So dope! I like analyzing sounds and been doing it for years. Something Space Laces does a lot is add transients to a lot of his sounds. In this case, a bit of pitch envelope to that laser bass would give more “thump” and bounce. He also tends to throw in random “transient” pseudo kick-style sounds (not necessarily a kick, but anything that gives a “thump” to support a not so transient/squashed sound). Anyways.. super dope! Great work!
dope remake, i suggest you change the snare to a metallic trap snare something that sounds like the chop snare but not too close, you can find some in oversampled's project x sample pack