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The Story of a Heartbroken Girl Part 1... Fatherless 

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I already posted this song a few months ago. Decided to re-record it though because I knew I could get this message across to more people if I do it again, and at the end of the day, I just want to impact as many people as possible with my music. Love you guys, and here's one more message:
I had a vision, and in the vision, I could see a heartbroken girl. A girl who had never felt love from a man in her life. If that's you, I want you to know, that you are loved. You may not have an Earthly father, but know that there is a father in heaven. And he loves you more than anything. You're reading this for a reason if that's you, and God wants to share all his love with you, so just open your arms, and let his love rain. I promise, you will not regret it.
Lyrics:
Wave after wave/
Day after day/
She tries to be brave/
But she just feels like a slave/
Life is a game/
And she’s enduring its pain/
Lately life just aint been feeling the same/
X2
2:30
Verse
She would slit her wrists because she felt like she deserved it/
When her father left as a child, that just dug a burden/
Now she tryna find real love from a man/
She never felt it/
But she always seems to get heartbroken,
She feeling helpless/
And she don’t know what to do/
She don’t know where to turn/
She don’t know where to go/
She don’t know where to learn/
So she stuck here/
And she feel like she stuck in the dirt/
Every day she try to pray,
But everyday keeps getting worse/
Everyday keep feeling like this the day she finally gone break/
All these rumors flying round about her,
But she know they fake/
But she the only one that know that,
So everybody keep talking still/
Everybody talking, not knowing what they saying aint real/
Not knowing what they saying could possibly end up hurting lifes/
Not knowing that they talking bout somebody else’s future wife/
Now think about that/
For real… Just think about that
Wave after wave/
Day after day/
She tries to be brave/
But she just feels like a slave/
Life is a game/
And she’s enduring its pain/
Lately life just aint been feeling the same/
X2
Instrumental: • Free Russ | Post Malon... (Produced by Young Taylor)
Check out my man Zimm who has a very similiar song to this as well "A Song For Every Girl That Got Used" • Video
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Sample for the Beat: (Mr. Probz Wave After Wave/ Waves) • Video

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@marzbarmusic2163
@marzbarmusic2163 6 лет назад
who else wants a Soundcloud link so they can listen to this on repeat?? Like so Presence can see :)
@PresenceMusic
@PresenceMusic 6 лет назад
Marzbar Music Releasing my first song/ music video next week. I'll be sure to put it on SoundCloud for yall💯
@harrywolfendale5483
@harrywolfendale5483 6 лет назад
Presence Raps Spotify too please
@tylerilgen8804
@tylerilgen8804 6 лет назад
Marzbar Music on everything I been tryna bump his shit on repeat, a playlist dedicated to Presence, link it on SoundCloud or Spotify it’d really help ur fans
@jpainvevo7147
@jpainvevo7147 6 лет назад
check this out soundcloud.com/slumpjmisery/sjm-doctors-orders-prod-pilgram it goes really hard and deep! hopefully me and Presence Raps can do a song together
@jpainvevo7147
@jpainvevo7147 6 лет назад
soundcloud.com/slumpjmisery/sjm-doctors-orders-prod-pilgram, I checked it out! it was good keep going
@PresenceMusic
@PresenceMusic 6 лет назад
I already posted this song a few months ago. Decided to re-record it though because I knew I could get this message across to more people if I do it again, and at the end of the day, I just want to impact as many people as possible with my music. Love you guys. Have a blessed rest of the day. My first music video should be coming out soon🙏
@alexpyatskowit3358
@alexpyatskowit3358 6 лет назад
Presence Raps its still dope!!
@kennythao2282
@kennythao2282 6 лет назад
Presence Raps good music bro, keep it up!! Looking forward to more music from you!💯👌🏽
@itsmiathequeen4066
@itsmiathequeen4066 6 лет назад
Thaks u help and I love your music
@itsmiathequeen4066
@itsmiathequeen4066 6 лет назад
And I hope you go far
@tytianagates2810
@tytianagates2810 6 лет назад
Presence Raps can't wait to see that💙💙👏🙌keep grinding and doing your thing
@rayfrey904
@rayfrey904 6 лет назад
i love to see you grow you deserve the world your music makes me enjoy life
@Dash.12
@Dash.12 6 лет назад
I heard this and it made me break up with my current girlfriend that's how deep this shit was ANYWAYS GOOD JOB BRO you never fail to impress me keep grinding
@julianacloete3936
@julianacloete3936 6 лет назад
Dash 😢😢😢really its so sad I can relate to that
@JOSVPH22
@JOSVPH22 6 лет назад
Wait, why did you break up?
@yeekski
@yeekski 6 лет назад
JOSVPH i was confused about that too
@aaliyarrhh9769
@aaliyarrhh9769 6 лет назад
Confused af
@Soviooo
@Soviooo 6 лет назад
that took a quick turn
@lindaillescaz4384
@lindaillescaz4384 6 лет назад
I feel like you just said my whole life i've been fighting bipolar/depression, my dad left me when I was 7 , I moved schools fell in with the wrong guy . there was a moment where I was nobody but that one rumor spread out and I be came the new news there was once where I thought committing suicide was the only answer I tried 4 but found that I have to look onto the positives and the negatives tour music has inspired me knowing that you care about the people out there thank you -stephanie
@kiwiproductions7453
@kiwiproductions7453 6 лет назад
Linda Illescaz yo, stay strong
@lisarosario559
@lisarosario559 6 лет назад
I fight bipolar/depression too
@madihaaziz6982
@madihaaziz6982 5 лет назад
l
@addisonlindley4928
@addisonlindley4928 6 лет назад
your songs always hit the spot and make chills run down my spine.
@user-cf6dn5tg4f
@user-cf6dn5tg4f 6 лет назад
Addison Lindley 💯
@IsaacCruz
@IsaacCruz 6 лет назад
Addison Lindley what’s your snap
@addisonlindley4928
@addisonlindley4928 6 лет назад
Isaac Cruz addilovesya
@JOSVPH22
@JOSVPH22 6 лет назад
You're literally blowing up bruh. I'm proud.
@avataylor9171
@avataylor9171 6 лет назад
I never had a father he abandoned me wen I was 2 and I just lost my 12 yr old sistah to suicide 3 months ago I feel so lost and broken in side w out these to
@PunoBendito
@PunoBendito 6 лет назад
Ava Taylor sister*
@igazi3324
@igazi3324 6 лет назад
Brian Pavon necessary?
@PunoBendito
@PunoBendito 6 лет назад
IGAZI Music Yes
@fallensoul6922
@fallensoul6922 6 лет назад
Ava Taylor I am sorry for your loss. I understand how you feel. But keep your head up and stay strong! You're loved and beautiful and your sister is watching over you from above! Stay strong, love. You will be okay❤️❤️❤️💜💜💜😘 love you
@kriminalvet2602
@kriminalvet2602 6 лет назад
Ava Taylor I know you need to talk to people but maybe sharing with a friend or family and not blasting it on RU-vid comments is probably
@LizandroVarela
@LizandroVarela 6 лет назад
This should be on Thirteen reasons why season 2
@deannarose2667
@deannarose2667 6 лет назад
Overle i agree it should be on there
@dplug1276
@dplug1276 6 лет назад
True true
@bestsongsplaylistetc751
@bestsongsplaylistetc751 6 лет назад
Yep, you are right
@Daddysofficial
@Daddysofficial 6 лет назад
Always A Hit , keep going fam 🔥🙌🏼
@jadagoodcrow8698
@jadagoodcrow8698 6 лет назад
TheRealDusza your fine asf 😅🙄
@dannygproductions9519
@dannygproductions9519 6 лет назад
Dude your music too 🔥🔥🔥🔥
@donworry6473
@donworry6473 6 лет назад
TheRealDusza You guys need to collaborate
@samanthacastaneda7695
@samanthacastaneda7695 6 лет назад
TheRealDusza do a duets fam
@bickel156
@bickel156 6 лет назад
🔥👍🏼
@davidgeipel3282
@davidgeipel3282 6 лет назад
Bro... This hit me SO HARDD... Amazing work, keep it up man chase your dreams
@reallytryingtobeokay5331
@reallytryingtobeokay5331 6 лет назад
It's crazy how God knows exactly what you need to hear. I've never felt so compelled to text him something. Especially since he left. I didn't tho. He doesn't deserve to feel sympathy for me. I'll leave that to his new girl. I just don't know how to handle it. I love him still and I'm working on moving forward.
@kcx.14
@kcx.14 6 лет назад
😭❤🔥 i relate to this bc self harm 😞 i hate seeing people in pain tbh.
@PresenceMusic
@PresenceMusic 6 лет назад
braceface. kenz ♥️
@lucaspont6659
@lucaspont6659 6 лет назад
braceface. kenz same, same it grabs my eart out of my chest..
@kcx.14
@kcx.14 6 лет назад
Lucas Pont yeah 😞😞
@SalahSalah-ov6ce
@SalahSalah-ov6ce 6 лет назад
damn, life's unfair ;(
@Pemzaaa
@Pemzaaa 6 лет назад
same :( hmm on snapchat zeppssnaps
@mixedbybrayz
@mixedbybrayz 6 лет назад
I don't know, but I really like this style! I feel you on this one.
@priority269
@priority269 6 лет назад
*Damn you're amazing..* I honestly wish i knew you in real life because you seem like an amazing person keep up the good work :)
@johnathanwhyman393
@johnathanwhyman393 6 лет назад
Damn I remember when you first uploaded this. I know this song word by word
@PresenceMusic
@PresenceMusic 6 лет назад
WasStxrmZ You're a day one frfr than🙏
@GMNyt
@GMNyt 6 лет назад
real one
@genesisgarcia9572
@genesisgarcia9572 4 года назад
This song is so relatable, when i was little my father abounded me and it left me feeling alone.When i heard this song it brought tears to my eyes because someone understands how i feel
@yasmine2898
@yasmine2898 6 лет назад
You know what? If the only thing you wanted was people to like your music, you did more than this with me. You touch every single inch of my heart
@leolizzaldanacornelio9628
@leolizzaldanacornelio9628 6 лет назад
omg that message just hit my heart😩 my parents are getting divorced and i really kinda never felt the true love of a man that is my earthly father but you are right about the heavenly father😩😩🙌💓
@cayseemajor8549
@cayseemajor8549 6 лет назад
I absolutely love this. Thank you for this. Your vision is like the characters I create. I doodle little people and give them background story's containing my life and feeling in a way...and this song just gets me in my feelings because I relate somehow. Thank you.
@landenjoseph811
@landenjoseph811 6 лет назад
I cried...This reminds me of my mom always working hard during life..but she feels like shes going through hell everyday. This hit me in the feelings so hard 😞. I think that we all have more to appreciate for not just our moms but are dads, are brothers, are sisters, are family, for what they have all done for you! Huge inspiration, you made me realize that everything means more than I think it does.
@MasterSkySparklez
@MasterSkySparklez 6 лет назад
I read the description and cried. this is the first time a RU-vid DESC *made me cry*. THANK YOU SO MUCH💕💕
@xx_hottie_shawty_xx5957
@xx_hottie_shawty_xx5957 6 лет назад
i feel u.... i go thru the same shit often.....i love your music its your own not like bull shit lies. your music actually comes from your heart and has meaning and i love it kee t up
@benz9795
@benz9795 6 лет назад
this guy is beyond talanted how can anyone hate on him
@jeremy4602
@jeremy4602 6 лет назад
won't say "i hope you go far" bc you will, beautiful voice filled with emotions and your lyrics give me goos bumps
@kaitlynnguyen8913
@kaitlynnguyen8913 6 лет назад
Pain is such a hard and emotional thing. When I hear not only your voice but your words that are spoken truly and from the heart. It reminds me of the things ive been through and faced in my life. And in a way it feels good to hear something that relates to me, but hurts so much because I understand that pain. I know that pain. I know it like the back of my hand. I know it like the cuts that have been on my wrist. Like the scars in my heart. Like the broken soul inside me.
@aracelilemus1480
@aracelilemus1480 6 лет назад
I've listen to this song on my phone so many times I still cry till this day.
@sergiocanales3888
@sergiocanales3888 6 лет назад
The largest part that really put an impact is “she would slit her wrists because she felt like she deserved it” I understand that 💯 you are one of the main reasons why I rap keep going you are my inspiration
@ItsBreezyUploads
@ItsBreezyUploads 6 лет назад
You never disappoint.. I have your notifications on 🔥🔥🔥
@GMNyt
@GMNyt 6 лет назад
same all day
@zeroaffect227
@zeroaffect227 6 лет назад
Can't wait to see him up on stage😍💜
@allisondunn2086
@allisondunn2086 6 лет назад
I feel this on so many levels it hurts. The self harm and pain speaks to me on a personal level😭
@keylarodriguezz
@keylarodriguezz 6 лет назад
as soon as i heard this i cried instantly. i wish i had someone like you in my life, your lyrics say a lot about the good guy you are❤️
@mariadonaldson2023
@mariadonaldson2023 6 лет назад
This song is so good 💔 the way you can hear his struggle in his voice makes me tear up
@mm_kbsisters5195
@mm_kbsisters5195 6 лет назад
This single rap has gotten me through so much. It literally explains my life....And your other raps help me too. So thank you so much.
@ginnamccain6421
@ginnamccain6421 5 лет назад
I’m literally crying right now this is how deep it is😢❤️
@ashk.1804
@ashk.1804 6 лет назад
This rap got me. This is exactly how I feel and everyday it gets worse and I just can't anymore.
@Zachary_Lynn
@Zachary_Lynn 6 лет назад
You’re going places, man! Thank you for sharing this with us!! 🔥
@alison2161
@alison2161 4 года назад
Omg! I just found you this morning. Not only do you look identical to my son. (He has the Holy Spirit as well) I felt like God wrote this through you to encourage me. I have chills. Thank you for being YOU!
@grezzer1427
@grezzer1427 6 лет назад
I randomly saw this on RU-vid and yo this is deep. I felt it in my heart. Keep on making amazing music bro. Your going to go far. I believe in you.
@gabrielaalfaro5844
@gabrielaalfaro5844 6 лет назад
This made me cry like a baby lmao. Bro you're so talented wow 😩❤️
@lydiadenney9741
@lydiadenney9741 6 лет назад
being heartbroken can kill you, but to get through it is the best thing to do.
@hallejoness6444
@hallejoness6444 6 лет назад
i just found this page, but i seriously don’t think i’ve loved someone’s work so much
@keirstonchristy2139
@keirstonchristy2139 2 года назад
Me here in 2022, where I found this song in 7th grade and now I'm in my senior year of high school still listening with the same feelings...
@liliannagarcia4940
@liliannagarcia4940 6 лет назад
He’s better than like half of the celebrities.. he’s in a car not a studio and still sounds sooo good.
@babygirlkayy3849
@babygirlkayy3849 5 лет назад
I Feel the Exact same as this girl in your vision, day by day I feel more weak 😔 ♥️ this song got to me && my heart, it brought tiers in my eyes
@halliebear5194
@halliebear5194 6 лет назад
I started crying when you talked about losing a dad because then automatically I related to the whole song... Damn Man, You are way too good. You're going somewhere, I promise. Keep doing good 💕
@alinnedothe7217
@alinnedothe7217 6 лет назад
I have hella admire and respect for you. I don't feel lonely as a 15 year teen suffering life in this situation and trying to fight for Gods love. Thanks man ❤
@nic8798
@nic8798 6 лет назад
Wow!! man this is so good.. I could literally listen to him all day.
@aleceahutson5721
@aleceahutson5721 6 лет назад
I feel like god put this here for me for a reason I read your description and the lyrics and they really describe my whole life thank you
@user-vh9vl5sc2e
@user-vh9vl5sc2e 6 лет назад
damn.. since i saw jocelyn flores i really cant get enough. an amazing singer and rapper with real lyrics. this is so genuine and relatable. this is just so real.
@laurenpalczynski4084
@laurenpalczynski4084 6 лет назад
You’re going to make it big. Stick with it!
@chuwa8405
@chuwa8405 6 лет назад
This is the first video I've seen on your channel and I just want to tell you how much I needed this. How much this is my life. Every single line, I swear it's my life. You're talented, so so talented.
@PresenceMusic
@PresenceMusic 6 лет назад
Chuwa ♥️
@jessicacampbell7988
@jessicacampbell7988 4 года назад
You are really good at what you do. Don't ever let somebody turn you down. Keep chasing your dreams. I listen to you everyday and you are such a good person to listen to when I' m down!!!! I love you sooooo much!
@awfhaiuhiafiadhdifhadidai6197
@awfhaiuhiafiadhdifhadidai6197 6 лет назад
Here before 1 mil views. Fr don't lose hope. You'll hit it. Keep up the good work and you'll hit it very soon.
@lucidestmarie904
@lucidestmarie904 6 лет назад
This hits you where it hurts.
@usman7385
@usman7385 6 лет назад
These type videos reminds that I'm also 15 and could be as good as him thank for inspiration man🥀
@GamingStartPT
@GamingStartPT 6 лет назад
Bro you are getting better and better as time goes by, keep up and follow your dream !
@lexneutral5230
@lexneutral5230 6 лет назад
im crying. this is so amazing...im speechless
@tamimann5588
@tamimann5588 6 лет назад
I relate to this alot😔 my father left at birth and I have trouble with self harm💕 this is very powerful💎 I support you in a movement💢🔥
@maryholt7512
@maryholt7512 6 лет назад
i wish there were more people like you in the world..
@adelinamartinez3117
@adelinamartinez3117 5 лет назад
So I lost my dad when I was little and ever since that day the words you spoke is literally my mindset
@sumayaibrahim3557
@sumayaibrahim3557 6 лет назад
I have no words to explain how much this relates to me
@itslaura6169
@itslaura6169 6 лет назад
This is great and speaks to me as well as others, absolutely love it💕
@LidZer123
@LidZer123 6 лет назад
I fucking love and support you man, I want to see you to make it and succeed, wish you nothing but the best g
@369scsy
@369scsy 5 лет назад
this pain in his voice.. i feel with you brother
@kaylamaebrown6130
@kaylamaebrown6130 5 лет назад
these lyrics disscribe my life word for word
@estrellaespinosa4644
@estrellaespinosa4644 6 лет назад
This basically sums up my life
@destinyjames8600
@destinyjames8600 6 лет назад
Honestly it's so sad how much I can relate to this song... I haven't self harmed in so long but while I'm trying to stay clean I keep forgetting the path to the best parts of life and to get back on track can hurt more the stirring off. It used to be a controlling relationship but now it's just life in general and it just hurts ..even without the physical pain😭😭
@briannawelch5297
@briannawelch5297 4 года назад
All his songs need to be on Spotify
@finderskeeps6400
@finderskeeps6400 6 лет назад
As soon as I heard this I Thought, Do You Know...ME? Since 5 & Up to about 6 months ago...well Im just gonna say I LOVE this SONG it's my #1 so far. I like it the most out of all your raps. Thanks
@CheekyChilli
@CheekyChilli 6 лет назад
Just wow. You're young but amazing. Better than some of the older rappers or artists in the industry right now. Keep pushing cause you'll go far! ♥
@xavieramador-1167
@xavieramador-1167 6 лет назад
Idk why but this boy be inspiring me
@dianaucatini7763
@dianaucatini7763 6 лет назад
It was my first time hearing your music a few minutes ago. YOU'RE AMAZING AND IM ALREADY A HUGEE FAN. You're going places.Thanks for blessing us with this
@zoed.2591
@zoed.2591 6 лет назад
Fr moved tf outta me.. In tears rn. Thankyou tbh.💯😢💕
@prema9393
@prema9393 6 лет назад
I don't have enough words to express how much love I have for this channel and you my friend :')
@jaayfromdablock3758
@jaayfromdablock3758 6 лет назад
listening to this make get lost in my thoughts and forget all the troubles in going thru rn
@rebeccam8500
@rebeccam8500 6 лет назад
So grateful for the person who views just to dislike it in the first 30 seconds! You are even reaching the haters! Keep doing you! We are proud of you.
@paisleystar6228
@paisleystar6228 6 лет назад
This hit me so hard. I am crying really hard right now because this is the good honest truth about how I feel
@bijuu3997
@bijuu3997 6 лет назад
Never disappointed when i listen to Presence. Love this man! Keep it up fr. I swear
@chelseamartinez1061
@chelseamartinez1061 6 лет назад
Omg this song made me feel better. I stopped cutting my wrist
@aliciaedwards192
@aliciaedwards192 6 лет назад
swear babe you have talent I hope you've copy written. all of what you make, you are amazing and I'm 27 and I relate to this all, you made me cry lol keep it up your going to make it!!
@samanthagarcia3337
@samanthagarcia3337 6 лет назад
So relatable. This made me cry cause its true and the the truth hurts.😭💗
@mauricesanfordhunchoway9282
@mauricesanfordhunchoway9282 6 лет назад
Her the pain in his voice 😭😭💯
@vonBRS
@vonBRS 6 лет назад
YOU HAVE TALENT. DON'T WAIT TO BE DISCOVERED, DISCOVER YOURSELF
@Mr.Super777
@Mr.Super777 6 лет назад
Broooo I can't wait for your first single to drop! God gave you amazing talent.
@linaa9399
@linaa9399 6 лет назад
Wow..this made me cry sm...I relate to the girl a lot....😕💔
@Mj333.
@Mj333. 6 лет назад
Damn you’re really talented❤️you have the voice and the meaningful lyrics😩‼️
@Wid33yez
@Wid33yez 6 лет назад
You're hella good the industry needs more guys like you , keep it up broski👌
@v3-zetsu219
@v3-zetsu219 6 лет назад
Dude your songs have helped me so much I can basically relate to everything it’s crazy
@esperanzahernandez4615
@esperanzahernandez4615 6 лет назад
Almost made me cry that's how deep it is
@RealLyricalMusic
@RealLyricalMusic 6 лет назад
AMAZING i love this!!!my mom and dad left me when I was really young now I'm 12 about to be 13 and I self harm I've never had love in my life I feel like I'm worthless I don't like myself this always makes me cry and the pain in your voice I love it
@nayacapeles8566
@nayacapeles8566 6 лет назад
I grew up with out my father this got me too my feeling I couldn't stop crying 💔
@rawan_l7532
@rawan_l7532 6 лет назад
This hit really deep, I cannot even explain how much i relate to the lyrics ur singing, damn u just keep blowin my mind❤️!
@Nonish22
@Nonish22 6 лет назад
She don’t know what to do ,she don’t know where to turn,she don’t know where to go 💔💔
@leahsantana6032
@leahsantana6032 6 лет назад
It’s crazy how much this song explains me....
@zacworbington2075
@zacworbington2075 6 лет назад
bro this song was great, so happy I stumbled upon this channel, definitely my favorite rapper!
@scndae219
@scndae219 6 лет назад
DUDEEE, you deserve way more subscribers than this. I saw you in my recommended and honestly, i legit love your channel already. Keep up the good work!!xo
@ndndjdnd8118
@ndndjdnd8118 6 лет назад
This hit me hard, thank you so much🖤
@amorycarr5355
@amorycarr5355 6 лет назад
This is my life put in a song I finally see clear again 😩😌
@PresenceMusic
@PresenceMusic 6 лет назад
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