I wonder if the device used to send them back is leaking latent time energy that is affecting Janet's personal timeline. Oh, so the presence of Tyrone is causing the memory paradox she's having. Cool. I liked the structure of writing you used. Or, to put it another way, you seem like you're getting some good practice writing. Keep it up and that book will be written in no time. Maybe before the end of 2030. Okay, hopefully a bit before then. So, you could flesh out Tyrone more in this scene or you can intentionally leave it more vague and reveal more as events unfold. The choice is yours based on what his purpose in the story will be.
[ND] Interesting guess! I had told my dad some about my idea before writing this scene, so that probably colored his interpretation of it, making it easier for him to figure out the meaning than for you. One thought we have now is to potentially make this scene a part of a larger prologue, and developing more of both Janet's and Tyrone's character in it. At the very least, I need to have a better knowledge of Tyrone's so I can write him better in the scene.
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