondie did it first.
@truthofficial3140
@truthofficial3140 8 лет назад
are you for hire on coaching?
@Nairobikbal
@Nairobikbal 8 лет назад
Get you please help me! I am writing a poem about the color white!
@poesho
@poesho 8 лет назад
+jasleen bal "white's alright, except at night" There you go, that's a FREEBIE!
@poesho
@poesho 8 лет назад
+jasleen bal in all seriousness, though, it's kinda impossible to help you write a poem about a colour. What is your reason for writing the poem? What do you want to say with it? How do you want people to feel? I'd start there first...
@marielmoslares8511
@marielmoslares8511 8 лет назад
thanks i love you
@JacksonBates
@JacksonBates 8 лет назад
Thanks for watching :)
@poesho
@poesho 8 лет назад
Oops, wrong account. You get the idea :)
@azkanand5832
@azkanand5832 7 лет назад
lol just say you want to introduce your self :D
@marielmoslares8511
@marielmoslares8511 7 лет назад
@marielmoslares8511
@marielmoslares8511 7 лет назад
Poetry Show
@eleveneleven7832
@eleveneleven7832 5 лет назад
Can i get you advise on what this is iam riding with no hate in my viens iam just here to explain I've looked out my window and seen the world in pain iam not peacking the game iam peaking change I had to wiped my feet before I stood on pricibles peak god gave me words neater then bleach I had to ask for his aproval before I gave this speech he put me in this world to preach giving you lessons they don't teach in classes for all masses my words aren't torturous just flipin your mind to an awkward bliss all these professional hyipacites ripping nations and states to bits sat around a table making decisions that are fatle my thoughts are bouncing my idea is spouting like a foutian my thoughts coming in quick like a falcon malcom x marked the spot that history and soicerity forgot these greats where gone to soon pride bigger then the moon there ideas didn't have enough room
@h_curly6384
@h_curly6384 4 года назад
eleven eleven needs punctuation, and proper grammar
@buntyclara
@buntyclara 4 года назад
"a lot more punchier"??! Are you sure?
@Void3.0
@Void3.0 5 лет назад
Funny I watched the sausage video last night, wtf like!?
@binghamguevara6814
@binghamguevara6814 5 лет назад
Can you provide a link to the video. What the title? Thank you.
@maishakamal6167
@maishakamal6167 5 лет назад
very hard
@UltimateKyuubiFox
@UltimateKyuubiFox 6 лет назад
“The bloodshot moon looming: disgust”
@jeffbrownstain
@jeffbrownstain 8 лет назад
what are you, a kabbalist?
@deadwatch4208
@deadwatch4208 8 лет назад
helppppppppppppppppppppppp
@ip4502
@ip4502 6 лет назад
Dude you gotta write when you talk or something I stopped listening at 11 minutes.
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