"There was Someone Standing in my Yard Last Night" [COMPLETE] | CreepyPasta Storytime

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@pixelized_cloudz7802 3 года назад

When he screamed “HE JUST SPRANG TOWARDS THE HOUSE! HE’S BANDING ON THE DOOR!”, I jumped and I absolutely loved how it set the scene and he put so much emotion into it.

@scorchia932 2 года назад

I was half asleep at that point, let's just say I soon woke up 😂😂

@SubcribeMinecraftNOW Год назад

That was enough to trigger anyone's fight or flight reaction

@crispgeneral3462 Год назад

So true I got severe goosebumps

@FrancisE.Dec.Esquire 5 месяцев назад

Gas Station Jack always GETS REALLY EXCITED really much emotion in his readings.

@Annihilation_Studios 4 месяца назад

@@FrancisE.Dec.Esquire Mr creepypasta is not gas station jack. They're just good friends that work on the gas station series together

@alecs5394 5 лет назад

oh those sneaky little Jehovah's Witnesses

@moviegirlaka 5 лет назад

🤣

@ToyBonnieRabbit1987 5 лет назад

Lmao

@adamethridge7824 5 лет назад

Alexei Jp nah general Mattis!

@alecs5394 5 лет назад

"What keeps you awake at night? Nothing. I keep others awake at night" - General "Mad dog" Mattis

@shibby7667 5 лет назад

Yo foreal why u have to make fun of them

@WetCanoot 5 лет назад

Fun fact! That green photo of the hunched over guy is actually a hilarious photo of a drunk guy that shit his pants :D

@sethmillan8627 5 лет назад

Ethan Smith I can never take this image seriously now. Thank you for the chuckles.

@FIRSTNAMELASTNAME-zt4kf 5 лет назад

Great youve ruined this story for me 😂

@dahut95 5 лет назад

@@sethmillan8627 what it 72

@savy8295 5 лет назад

That's maker it less scary

@sethmillan8627 5 лет назад

Jaime Bond what?

@shroomyk 5 лет назад

Who the heck microwaves a frozen pizza? That's what ovens are for, you madman.

@rosesluckrideart 5 лет назад

What an absolute mad lad

@greywalker505 5 лет назад

What a *deviant!*

@justintimely6921 5 лет назад

I do

@cadenceclark3026 5 лет назад

Yeah, that’s the focal point of this story. Sure 😂

@decaf4450 5 лет назад

accidentally microwaving a pizza will burn it to a crisp, sadly I've experienced this more than once

@leaflikesfrogs1624 5 лет назад

“When I heard the first bangs on the front door-“*upbeat ad starts playing*

@Knitmur 5 лет назад

I noticed that too xD

@marmalademagnus4174 4 года назад

them damn salesmen 🙄

@SabbyNeko 4 года назад

RAID: SHADOW LEGENDS

@omnicrunch 4 года назад

the Raid: Shadow Legends ads now brought to your home, personally, mosly between 1 AM - 5 AM, in your house, I mean basement...

@kryoruleroftheninthcircleo4151 3 года назад

They’re selling death. It’s free! Only costs you your life!

@IsaiahMemes 5 лет назад

It's LeBron james he just wants to give you a Sprite cranberry

@mrroy678 4 года назад

Ima let him I now gimmie that sprite cranberry

@arkhane2495 4 года назад

I'm thinking of that creepy sprite cranberry game

@joshuayoung6683 4 года назад

@@mrroy678 0

@DragonSlayer-cp4qz 3 года назад

No no no no no NO NO NO NO NO NOOOOO AHHHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOO

@Goober_gobbler 3 года назад

The fact there is a comment on this from 2 weeks ago.

@colemarie9262 5 лет назад

FYI for anyone watching- you don’t need any evidence to report an incident to the police, or to file a report really. And it’s a stupid idea not to in a situation like this- if the person was to break in at a later date there is a record of you reporting them, and that helps. If they break into a neighborhood home and hurt someone, you’re a witness, and that report proves that you saw the person when you say you did prior to knowing there was a crime, making you more legitimate as a witness. In any case, in real life, you can easily report this kind of stuff. (Side note- It’s not the same thing as snitching on kids smoking pot in the park, your home safety is a whole different ballgame.)

@grubbybum3614 4 года назад

But I really wanna snitch on those kids doing the mariwana.

@swaglevi4315 4 года назад

@@grubbybum3614 No bad

@TheGoatkage 4 года назад

I agree you don’t need evidence to file a report but if you got evidence, that makes it likely for the police to show up quicker and more cautious/concerned about your situation.

@Bleep831 4 года назад

Those meddling kids who keep taking weed in the park.

@HugoGojibiter 4 года назад

In fairness, the dude in the story wasn’t being hesitant because he didn’t think he could report it without evidence, he just figured they wouldn’t take it seriously. And I imagine that would be the case a lot of the time

@Hi-uv7nn 5 лет назад

“And I opened the door” he’s very smart

@sadisticgirl_ 4 года назад

Surprisingly that technique worked better than closing it lol

@ldzbeats5128 3 года назад

What an intellectual 😂

@LR-yc9gm 4 года назад

“When i heard the knock on the door, i could tell that ... Door Dash has the restaurants you crave at your fingertips” was a well-placed ad.

@RedOnly 2 года назад

A year later........ A total wine and more jingle 🤣🤣

@JudithLight84 5 лет назад

"The damned step creaked louder than a step ever has in the history of stairs!" I don't know why but this made me laugh

@blackoceancreativeuniverse 4 года назад

please check out "an Illustrated History of Stairs" in the "things you need knees for" section of you local ibrary!

@Mgrom-r7c 2 года назад

This reminds me of, “the strawiest straw man ever made of straw”

@cactusskin 5 лет назад

when you try to ignore the mormans knocking at your door

@dkro9634 5 лет назад

Stephen Fierro Jehovahs witnesses?

@Sienisota 4 года назад

No Mormons on my area, but oh, when the Jehovah's Witnesses come knocking... I suppose the difference is similar to Skinwalkers, Rakes and Wendigos... non-existent...

@jackheissler3121 3 года назад

They summon a demon

@kiralonely1307 2 года назад

@@Sienisota At best, very minimal. Technicalities moreso than any real differences. Most people will take them to be synonymous somewhat lol ^^;; analogy is very accurate tho lol

@micheleberg4922 5 лет назад

45:58 it mouthed “my house now boy”

@adamethridge7824 5 лет назад

Jorden Berg maybe but these ppl need to teach him the mean of sacrifice couple of claymores would fix this problem right up we got a Kong in the wire

@SenkaBandit 5 лет назад

Adam Ethridge don’t forget to add some kapkan traps and frost traps

@jeanniebosch3628 4 года назад

It really said...FINDERS KEEPERS!!!

@grace-4072 4 года назад

i accidentally pressed the timestamp and now i gotta find where i was 😂

@ChapoChaos 3 года назад

I’m imagining Arthur Morgan saying that

@AshWont 5 лет назад

It's just nosferatu chill lol all he wants to do is Flicker your lights

@The_Wallflower 4 года назад

Nosfuratoooooooo

@ragmenel 3 года назад

I love this community

@llogiesagh_1023 3 года назад

What is a nosferatu

@BunPlus11 3 года назад

@@llogiesagh_1023 he's from a old scary movie (I think) and they had a spongebob episode where he appeared flickering the lights

@BunPlus11 3 года назад

@@ragmenel me to

@ridanaushad3376 4 года назад

Everyone's Gangsta until he puts frozen pizza in *the microwave*

@spottiestbeef7791 3 года назад

I do it

@sugarrush9875 3 года назад

Depends on what kinda frozen pizza If its microwaveable, eh If it isnt, excuse me what the f u c k

@justaduck3615 3 года назад

@@sugarrush9875 The real question is how he managed to fit a whole ass pizza in his microwave.

@sugarrush9875 3 года назад

@@justaduck3615 When I say microwavable i mean the small pizzas meant for microwaves:>

@nonamenotrace4333 3 года назад

Microwave oven maybe?

@spicybiscuit5530 5 лет назад

45:58 "It's free real estate"

@TheInstinctWithinV2 5 лет назад

Omg yes! 😆

@dinkelheit88 5 лет назад

Spicy Biscuit the wink wonk he does only makes it better

@abbinormal407 5 лет назад

...take your thumbs-up and go.

@centaurus5597 5 лет назад

Everybody gangsta until the £¥€¶∆ start walkin'.

@snekysnek3976 4 года назад

HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

@kathk7439 4 года назад

HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

@connor_bell 4 года назад

HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

@yheti3584 4 года назад

HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

@banfive1682 4 года назад

HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

@ShootingStarNeo 5 лет назад

"Oh yes I'm sure this will be a lovely little bedtime story to see me off to sleep," I said, for some reason, probably exhaustion. I'm a fool. I am Boo Boo, the Fool, it is me.

@booboobeebee6423 4 года назад

No I'm booboo the fool. Same story

@bog_witch.official5151 3 года назад

Yeah I did it too. It's now four am and I'm regretting my choices.

@Ashekier 3 года назад

We are all foolish enough to listen to this at the darkest hours of the night. But I am the only one who lies in the comfort and protection of a blanket fort

@bog_witch.official5151 3 года назад

@@Ashekier wow subtle flex

@Idolstarcynder 3 года назад

Iggy, is that you?

@lsbullen8444 5 лет назад

I don’t know how people can be disappointed in that ending. It leaves room for you to interpret it how you like. For me he is obviously trapped in the basement in his dreams, he still lives a life away from the house, but all his dreams are in that basement, with others that have found themselves in the same situation. As for the creature, perhaps it was trying to help him all along. It knows about the things in the basement so it try’s to scare people away before it’s too late. It was injured by something to be bleeding, it is the only thing keeping whatever is causing the horror in the basement, in the basement.

@ChihuahuainaTrenchcoat 5 лет назад

Interesting take

@j-dawg4774 2 года назад

That actually makes sense and honestly makes me feel better, I was like "The dude made the smartest decision I've ever heard in any creepypasta: He got the heck out of there despite not knowing what was going on, he wanted to live out his years with his wife instead of being a victem to whatever horrors were in the basement"

@NailHeavenAshford 2 года назад

It’s probably bleeding because it smashed a door in with its bare hands.

@twilightsparkle75 Год назад

@@NailHeavenAshford nah it doesnt say bloody scratches along the door. i figured it started to bleed when the screech happened

@twilightsparkle75 Год назад

what confused me about the end was he said "i wake up in the basement"

@pabloborroto4692 5 лет назад

Finally a story in which the police arent completely incompetent Like really even in some of the good ones the police dosent help mostly because people seem to not realize that some investigations can go on for decades without any real or mayor progress, it can be frustrating sometimes but at least here the police ACTUALLY does the best they can, its made better since the writer dosent imply that it all they did

@arksurvivor7372 5 лет назад

I agree I love it when a Police team actually tries stuff and it fails over there being no police involvement (Unless it's something like the story is from the view of a child and they didn't call the police)

@gman3664 5 лет назад

More of a stereotype than incompetence

@MajinMist603 5 лет назад

At this point were I see that it is at my door step trying to get in is the time to move a few states away maybe country's

@greywalker505 5 лет назад

And it ups the tension when the police is actually competent and does everything they’re supposed to, but the case still stumps them.

@johnblake5688 5 лет назад

yeah, this story's pretty unrealistic in that regard

@xpikapeltx22 5 лет назад

The voice acting was spot on. Appreciate the audible horror.

@pasteldreams5413 4 года назад

MrCreepyPasta is the king of voice acting >:)

@xavierhernandez-dones4497 3 года назад

@@pasteldreams5413 so is it like a team who does the voice acting or only him? If only him, the voice acting is incredible for a single person

@brotherhoodofsteelsoldier1356 3 года назад

@@xavierhernandez-dones4497 it’s only him

@bralynnethomas9170 5 лет назад

Every time I listen to these stories I feel like someone is behind me

@GhostRider747 5 лет назад

Bralynne Thomas same

@C-13770 5 лет назад

I am

@autumnc3531 5 лет назад

Soon as I read this comment I had to look over my shoulder.

@C-13770 5 лет назад

@@bralynnethomas9170 who was that to?

@bralynnethomas9170 5 лет назад

@runningwolfpup1293 5 лет назад

This is like the fourth time I've listened to this, and because of the way that you narrate it, it never gets old. This is probably one of my favorites of your stories.

@Saiyan_Goku 4 года назад

Hollyleaf killer of blonde edgelord yo can you explain the ending to me?

@humanbean6672 4 года назад

yes!! this and tales from the gas station are my favourites

@youtubeconnollyfamily 3 года назад

My favorite is my friend visited a alternate reality. But this one is definitely in my top five

@zeshanmushtaq5520 3 года назад

Hey, man I love this story, do you know any similar to this in nature / storytelling

@MySomberNights 2 года назад

The wendigo/skin walker stories are always a treat.

@realdaggerman105 4 года назад

‘I don’t know what to do anymore’ *ominous nothingness noise* Ad: EaRs FeElInG bLoCkEd?

@christopherhancock1723 5 лет назад

This channel is so much fun to listen to, the stories on here feel so much more creepy and scary than the predictable stuff Hollywood produces these days.

@Kezz00 5 лет назад

Well then, watch Mr.nightmare, Creepsmcpasta, Unit #522, and Lets read. at least my favorites haha you've probably heard of them though.

@d0p3l 5 лет назад

ofc this guy is a gentile

@youtubeconnollyfamily 3 года назад

Kelv mr creeps is better.. but hey that’s just my opinion

@youtubeconnollyfamily 3 года назад

I listen to this channel and Mr. creeps. They are both the best...creeps loads videos every single day

@youtubeconnollyfamily 3 года назад

If you have not listen to “my friend has visited a alternate reality“ from this person make sure you do. To me it’s the best pasta story of all time

@NotA3xCombo 5 лет назад

It all started with the Pizza.

@truefroggod5954 3 года назад

True

@kiralonely1307 2 года назад

This is all his punishment for microwaving a damn pizza.

@Annihilation_Studios 4 месяца назад

@@kiralonely1307 mini pizza 🤤

@pippo17173 5 лет назад

Ugh is my daughter making milk shakes again? Goddamn boys.

@greywalker505 5 лет назад

Normally I would facepalm and cringe, but that’s actually pretty funny.

@cameronangel1013 4 года назад

Knew something brought him to the damn yard

@Chronicler9 3 года назад

i LOVE that this comment exists and that I saw it (and that there's a whole generation that won't even know what the heck it means). Thank you, kind @AnimeWolfgamer

@quake1650 5 лет назад

"SCP-096 HAS BEEN SUCCESSFULLY CONTAINED"

@-Samus-Aran- 4 года назад

What story is this a reference to? I'm interested in hearing it if it's related to this one

@TheManBehindTheSlaughter6669 3 года назад

@@-Samus-Aran- you don't know about SCP-096 aka shyguy?

@dathmach8745 3 года назад

@@-Samus-Aran- The SCP foundation is a whole other thing

@dorklardent. 4 года назад

I love how he mentions only once that he has a son and this thing never puts him in any danger

@damkylan3 4 года назад

Sun, not son.

@amandahuddleston7070 5 лет назад

This is one of the ones that terrify me.

@gevontoledo9188 5 лет назад

It’s October, time for his channel to blow up

@siedzepodkocem624 3 года назад

Doot

@matchboxcharm9290 5 лет назад

This is the best reading I’ve ever heard in my life the panic in his voice before when the guy comes in the house

@nicholasmorgan7609 5 лет назад

The ending felt rushed, like he didn't know how to end it. Bad enough when that happens with regular creepypasta but a MAJOR disappointment on a series. Also, what happened to their son?

@JRMAV1 5 лет назад

Nicholas Morgan Don’t remember them having a son? Where time wise is he?

@nicholasmorgan7609 5 лет назад

@@JRMAV1 It's in part one, when the narrator mentions he gets home long after his wife and the son, but it might have been "the Sun" and I misunderstood

@Coffeebean1985 5 лет назад

He did great, do a better version of it and show him how it is done if it bothers you so much.

@lukesanroman3494 5 лет назад

Nicholas Morgan It was "Sun" I think

@copper589 5 лет назад

You're not the only one, I was wondering where their child was this whole story till this comment

@casualnobody8557 5 лет назад

Okay, uh, the bit where he ran at the door? That actually got me. >_

@_baki-hanma_ 4 года назад

Same

@ssnakebbite. 4 года назад

this one genuinely creeped me out!! and after nearly 6 or 7 years of listening to creepypastas, it gets gradually harder and harder to get scared. this narration, story and background music really is a work of art. thank you :)

@ltu_domo3860 5 лет назад

help there is a tall shaved man in my yard please help!!!!!!!

@midnightgaming4100 4 года назад

Frank Wilcox yo chill it’s just Johnny sins here to lay the pipe

@kryoruleroftheninthcircleo4151 3 года назад

Is he wearing a suit?

@kiralonely1307 2 года назад

at least he shaved before showing up maybe that's just what bigfoot looks like when he shaves and gets all dressed up to impress.

@omega_acxd 5 лет назад

"I SMELL PENNIES"

@LibraGamesUnlimited 5 лет назад

I actually thought that maybe the 'creature' was a guy with his vocal cords cut trying to warn the couple about bad people in the basement, maybe looking for something hidden in there they were trying to steal or something. Boy was I wrong. :)

@rangelancer3776 5 лет назад

Chin chin has returned.

@bunnybaby975 5 лет назад

RANGELANCER 😂😂😂😂

@cosmictrashbin89 5 лет назад

T H E C H R O M O S O M E S

@justagamer6188 5 лет назад

Hey b0ss

@Saiyan_Goku 4 года назад

RANGELANCER wut

@lordlammi1562 4 года назад

Chin Chin demands a sacrifice!

@skyenellums308 5 лет назад

Can we get both this story and “my friend has been living in an alternate reality” on the podcast as well? I don’t have the means to listen to these stories on RU-vid while at work and that’s basically where I live lol

@iamzesty 5 лет назад

The dude in the backyard description sounds like The Rake.

@victoriadalsoren4255 5 лет назад

Scariest part of this is microwaving a frozen pizza. 🤢

@dylanking9646 3 года назад

how he even fit a whole pizza in the microwave bruv

@bamb1etta_basterb1ne 3 года назад

@@dylanking9646 slice of pizza

@Annihilation_Studios 10 месяцев назад

It was a mini pizza

@dantecaputo2629 4 года назад

The twist is it’s just a really dedicated Amazon delivery man with really bad social anxiety.

@shoelaces9857 5 лет назад

I love how much emotion you put in these, I can feel the fear, sadness, and awful sounds throughout it. Man, your so talented! Gives me chills

@PortgasDAce-us3dg 5 лет назад

45:55 he mouthed "it's all oger now"

@pabloborroto4692 5 лет назад

its is

@gothboi4ever 5 лет назад

“Mah swamp!”

@benmccarthy3177 5 лет назад

It's never oger

@omegamysterio3701 3 года назад

Shrek is love... Shrek is life.

@jjrobotnik 3 года назад

The creater just comes out and says that the monsters name was shrek

@AsherIsLame 5 лет назад

I looked back at my phone to the second picture and looked away immediately then looked back picked up my phone and said "THANKS FOR THE FECKIN NIGHTMARES" then I typed this comment

@llogiesagh_1023 3 года назад

Yep agree

@rebeccaspookyduran7864 5 лет назад

25:29 OH GOD DONT LET THE RAKE IN! you startled me with that sudden outburst! 😅

@omallie360 4 года назад

I gotta to say ... I just LOVVVVVEEEE the way you read. The others seem to use some online reader or smthg cuz their sentences always sound continual, the emotions don't match the stories, it's refreshing get hear that some ppl do still talk with punctuation and all that, lol.

@Snoozing.inky69 4 года назад

I've listened to so many creepypastas I've become almost numb to the "scary" parts of the stories. THIS ONE HOWEVER!!! IT WILL ALWAYS GET ME! PART 2'S ENDING!!!! I love it so much

@matthewtynan6562 5 лет назад

Wow just wow, you sir have a very great talent for story telling. Multiple times in this story I felt dread come over me and was actually unsettled. Well done sir well done indeed

@Mrfritz590 5 лет назад

Deliberately bad story summation: the world's weirdest home security system.

@tam7933 4 года назад

I usually like scary stories but this scared the shit out of me!

@tam7933 4 года назад

Lesi PlaysHacks Yoo sup dude

@nataliecameron 4 года назад

This had the same spooky vibes as "I'm a 911 operator, and I just had the most terrifying call"

@lezloart4597 5 лет назад

I just wanna say your voice is amazing 🖤

@cloroxisrelevant3614 5 лет назад

i sleep to these. i lovegetting lost in a story anf letting it slowly seep inyo my dreams.

@bianca4210 5 лет назад

Clorox Is Relevant Finally someone understands

@tonycalzone3517 5 лет назад

Bro same

@just_going_mads 5 лет назад

You can fall asleep while listening to these, but commenting whilst asleep is pretty ill advised. But you do you.

@norrix5122 5 лет назад

This is by far my favorite channel for creepypasta. 10/10 have already told all of my friends

@infestedribcage 4 года назад

i’m lucky i have insomnia and don’t have to fall asleep to my imagination after listening to this... maybe having my eyes open would be scarier but, i don’t know, sleeping to the thought of someone lurking around my home does not sit well in the pit of my stomach

@megamovieman101 4 года назад

I really liked the story until the weird ending. I was all for this couple having a happy ending and escaping, but there's too much that just isn't addressed. The police covering everything up, the tall man, the voices in the basement (I assume they're the voices of people who lived in the house before but who knows?), and the game cameras. But it did a very good job of building tension throughout, and I really bought into the relationship between the couple.

@michaelh9649 2 года назад

Was looking for this exact comment. You’re spot on. Waaay too much was left unresolved.

@brennanclegg315 2 года назад

Part of it being unresolved showed the true fear going on

@brennanclegg315 2 года назад

It’s kind of like the movie the thing, the less you know about the monster, the more terrifying it is

@bigbrohybrid Год назад

I personally think that a shadow of everyone who lived in that house gets created each time the homeowner and family moves out. That OP and his wife actually did leave and move on to build a new life together but their fear and trauma manifested selves were not so lucky. The second OP said “Last night I woke up in the basement-“ him and his wife had completely expelled their trauma 100% and had moved on 400+ miles away, but the leftovers had nowhere else to be other than the place where they were first made….. In that creepy house they were made to fear. It’s just my interpretation. A type of spirit in middle-eastern folklore I’ve heard about are Daevas and this story reminds me of those.

@jackdecheck7660 5 лет назад

Dude I was listening at update 3 with the picture of the rake and right when the detective says he didn’t leave I saw the rakes behind the rake and SCARED THE SHIT OUT OF ME

@CC-vz5cv 5 лет назад

Lol

@etcetera1995 5 лет назад

Oof, it's been a long time since I was actually shaken by something in a story, but the sudden shouting about the banging on the door? *Ooh.*

@duffinthemuffin5792 4 года назад

This creepypasta I could never really forget for some reason

@Terf1988 4 года назад

This and SearchAndRescue's works were great

@colbanjohnson5086 4 года назад

When he panicked saying it was running at the door followed by the banging, despite knowing something like that would happen I still got goosebumps

@tarawilliams1858 4 года назад

So as I turn into my own driveway we get to the "we will never leave leaveleave neverleave..." officially creepedthefck out. I listen to an obscene amount of Creepypasta and this one line has got to be the freakiest line I've heard yet. (Also, the loudest stair in the history of stairs one of the funniest. It's all about balance.😉)

@wolfe-6786 5 лет назад

I could only think of one thing this whole time. JUST MOVE OUT??

@MisterAcker 5 лет назад

We never leave

@AshleyAshleyAshley395 5 лет назад

I’ve been thinking the same thing for the last 26 minutes and 24 seconds. Why are you still there. Fuck the cameras and police. JUST MOVE !!!

@Hi-uv7nn 5 лет назад

missashleyowens ikr it’s not like you have any friends in that area anyway

@lKlynI 4 года назад

Well think realistically. It’s not so easy to just up and leave.

@sadisticgirl_ 4 года назад

@@lKlynI it's also not easy to get murdered by a creature

@MrsGerardWayForever 5 лет назад

This is what idubbbz must feel like tracking all those squirrels

@miseryworld_8677 5 лет назад

The entire beginning is my life.

@pleasedepositfivecoins7858 5 лет назад

roses are red, violets are blue, spoopy season is coming soon, this channel is gonna get hella views

@mmmm69420 5 лет назад

"Spoopy season" ahahaha

@sethmillan8627 5 лет назад

RexyArts That didn’t rhyme, but it was still funny.

@snekysnek3976 4 года назад

IS SPOOKY SEASON BOIS!!!!!!!!!!

@starlightassassin5592 4 года назад

That was one great of a ryme! If only had the time to make my own, that would be neat for me.

@kaiwyatt8465 4 года назад

No matter how many times i listen to this story, I still get chills. MrCreepyPasta is the greatest story teller ever.

@Elite04232 4 года назад

I swear to god every single time a ad breaks into the video, it completely wakes me up and it runs the mood.

@weaponisedfarts1382 5 лет назад

I feel that this story was ended too quickly. There's still a lot to explore, the basement, the creature itself, and what was on the game cameras.

@oren1305 9 месяцев назад

Super late, but sometimes leaving some things up to the readers imagination is better than overexplaining everything.

@weaponisedfarts1382 9 месяцев назад

@@oren1305 True.

@JasonDevil06 4 года назад

Bald, tall, skinny, strong enough to break down a door and made some kind of chant with a broken voice and shrieks It definitely sounded like a Wendigo

@zodiacthriller6094 2 года назад

Sounds like me when I have a bad trip

@Ribs_return Год назад

learn scp 096 right now.

@ghettobitch1348 5 лет назад

i fucking love how you really get into the characters of the stories.

@isaacalsop4209 5 лет назад

Damn thirty seconds in and you've made me hungry.

@goetiancalamity1158 5 лет назад

I thought the opening was Havana XD

@dario.162 5 лет назад

Don’t do it im a virgin

@cadenceclark3026 5 лет назад

. Fat mood

@JaseyStudios 5 лет назад

69.. nice

@lampmb1580 4 года назад

Your pic is too good for this post

@swordscar6278 4 года назад

not after he is done with you

@nelliesilvers1210 4 года назад

That'll be the worse thing to say..make them want it more. 'No Entry' signs are enticing and inviting to some😈

@gma_x4lucky91 4 года назад

I truly love the way you read/ present each story. You are my favorite one to listen to on Creepy pasta.

@Gagirl-82 2 года назад

Wow. I’ve had this in my playlist for a while and finally listened to it. I absolutely loved it. It was so creepy and suspenseful. Thanks MCP for the great narration and thanks to the author ✍️

@Safactamas 5 лет назад

Wasn't a fan of the ending but great horror story tho do more like this please

@luisroman9294 5 лет назад

Love your narrations MCP, cant wait for more Tales from The Gas Station! Definitely wasn't expecting it to sprang towards the house that actually had me shaking!

@crumbledcookie27 3 года назад

25:21 my heart jumped into my goddamn throat, you caught me off guard good sir also can i just say i love how you put actual emotion into your voice, its like im hearing the person who went through the experience tell the story to me themselves. i love how you narrate, it pulls me into the story so much better than the other narrators who sound like they just got back from their weekly insomniacs meeting, keep it up!

@Tarzan861 3 года назад

I love the emotion you put in the story when reading much better then other scary story channels

@SuppaDuppayee 5 лет назад

Wait.... I thought this man was a normal thing to see?...

@fearadin 5 лет назад

Loved this series Mr.Creepypasta!!

@Cheshire_Ace 4 года назад

These are the creepypasta's that scare me b/c you can easily put your self in to these situations

@alexhearn8083 4 года назад

This by far is one of the scariest stories by your channel the music alone gave me goosebumps well done.

@minecraft-hz6bo 5 лет назад

thank you mrcreepypasta, very cool!

@valentine_val5945 4 года назад

Sir, you got a rake. No doubt about it

@ep3389 3 года назад

It's fake, if this was real he would have all the vids on here

@valentine_val5945 3 года назад

@@ep3389 you dont think i know that? Of course its fake.

@ep3389 3 года назад

@@valentine_val5945 no doubt about it

@decagonibuswastaken7503 5 лет назад

I was watching this at 3 in the morning, very spoopy. Then ads hit and Phil Swift shows me flex tape. 10/10 would flex tape again

@aldeenztheman 4 года назад

This has to be my favorite mrcreepypasta video ever.

@moviegirlaka 5 лет назад

Did he just repeated a line twice? And when is he going to do more cooking with MCP?

@J2982able 5 лет назад

He does these recordings in one continuous take, without edits. If he doesn't feel a specific line's delivery, he re-does it. You're not crazy.

@C-13770 5 лет назад

He did it twice.

@Miss_Eldritch 5 лет назад

@@J2982able that isn't true, you can notice when he breathes it cuts sometimes

@deutsch-amerikanisch8281 4 года назад

@@Miss_Eldritch What he meant to say is MCP records without stoping, and then comes in after and removes the parts he doesn't like. During this recording he repated a line he didn't like and forgot to cut it out of the final product.

@tessa8175 5 лет назад

Ooof 🤭 when ever I listen to mrcreepypasta I turn on the lights I feel like someone is watching me

@decagonibuswastaken7503 5 лет назад

If ya turn on the lights then everything knows your there. If you turn them off you cannot see them coming

@micheleberg4922 5 лет назад

Love this story so far!

@sasorispupet 4 года назад

If this is a new rake story, i'm loving it.

@matchboxcharm9290 5 лет назад

You are the best at this I love you man

@insertyourfeelingshere8106 5 лет назад

This has gotta be the 4th time I’ve heard this story and each time it’s bye a different person

@joejones8454 4 года назад

Chills man just chills one of the best ones you have done💯

@EmmyUnderWater 5 лет назад

This is probably my favourite story that you’ve read. You did a great job! Hecka spoopy 👍🏻 ❤️

@pinksprinkless2532 4 года назад

Mother: Lock the doors when I'm out, okay? Me: Yeah yeah, sure. Me: *listens to this creepypasta* Mary: never leave. we never leave. we. never. leave leave never leave. Me: well shit Me: *locks doors*