i think make the music match what's happening more and you should utilize the game's sfx, if you don't wanna mic up it's fine, you can just add texts on the screen. This is mostly a ganking montage? i don't see much of you progging, maybe add more npc interactions, math text book gameplay, random encounters, idk. Chill video tho!
BRUHHHH i want to do this mage build looks sick but idk what it is man i need to get off CenturyLink because i cant even do sharko with 3 mb internet speed worst part is im with copper wire so if rains i got no internet what im saying is, that the kick every time in any server just doesn't show and i take a huge chunk of damage even with lag comp on its insane how bad my internet is man.