Nice animation I love the blend of real sets with legos. You sound almost exactly like the original fordo actor from the tartokovsky clone wars. The blend of lines for obi wan is really good.
I don't know yet I will focus my work on my serie so I can't tell but you can take a look on this video try to play it a t 0.25x speed it was my first attempt to animate AT TE walkers check at 0:35 and 1:22 ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-HiC8NF-Xfhg.html
Looks good man love how you incorporated all the scenes from the 2003 show along with other parts to show how wide spread they were amazing camera work to