Very cool! One thing I would say which would help is to make the star destroyer move slower from 0:09 onwards as it's moving pretty fast for a star destroyer. Also may I ask how you did the planet? Struggling to find good tutorials on doing star wars planets.
Thanks for the suggestion and for the planet I've followed this tutorial : ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-m7lSjsiUa1g.html then use one of these as HDRI : rendercrate.com/3D/hdr-space.html
@@michaelh.4266 the music is edited version of this : ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-ON6KZ1M3zLw.html and the tie fighter roar maybe this iirc : ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE--iGk7MT_0R0.html