Spider-Man: Homecoming Pitch Meeting - Revisited! 

When Ryan does the voices during the re-writes i always think “man, he does such a good impression of those guys!”

"If you make a mistake, people will point it out" Ryan George

Doing the voices during the rewrite makes that section soooo much better. Makes it more like he’s adding new jokes to experience, not just typing in a Google Doc

"if you make a mistake, people WILL point it out" - says a guy who points out mistakes and inconsistencies for a living -Regards, People

The "F**k you message" to Sony in the rewriting section caught me off guard 😂😂😂

The Birdman joke was brilliant, you're right to be proud of it.

Ryan’s like ‘nah nah nah sister, you ain’t getting me to no secondary location’

I find it totally awesome that Ryan does everything on this channel by himself. The acting, the writing, the editing, the filming. Really impressive! And he keeps getting better.

Watching you edit your script in real time is like watching a great magic trick, seeing pure comedy come to life instantly. Please keep this segment in all your revisits!

google doc segment is brilliant, it provides an opportunity for jokes that didn't make it or that were thought of later, while giving an insight into the process and how you have improved at the same time.

Watching every pitch meeting and then watching every one again revisited is TIGHT

Who is this guy? His impressions of Writer Guy and Producer Guy is spot on! Good work!

Every time I watch Ryan edit his google docs, it feels like watching a master wood-worker restore an old piece of furniture. It's fascinating to watch and see the growth that has occurred over the years.

I like watching these older ones and seeing how Producer Guy and Writer Guy got more and more unhinged over time. They’re generally calmer and more restrained in the earlier ones.

Love the rewrites, we basically get 2 for one pitch meetings. A fresh and evolved take.

Showing how you would rewrite these old Pitch Meetings is TIGHT!

Love the google docking, it's like an extra pitch meeting

I think you underestimate how much fun the Google docs editing scenes are. Really enjoy it.

omg this “live re-writing” format is sooo much more work for him than previous ‘Revisited’ videos.. but ITS SO 👏 GOOD 👏

I think it reflects a lot of evolution if both you and the fans can see an old pitch meeting, and figure out how current you would make it snappier

"Ryan, I am DYING--" *Oh no!* "--to know..." *Oh, okay.* 😂😂😂

i love the google doc sections so much i am at the point where i wish you would re-do your older pitch meetings .. that obelisk joke is tight!

What these revisits make me realise is that I think it would be really fun to watch if you did a "remastered" of old pitch meetings, where you go back and remake the old pitch meetings with everything you've learned since, just to see how different and similar things would be.

Love these pitch meetings and revisits. It gives a satisfying conclusion to older videos that didn't have all the catch phrases and mannerisms mastered yet. Have you thought of doing more Pitch Meetings for TV shows? One of my favorites is Friends. It would be great to revisit classic shows, maybe even some old cartoons with ridiculous premises like Tale Spin or Johnny Bravo.

"A bird man, I can work with that." Recently watched that movie, now I understand that reference. Or, to put it in other words: He said the thing!!!

After you've been doing these revisited pitch meetings for a while, you should revisit a revisited one

Hey Ryan, I love the clean setup you're rocking now! Your lighting and new mic is *chef's kiss* 🤌

Why did the camera keep moving back and forth? That was a bit distracting... Great video as always though!! The rewrite was amazing. I love that you added that section

I LOVE the changes, especially Producer Guy shoehorning Iron Man in because "people like Iron Man," classic!

I like that you shifted from just you talking to over-exagering the character voices you use in later episodes. This made them a lot more interesting.

This is my favourite rewrite section you've done! I think it really showed how you think things through. Got an insight into your mind... In a non-creepy way

You're completely right about the unexpected bleeping joke. Even hearing you talk about it made me laugh.

seems like Producer Guy and Writer guy grew up and chilled out a little.

7:17 You can't just suddenly say the movie came out 8 years ago, you're gonna hurt my feelings.

I enjoy the Google docs portion of the video, it's fascinating to see the thought process that goes into creating such great comedy.

Thank you for taking charge with the doccing, I'm new to this so I appreciate having a confident, experienced person show me how it's done. Truly a gentleman.

"Iron Man comes to save the day." "Is it smart for Spider-Man to always rely on Iron Man to do that?" "Why not? It's not like Iron Man is going away anytime soon. I mean, he's not going to die. That would be crazy." "Oh right, that WOULD be crazy."

I’m really liking the Google Doc portion. It’s actually kind of educational for me as I want improve my writing. Accidental learning!

My dude, you are absolutely my favorite RU-vidr. Thank you so very much for all the laughs…and more than a few poignant insights into flicks I love.

I love the insight into your though process the Google doc section gives us. Plus it's like an extra mini-pitch meeting as you're doing it! Thanks for all the laughs and I hope you and your family are well.

I love these google doc segments. Its far more educational than it has any right to be lol

Congrats on you being a dad and thank you for still banging out this videos

Not only does this “revisit” transport me back seven years in time to when you made the original video, roughly 2-3 years before I discovered you on RU-vid (yes, it was I who discovered you!), but it also gives me added value in the form of your self-critique. And I’m really glad that you pointed out your mispronunciation of the word “debris” so that I didn’t have to mock you mercilessly for it. Very kind of ya!

Watching your re-writing was an absolute joy. It was magical to see you bring new life to the script.

Love the MJ drawing with the red hair 😂

"Coz i have seen movies" , hahahahaha GOLD right there. xD

"Yeah-yeah-yeah! 😁😁" It's great watching you switching back and forth between the two characters as you type out the script 😂😂

i really do enjoy the revisions! thank you for making them a regular addition!

Please do a pitch meeting for a muppet Christmas carol (or any muppets movie)

I'm genuinely impressed by the drawings Ryan makes

I'm enjoying the Google Doc rewrite segments. Even when you're editing it as you go, you still act it out and it's just as hilarious!

I really love these revisits. It's so interesting to see how your writing style has changed and developed.

Before I finish the video, “I’ll be so disappointed if you don’t draw Michael Jordan from the epic space jam”. After the video. “I was not disappointed, you are good at the comedy and I’m good at seeing the punchline.”

Revisiting Pitch Meetings Are Tight And Clicking on this was super easy barely an inconvenience

I love seeing how your writing has come so far. Seeing you write a Pitch Meeting is awesome.

I really enjoy your "Revisited" series. It is very interesting to hear your thought process in hindsight. Please keep doing what you do and I will keep watching!!!!

The mistake of having Peter’s love interest falling from a tower…not because it doesn’t happen (again), but because the Washington Monument is actually an Obelisk, not a tower. 😂 Still my favorite bit from this Pitch Meeting.

1:52 that birdman reference had me dying 🤣

Comparing this to your newest Rebel Moon 2 pitch meeting, you've definitely got your formula on point. It's nice to see the evolution of your characters, voices and witty remarks. Great channel!

I feel like your re-writes section is improving as you go along, the way you are leaning more into doing the voices and almost acting it out, so that we get a good idea of how it would go if it were the actual pitch meeting. Which is really Meta, since the section that currently is improving is dealing with how you would improve the past content. Absolutely love it! I can envision you taking it even further, so that it almost becomes a remake of the first Pitch Meeting. I mean, remakes are all the rage, right?

Commenting on the previous content is tight.

Spider-Man is the epitome of doing a backflip, snapping the bad guys neck and saving the day.

These videos are great, I used to rewatch pitch meetings over and over and is kinda the same but with new content. I think these videos are getting better and better.

I just love these revisits soooo much!!! Keep up the great work!!

No matter how many times you revisit a pitch meeting...... never fails to make me laugh !! But for Ryan(s) ...its barely an inconvenience !! Thank you for spreading so much joy ⭐

Love that you started doing the editing thing in these, it's cool seeing your writing process

I just read your channel description and went, “Oh, new episodes released every Thursday is TIGHT!” 😁

I like the addition of Producer Guy forcing Iron Man into the script, studio notes are much more fitting for him and not for Writer Guy.

OMG IS THAT RYAN FROM THE THING IM CURRENTLY WATCHING????

That MJ is amazing

You’re the best, man! You always crack me up! Hope to continue seeing you in many years to come. Congrats on being a father, I wish your daughter all the best, beautiful things in life!!

I love when you Google doc. Docking is tight!

Oof the difference in quality then and now on that one is HUGE ! Honestly just even the tone and acting, the then video is awkward it's very "i just started". Now it's very "overacted" for comedy but in a good way and it works wayyyy better ! like the "Oh my God..." intonation you do now is way better !

Omg ive been trying to figure out where i knew you from! Your ryan george from the thing im currently watching!!!

The "OH" in front of the really reply to the super easy barely an inconvenience is nice!

I really enjoy this new format of editing the old scripts. Awesome way to add even more depth to this series!

Love your videos! Still waiting patiently for a malignant pitch meeting

Screenwriter Guy: .......... **** you. 😂😂😂

Popped in my Head…you need to do a pitch meeting for the movie ARMAGEDDON!!

The thing with Ned seems…odd to me. Like, him not having the best social awareness doesn’t clash with him being amazing at computer stuff. He’s more of a stereotype if anything, of a socially unaware nerd

Once you've done enough of these, I'd love a 2.0 or "Pitch Meeting: Redo" series, where you rerecord these with the updated scripts. Easy for you and it brings them up to date. Love your work Ryan!

I love the rewrite part. Your little readings of it is the icing on the cake.

Is it bad that I want him to do Schindler’s List just so I can hear him say, “[Anything that happened in the movie] is TIGHT!”?

The tower joke definitely needed tightening up, hehehehe, but listening to it first time around my main criticism of it would be explaining the joke too much. "To make our film better than the old movies we'll have her fall from a different tower. It's a mistake. Is it? Yes it's an obelisk not a tower. Oh but you like the idea? Oh yeah I like the tower fall again thing." Without a full rework I think it should have simply been: "To make our film better than the old movies we'll have her fall from a different tower. It's a mistake. Is it? Yes it's an obelisk not a tower." I feel in your later Pitch Meeting's you have learned to trust the audience a bit more to get the joke.

Love the rewrite section! I mean… I love your whole video. But I especially love the rewrite portion.

gives Ryan a hug

I actually really liked the slower pace of the washington monument joke in the original. Sometimes newer pitch meetings can be painfully fast paced.

Accurately calling writing lazy is not a sin.

I luv these re-writes, it really shows off your talent and process.

I like trying to guess the drawing. The Jordan part was obviously but mj’s hair got me. Well done man in box.

“Game pitches would be TIGHT!”

Hi Ryan, please do a Pitch Meeting for The Room l! I've been asking for 4 years! I would say wow wow wow.......... Wow!

Love your videos. I really enjoy the sincerity of the revisited stuff!

I love these so much! Something magical about seeing it done and hearing it at the same time ^^ Thank you Ryan for doing these you wonderful person you 😋

Ryan - would you ever consider doing Pitch Meetings for famous/popular songs? Could be a lot of great material there.

its so cool watching your script writing process in this video

The Google Docs section of these videos are the BEST! Literally a short comedy writing lesson and I get the euphoria of seeing your jokes come to life in front of my eyes/ears!

RU-vid is killing it with their notifications. They sent me a notification 11 hours after I'd _already watched it_

Just chiming in as a fellow writer to say I deeply appreciate those google doc sections. I love hearing your progression as you grow to understand your characters better. Thanks for all the fish, guy.

Ryan is a master of google docking. He always seems to wrap the tip of the new changes over the shaft of the existing piece so neatly.