"The Lighthouse" Original New Creepypasta 

Let's go! I love your content. Original makes it even better. 🎃

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Very glad you enjoyed it! I'd like to see if I can make this character a recurring protagonist, so am certainly considering it! 🖤

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You certainly can! 😉

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Thank you very much! I'm so glad you liked it. I did write it with a part two in mind, so watch this space 🖤

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Thank you!

I'm on my 4th and last listen to finish the story. A sign of a good story and storyteller.

Yes it is - It's one of my favourite unsolved mysteries, and inspired this story!

That's a very good spot! I did actually base this story on the Flannan Isles Lighthouse disappearances, it's a very fascinating story. And yes, I will be starting work on part two very soon 🖤

Great to hear, thank you! I certainly wrote this in mind of having the protagonist in a series of stories, so I'm glad this helped you to connect with him better

Whatever you do, don't stop writing. For me, after being jaded by so many boogeymen and monstrosities the most effective horror is that which can throw me in to the environment. You've got the perfect blend of environmental description, tone setting and tension building going. I can genuinely close my eyes and picture the scenes you depict. A lot of western writers miss the importance of atmosphere and setting the scene for contemplation. This sounds a bit fluff but it is accurate. To put it hopefully more direct, placing me in the shoes of an everyman and lulling me to a pacified state leads into suspension of disbelief when the scare finally comes. Slowly mounting dread is more impacful than throwing me in to the mix with an instant juxtaposition to my mundane reality which seems to be more common than not with so many stories I've read in recent years.

Thank you so much! 🖤

Thank you so much! I'm certainly looking at getting self-published once I've got enough good stories 🖤

I took inspiration for this story from the real life Flannan Isle Lighthouse disappearances, so that might be why it sounds familiar 🖤