For context Filian was having a stream where she asked vtubers to do presentations, and I did this. For context this is the stream where that happened / 2164530693 This is my previous concert stream : • 3D LIVE : NYANA'S SPEC...
"Come from Puerto Rica, I'm a spicy type of chica" is amazing, A+ it's just so damn satisfying. Honestly though, the middle verse could've used some time to cook. "I'll show you a concert I made" doesn't quite rhyme with "presentation today", and "even without company support" doesn't quite fit the meter. Also, contort doesn't quite fit this usage. What about "For my presentation today, I'll put my show on display, Made without a single bit of corp'rate support. I'm happy to report, There were no legs broke no extort" (idk, I know it changes the punchline but I couldn't figure out how to keep the original idea, still the internal rhyme of CORP'rate supPORT is pretty good). Idk, I'm picky about rhymes, take my advice for what its worth (very little).