Everybody Please stop being so harsh, e.g. she was to close, or she was too fast, maybe that was true but she put herself out there and she did an amazing job.
Don't listen to any of these mean spirited peoples negative reviews. I'm sure none of them when they were your age could play a fraction of as good as you, if they could play at all. There just self loathing, angry, miserable people who spend everyday trying to make others feel as bad as they do. You were excellent, and you'll only keep getting better, and your smile lights up a room.
Faster FASTER FASTER THE DANCERS GOTTA FALL .... it’s a waltz slow down - I learned this when I was 14 and my teacher almost killed me when I went fast
You could improve it a little bit more, but overall very acceptable. Well done. Be sure to work particularly on the emotional expression... Chopin is like a poet, only with a musical notes instead of words.